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kikokun

Sept. 28, 2025

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Mt. Fuji and the Suruga-wan Bay

I am heading to my parents' home from now on. The house is 260 km away. I am worried about my mother, who can hardly walk.
Apart from that, I’d like to take a bath with a view of the ocean.
I've just found an ideal place in Yaizu City while searching online now.
I am expecting to overlook the view of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.


今日は実家に帰省する。実家と言っても260km離れている。母も高齢でいよいよ歩けなくなってきているらしい。心配だ。
それとは別に途中で海が見える温泉にぜひとも入りたいと思っている。ちょうど今ネットで絶好の場所を見つけた。そこからは富士山と海が見渡せるようだ。期待している。

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Mt. Fuji and the Suruga-wan Bay

Wan 湾 means bay, so Suruga-wan Bay is redundant.

I am heading to my parents' home fromright now on.

The house is 260 km awayfrom here.

I am expecting to overlook theit has views of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.

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I sympathize with worrying about ones parents!

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kikokun

Sept. 30, 2025

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Thank you for your corrections and warm coment.

I am heading to my parents' home from now on.

I am on my way to my parents' home.

I am expecting to overlook theget a good view of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.

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kikokun

Sept. 30, 2025

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Thank you!!

Mt. Fuji and the Suruga-wan Bay


Mt. Fuji and the Suruga-wan Bay

Wan 湾 means bay, so Suruga-wan Bay is redundant.

I am heading to my parents' home from now on.


I am heading to my parents' home from now on.

I am on my way to my parents' home.

I am heading to my parents' home fromright now on.

The house is 260 km away.


The house is 260 km awayfrom here.

I am worried about my mother, who can hardly walk.


Apart from that, I’d like to take a bath with a view of the ocean.


I've just found an ideal place in Yaizu City while searching online now.


I am expecting to overlook the view of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.


I am expecting to overlook theget a good view of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.

I am expecting to overlook theit has views of both Mt.Fuji and the ocean.

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