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May 19, 2021

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Music Festival

I love to go to a music festival. Because of COVID-19, I couldn't have been to the festival. But, a lot of countries have plans to hold it. In Japan, we are still in a pandemic, so we cannot make the plan. I'm going to study in the US, so I may be able to go to the festival. On top of that, I watched a story which is a music live at Miami on Instagram. I was surprised that people didn't wear a mask. it is far from the Japanese situation. And they looked so fun, so I want to go to a music festival more and more.

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Music Festival

I love to go to a music festivals.

Because of COVID-19, I couldn't haven't been to theable to go to festivals.

But, a lot of countries havare plansning to hold itfestivals anyway.

In Japan, we are still in a pandemic, so we cannot make the plando this.

I'm going to study in the US, so I may be able to go to the festivals.

On top of that, I watched a story which is a music live atith live music in Miami on Instagram.

Or "I watched an Instagram story"...

I was surprised that people didweren't wearing a mask.

Me too :/
Use the past continuous for descriptions ("weren't wearing," rather than "didn't wear")

it is farThis is very different from the Japanese situation.

And tThey looked solike they were having fun, so I want to go to a music festivals more and more.

Music Festival


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I love to go to a music festival.


I love to go to a music festivals.

Because of COVID-19, I couldn't have been to the festival.


Because of COVID-19, I couldn't haven't been to theable to go to festivals.

But, a lot of countries have plans to hold it.


But, a lot of countries havare plansning to hold itfestivals anyway.

In Japan, we are still in a pandemic, so we cannot make the plan.


In Japan, we are still in a pandemic, so we cannot make the plando this.

I'm going to study in the US, so I may be able to go to the festival.


I'm going to study in the US, so I may be able to go to the festivals.

On top of that, I watched a story which is a music live at Miami on Instagram.


On top of that, I watched a story which is a music live atith live music in Miami on Instagram.

Or "I watched an Instagram story"...

I was surprised that people didn't wear a mask.


I was surprised that people didweren't wearing a mask.

Me too :/ Use the past continuous for descriptions ("weren't wearing," rather than "didn't wear")

it is far from the Japanese situation.


it is farThis is very different from the Japanese situation.

And they looked so fun, so I want to go to a music festival more and more.


And tThey looked solike they were having fun, so I want to go to a music festivals more and more.

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