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March 28, 2021

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Multivitamin

Until this year, I used to take loads of different kinds of supplements everyday. It’s because I was always having health issues that couldn’t be resolved with prescribed medication since I was young. I felt my symptoms were relieved every time I took these supplements.

Vitamin C, B, A, D,..

My mom was worried that I was taking too many of it, and when we once went to the doctor’s, she asked him if it was okay for me to be taking supplements like this. He said it was fine, but recommended me to just take a multivitamin instead.

‘Why haven't I thought of that, before?’ lol.

So once I ran out of the supplements I had, I bought this bottle of multivitamin whose ingredients were basically what I had been taking separately.

It was life changing. So convenient. I guess I must have believed I was doing better to myself by taking variety of supplements, but that wasn't it.

I’m also trying to live more minimalistic, which definitely seems to be a trend these days. After I throw more stuff out of my room, I will feel so much better and feel organized.

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Multivitamin

Until this year, I used to take loads of different kinds of supplements everyday.

It’s because I was always havinghave had health issues, that couldn’t be resolved with prescribed medication, since I was young.

I felt that my symptoms were relieved every time I took these supplements.

Vitamin C, B, A, D,..

My mom was worried that I was taking too many of it, and, when we once went to the doctors, she asked him if it was okay for me to be taking supplements
them
like this.

Doctors is the plural word, the s is not possessive - although it is plural you don’t really say doctor unless you are talking about one person in particular

He said it was fine, but recommended me to just take a multivitamin instead.

‘Why haven't I thought of that, before?’ lol.

So, once I ran out of the supplements I had, I bought this bottle of multivitamin whoses, that’s ingredients were basically what I had been taking separately.

It was life changing.

So convenient.

I guess, I must have believed Iit was doing better to myself by takingtake a variety of supplements, but that wasn't it.

I’m also trying to live more minimalistic, which definitely seems to be a trend these days.

After I throw more stuff out of my room, I will feel so much better and feel organized.

Multivitamin


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Until this year, I used to take loads of different kinds of supplements everyday.


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It’s because I was always having health issues that couldn’t be resolved with prescribed medication since I was young.


It’s because I was always havinghave had health issues, that couldn’t be resolved with prescribed medication, since I was young.

I felt my symptoms were relieved every time I took supplements.


Vitamin C, B, A, D,..


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My mom was worried that I was taking too many of it, and when we once went to the doctor’s, she asked him if it was okay for me to be taking supplements like this.


My mom was worried that I was taking too many of it, and, when we once went to the doctors, she asked him if it was okay for me to be taking supplements
them
like this.

Doctors is the plural word, the s is not possessive - although it is plural you don’t really say doctor unless you are talking about one person in particular

He said it was fine, but recommended me to just take a multivitamin instead.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why haven't I thought of that, before?


lol.


So once I ran out of supplements, I bought this bottle of multivitamin whose ingredients were basically what I had been taking separately.


It was life changing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So convenient.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I guess I must have believed I was doing better to myself by taking variety of supplements, but that wasn't it.


I guess, I must have believed Iit was doing better to myself by takingtake a variety of supplements, but that wasn't it.

I’m also trying to live more minimalistic which definitely seems to be a trend these days.


After I throw more stuff out of my room, I will feel so much better and feel organized.


After I throw more stuff out of my room, I will feel so much better and feel organized.

I felt my symptoms were relieved every time I took these supplements.


I felt that my symptoms were relieved every time I took these supplements.

‘Why haven't I thought of that, before?’ lol.


‘Why haven't I thought of that, before?’ lol.

So once I ran out of the supplements I had, I bought this bottle of multivitamin whose ingredients were basically what I had been taking separately.


So, once I ran out of the supplements I had, I bought this bottle of multivitamin whoses, that’s ingredients were basically what I had been taking separately.

I’m also trying to live more minimalistic, which definitely seems to be a trend these days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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