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hiratecs

Nov. 14, 2024

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Motorcycle Crash

Today, an accident took place on my street. I was in the bathroom so I couldn't see exactly what happened. I could only hear a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!". I think she was in the bar from across the street. After finishing, I went out to check out what happened. All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busier than before and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later. It was a violent crash of motorcycles. I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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Today, an accident took place on my street.

I was in the bathroom so I couldn't see exactly what happened.

I could only hear a huge impactcrashing sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I think she was in the bar from across the street.

After finishing, I went out to check out what happened.

All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although recently, the street has recently became way more busier than before, and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.

It was a violent crash of motorcycles.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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Motorcycle Crash

Today, an accident took place on my street.

I was in the bathroom so I couldn't see exactly what happened.

I could only hear a huge impactcrashing sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I think she was in the bar from across the street.

After finishing, I went out to check out what happened.

All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.

Essa mulher estava acordada?

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busiery than before and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.

It was a violent crash of motorcycles.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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Boa escrita! I hope they get better soon :/

Motorcycle Crash

Today, an accident took place on my street.

I was in the bathroom so I couldn't see exactly what happened.

I could only hear the sound of a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

A bit more natural.

I think she was in the bar from across the street.

After finishing in the bathroom, I went out to check out what happened.

All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busier than before and I was expecting to something like this to happen sooner or later.

It was a violent crash between twof motorcycles.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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Yes, I hope they have a quick recovery!

I could only hear a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I think she was in the bar from across the street.

AfLater finishing, I went out to check out what happened.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently becaome way moremuch busier than before and I was expecting tofor something like this happen sooner or later.

It was a violent crash of motorcycles crash.

Did two motorcycles hit each other?

I hope both of the victims of that tragice accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also b, and I hope also they become more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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Nice work! I hope that they recover properly too!

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hiratecs

Nov. 14, 2024

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Yes, two motercycles hit each other. Thanks for your feedback!

Motorcycle Crash


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I was in the bathroom so I couldn't see exactly what happened.


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I could only hear a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".


I could only hear a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I could only hear the sound of a huge impact sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

A bit more natural.

I could only hear a huge impactcrashing sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I could only hear a huge impactcrashing sound and a woman shouting "Oh my Lord!".

I think she was in the bar from across the street.


I think she was in the bar from across the street.

I think she was in the bar from across the street.

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After finishing, I went out too check out what happened.


All I could see was an ambulance carrying another woman who seemed to be conscient.


It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street recently has became way more busier than before and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.


It was a violent crash of motorcycles.


It was a violent crash of motorcycles crash.

Did two motorcycles hit each other?

It was a violent crash between twof motorcycles.

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Today, an accident took place on my street.


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Today, an accident took place in my street.


I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and be more aware of the traffic dangers.


After finishing, I went out to check out what happened.


AfLater finishing, I went out to check out what happened.

After finishing in the bathroom, I went out to check out what happened.

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All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscient.


All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.


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All I could see was an ambulance carrying a woman who seemed to be conscious.

Essa mulher estava acordada?

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It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busier than before and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.


It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently becaome way moremuch busier than before and I was expecting tofor something like this happen sooner or later.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busier than before and I was expecting to something like this to happen sooner or later.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although the street has recently became way more busiery than before and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.

It was the first time that a major accident has happened next to my house, although recently, the street has recently became way more busier than before, and I was expecting to something like this happen sooner or later.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.


I hope both of the victims of that tragice accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also b, and I hope also they become more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

I hope both of the victims of that tragic accident recovery from it so they can be back on their feet and also be more aware of the dangers of vehicle traffic.

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