June 16, 2025
In my holidays, I traveled to the beach with my friends. We visited Benidorm. We drove to the beach during One hour. We played football there and We windsurfed too.We went to rested and to get away from the routine. I could spend time with my friends and We had fun everyday and We enjoyed our holidays.
My holidays
i just took away the “s” as it talks about one holiday
Induring my holidays, I traveled to the beach with my friends.
i changed “in” to “during” to help show it was through the whole time
We visited Benidorm.
We drove to the beach during One hour.
We played football there and We windsurfed too.We went to rested and to get away from the routine.
rested is in the past tense but so is went, it makes the most sense to use one thing in the past tense to show you did it already
I could spend time with my friends and We had fun everyday and We enjoyed our holidays.
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well done!!! this made alot of sense before and with only some small changes you will become so good just like you already are!!!!
In myDuring the holidays, I traveled to the beach with my friends.
Or "During my holiday".
"During the holidays" sounds like you went during a time where everyone typically goes on holiday, such as during school holidays, or the end of the year.
"During my holiday" just refers to a time that you specifically took off to take a holiday.
We drove to the beach during Owhich took one hour.
We played football there and Wwe windsurfed too. We went to rested and to get away from the routine back home.
I would word the second sentence as "We wanted to rest and get away from the routine of life back home"
I couldwas able to spend time with my friends and Wwe had fun everyday and We enjoyed our holidays.
Using "I did this.. and I/we did this.. and I/we did this..." too many times in a row sounds a bit unnatural, so I combined the last two phrases.
My holidays My holiday i just took away the “s” as it talks about one holiday |
In my holidays, I traveled to the beach with my friends.
Or "During my holiday". "During the holidays" sounds like you went during a time where everyone typically goes on holiday, such as during school holidays, or the end of the year. "During my holiday" just refers to a time that you specifically took off to take a holiday.
i changed “in” to “during” to help show it was through the whole time |
We visited Benidorm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We drove to the beach during One hour. We drove to the beach This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We played football there and We windsurfed too.We went to rested and to get away from the routine. We played football there and I would word the second sentence as "We wanted to rest and get away from the routine of life back home" We played football there and We windsurfed too.We went to rest rested is in the past tense but so is went, it makes the most sense to use one thing in the past tense to show you did it already |
I could spend time with my friends and We had fun everyday and We enjoyed our holidays. I Using "I did this.. and I/we did this.. and I/we did this..." too many times in a row sounds a bit unnatural, so I combined the last two phrases. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Muy holidays |
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