April 12, 2025
Mr. Budi Work Diligently
Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi had woken up and prepared to go to market. He is a vegetable seller that have been selling for twenty years. Using his old motorcycle, he picked up a fresh variety of vegetables from his family's farm to the traditional market in the city.
Mr. Budi is very popular among sellers because of his warmth and honesty. He always gives prices wisely and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality. Many regular customers only buy from Mr. Budi because they believe him.
Yet he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's will is never surrender. He believes diligence is the key to a happy and meaningful life. After finishing selling, he usually goes home for a moment before helping his wife on the farm.
Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived with gratitude and happiness.
Setiap pagi, sebelum matahari terbit, Pak Budi sudah bangun dan bersiap-siap untuk pergi ke pasar. Ia adalah seorang pedagang sayur yang sudah berjualan selama lebih dari dua puluh tahun. Dengan sepeda motornya yang tua, ia mengangkut berbagai macam sayuran segar dari kebun milik keluarganya ke pasar tradisional di kota.
Pak Budi sangat dikenal oleh para pembeli karena keramahan dan kejujurannya. Ia selalu memberikan harga yang adil dan memastikan bahwa dagangannya berkualitas baik. Banyak pelanggan tetap yang hanya membeli dari Pak Budi karena mereka percaya padanya.
Meskipun usianya tidak muda lagi, semangat Pak Budi tidak pernah pudar. Ia percaya bahwa bekerja keras adalah kunci untuk hidup yang bahagia dan bermakna. Setelah selesai berjualan, ia biasanya pulang untuk beristirahat sebentar sebelum membantu istrinya di kebun.
Setiap hari, Pak Budi menunjukkan bahwa dengan niat baik dan kerja keras, hidup bisa dijalani dengan penuh rasa syukur dan kebahagiaan.
Mr. Budi Works Diligently
Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi hads woken up and prepared to go to market.
He is a vegetable seller that haves been selling for twenty years.
Using his old motorcycle, he picked up a fresh variety of vegetables from his family's farm to the traditional market in the city.
Mr. Budi is very popular among sellers because of his warmth and honesty.
He always gives prices wisely and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality.
Many regular customers only buy from Mr. Budi because they believe him.
YetThough he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's will ihas never surrendered.
He believes diligence is the key to a happy and meaningful life.
After finishing selling, he usually goes home for a moment before helping his wife on the farm.
Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived with gratitude and happiness.
Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi hads woken up and prepared to go to market.
"had" would imply he doesn't anymore, like if if he was dead. Since he still does it, "has" should be used.
He is a vegetable seller that haves been selling for twenty years.
"have" is for plural in this case, since he is one vegetable seller, "has" is better.
Using his old motorcycle, he pickeds up a fresh variety of vegetables from his family's farm and brings them to the traditional market in the city.
He always gives prices wiselywell-considered prices and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality.
Guessing a bit as to what you meant by wisely. It's not really something that makes sense in context since you're talking about the sellers reactions. Maybe you meant fairly.
Many regular customers only buy from Mr. Budi because they believetrust him.
"believe him" would something we'd say about specific claims that Mr Budi makes. I think what you want here is "trust"
YetAlthough he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's (will is never surrender.indefatigable / will to continue is unrelenting)
Not sure if you wanted the verb "will" or noun "will" here, assuming you meant the noun here. This makes "surrender" a little weird, as surrender is an action a person takes, and not concepts like their will.
"indefatigable" is kind of a niche term in English, even some native speakers will not fully understand it, but it does fit your sentence very well. To use something else neds a longer sentence.
After finishing sellinghis work, he usually goes home for a moment before helping his wife on the farm.
Chaining two verbs like "finishing selling" sounds a little awkward.
Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived with gratitude and happinessly.
Mr. Budi Works Diligently
Third person singular form is works.
Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi hads woken up and prepared to go to market.
Think present perfect is better here.
He is a vegetable seller that have been selling vegetables for twenty years.
Using his old motorcycle, he pickeds up a fresh variety of fresh vegetables from his family's farm tofor the traditional market in the city.
Mr. Budi is very popular among sellbuyers because of his warmth and honesty.
Should it be 'buyers' here.
He always givesets his prices wisely and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality.
Many regular customers will only buy from Mr. Budi because they believe in him.
YetAlthough he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's will iswill never surrender.
will here is a noun in first instance and verb in the second.
He believes diligence is the key to a happy and meaningful life.
After finishing selling, he usually goes home for a momentand rests for a while, before helping his wife on the farm.
Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived with gratitude and happiness.
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Good work.
Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi had wowakens up and prepareds to go to the market.
Your story is in present tense, so wakes, prepares
He is a vegetable seller thatwho haves been selling for twenty years.
That- is for objectives
Who- for people
He/she/it- has
Using his old motorcycle, he picked uptransports a fresh variety of vegetables from his family's farm to the traditional market in the city.
Picked up- past tense. Meaning: only to take the vegetables, doesn't imply to take and deliver to the market
Mr. Budi is very popular among sellcustomers because of his warmth and honesty.
I'm not sure if u meant sellers or customers here, both are possible depending on what your meant
Sellers sell, customers buy
He always givesets prices wisely and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality.
To set price - fixed phrase
Many regular customers only bu buy exclusively from Mr. Budi because they believetrust him.
Yours sentence is grammatically correct too
Yetalthough he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's will is never surrender.
Although he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi never surrenders his determination. Present tense
Will never surrender- future
After finishing sellinghis sales, he usually goes home for a moment/ briefly before helping his wife on the farm.
/After selling
Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labhard work, life can be lived with gratitude and happiness.
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Very interesting!
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Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi had woken up and prepared to go to market. Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi Your story is in present tense, so wakes, prepares Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi ha Think present perfect is better here. Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi ha "had" would imply he doesn't anymore, like if if he was dead. Since he still does it, "has" should be used. Every morning, before sunrise, Mr. Budi ha |
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Using his old motorcycle, he picked up a fresh variety of vegetables from his family's farm to the traditional market in the city. Using his old motorcycle, he Picked up- past tense. Meaning: only to take the vegetables, doesn't imply to take and deliver to the market Using his old motorcycle, he pick Using his old motorcycle, he pick This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Mr. Budi is very popular among sellers because of his warmth and honesty. Mr. Budi is very popular among I'm not sure if u meant sellers or customers here, both are possible depending on what your meant Sellers sell, customers buy Mr. Budi is very popular among Should it be 'buyers' here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He always gives prices wisely and ensures that his merchandise is of good quality. He always To set price - fixed phrase He always He always gives Guessing a bit as to what you meant by wisely. It's not really something that makes sense in context since you're talking about the sellers reactions. Maybe you meant fairly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many regular customers only buy from Mr. Budi because they believe him. Many regular customers Yours sentence is grammatically correct too Many regular customers will only buy from Mr. Budi because they believe in him. Many regular customers only buy from Mr. Budi because they "believe him" would something we'd say about specific claims that Mr Budi makes. I think what you want here is "trust" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yet he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi's will is never surrender.
Although he is not young anymore, Mr. Budi never surrenders his determination. Present tense Will never surrender- future
will here is a noun in first instance and verb in the second.
Not sure if you wanted the verb "will" or noun "will" here, assuming you meant the noun here. This makes "surrender" a little weird, as surrender is an action a person takes, and not concepts like their will. "indefatigable" is kind of a niche term in English, even some native speakers will not fully understand it, but it does fit your sentence very well. To use something else neds a longer sentence.
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He believes diligence is the key to a happy and meaningful life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After finishing selling, he usually goes home for a moment before helping his wife on the farm. After finishing /After selling After finishing selling, he usually goes home After finishing Chaining two verbs like "finishing selling" sounds a little awkward. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived with gratitude and happiness. Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and This sentence has been marked as perfect! Every day, Mr. Budi shows that with good intentions and labor, life can be lived This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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