Oct. 30, 2025
Dear Admissions Committee,
Dreaming beyond the place where you were born is not just about leaving a familiar environment; it is about embracing opportunities to grow, learn, and make a meaningful impact. For me, this journey began in a small Kyrgyz village, where education became a guiding light. I grew up in a modest but loving family, where happiness was measured not by wealth, but by smiles, kindness, and the simple joy of seeing my father return home safely each day. These early experiences taught me gratitude, empathy, and the belief that even from humble beginnings, one can reach the world through effort and perseverance.
Even when I faced challenges, I understood that failure is not the end, but a lesson — a lesson in resilience, courage, and hope. Every small step, every tear, and every night spent studying shaped the person I am becoming today. My passion for international relations has developed through my active participation in projects and volunteer activities that involved collaboration with students from diverse countries, helping organize cultural and educational events. Through these experiences, I strengthened my skills in cross-cultural communication, negotiation, and teamwork. Furthermore, managing small business projects, such as selling handmade products and assisting in my family’s confectionery business, taught me responsibility, organization, and effective interaction with diverse people. These experiences have prepared me to pursue a career in international relations, where understanding, cooperation, and a global perspective are essential.
I chose the University of Cassino because it offers a unique and focused environment for academic and personal growth. Cassino is a welcoming, peaceful city that allows students to fully dedicate themselves to their studies while experiencing a vibrant, supportive academic community. The university’s commitment to research, innovation, and cultural exchange inspires me deeply. I believe that studying in a smaller, community-oriented university will provide me with the opportunity to engage closely with professors, collaborate with peers, and develop a deep understanding of my chosen field. I am eager to contribute my energy, creativity, and leadership to university life — sharing my culture, participating in volunteer initiatives, and connecting students from diverse backgrounds.
If I could speak to my younger self — the girl who once made paper flowers — I would say: “You were already building your future, one flower at a time.” This journey has taught me that every effort, every step, and every challenge brings me closer to my dreams. Now, I am ready to take the next step — to step into the world and turn my aspirations into reality.
Thank you very much for considering my application. It would be an honor to study at your university and contribute my dedication, creativity, and passion to its community.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
Kyrgyzstan
Уважаемая приёмная комиссия,
Мечтать за пределами того места, где ты родилась, — это не просто покинуть знакомую среду, это принять возможности для роста, обучения и внесения значимого вклада в окружающий мир. Для меня этот путь начался в маленькой кыргызской деревне, где образование стало для меня светом, указывающим путь. Я выросла в скромной, но любящей семье, где счастье измерялось не деньгами, а улыбками, добротой и простой радостью видеть, как отец возвращается домой живым и здоровым каждый день. Эти ранние годы научили меня благодарности, эмпатии и вере в то, что даже с самых скромных начинаний можно достичь больших высот благодаря усилиям и настойчивости.
Даже сталкиваясь с трудностями, я понимала, что неудача — это не конец, а урок — урок стойкости, смелости и надежды. Каждый маленький шаг, каждая слеза и каждая бессонная ночь за учебой формировали личность, которой я становлюсь сегодня. Моя страсть к международным отношениям формировалась через участие в проектах и волонтёрских инициативах, которые объединяли студентов из разных стран и помогали организовывать культурные и образовательные мероприятия. Эти опыты помогли мне развить навыки межкультурной коммуникации, ведения переговоров и работы в команде. Кроме того, управление небольшими бизнес-проектами, такими как продажа изделий ручной работы и помощь в семейном кондитерском бизнесе, научило меня ответственности, планированию и эффективному взаимодействию с разными людьми. Все эти события подготовили меня к карьере в сфере международных отношений, где понимание, сотрудничество и глобальная перспектива имеют ключевое значение.
Я выбрала Университет Кассино, потому что он предлагает уникальную и сосредоточенную атмосферу для академического и личного роста. Кассино — гостеприимный, спокойный город, где студент может полностью посвятить себя учёбе и одновременно ощущать поддержку живого академического сообщества. Приверженность университета исследованиям, инновациям и культурному обмену вдохновляет меня. Я уверена, что учёба в небольшом университете, ориентированном на сообщество, даст возможность тесно взаимодействовать с преподавателями, сотрудничать со студентами и глубоко погрузиться в изучаемую сферу. Я стремлюсь внести в жизнь университета свою энергию, креативность и лидерские качества — делясь культурой, участвуя в волонтёрских инициативах и объединяя студентов разных стран.
Если бы я могла обратиться к себе маленькой — к девочке, которая когда-то делала бумажные цветы, — я бы сказала ей: «Ты уже тогда строила своё будущее, по одному цветку за раз». Этот путь научил меня, что каждое усилие, каждый шаг и каждая преодолённая трудность приближают к мечте. Теперь я готова сделать следующий шаг — выйти в мир и реализовать всё, что задумала.
Большое спасибо за рассмотрение моей заявки. Для меня будет честью учиться в вашем университете и внести свой вклад в его сообщество — своим трудом, энергией и страстью к знаниям.
С уважением,
[Твоё имя]
Кыргызстан
Motivation letter
Dear Admissions Committee,
Dreaming beyond the placeabout a place beyond where you were born is not just about leaving a familiar environment; it is about embracing opportunities to grow, learn, and make a meaningful impact.
For me, this journey began in a small Kyrgyz village, where education became a guiding light.
I grew up in a modest but loving family, where happiness was measured not by wealth, but by smiles, kindness, and the simple joy of seeing my father return home safely each day.
These early experiences taught me gratitude, empathy, and the belief that even from humble beginnings, one can reach the worldmake a difference through effort and perseverance.
I'm not sure what you mean by "reach the world." Are you talking about helping others or experiencing different cultures?
Even when I faced challenges, I understood that failure is not the end, but a lesson — a lesson in resilience, courage, and hope.
Every small step, every tear, and every night spent studying shaped me into the person I am becoming today.
My passion for international relations has developed through my active participation in projects and volunteer activities. Specifically, I helped organize cultural and educational events that involved collaboration with students from diverse countries, helping organize cultural and educational events.
Through these experiences, I strengthened my skills in cross-cultural communication, negotiation, and teamwork.
Furthermore, managing small business projects, such as selling handmade products and assisting in my family’s confectionery business, taught me responsibility, organization, and effective interaction with diverse people.
These experiences have prepared me to pursue a career in international relations, where understanding, cooperation, and a global perspective are essential.
I chospe theo attend University of Cassino because it offers a unique and focused environment for academic and personal growth.
If I could speak to my younger self — the girl who once made paper flowers — I would say: “You were already building your future, one flower at a time.”
Not an issue with your English, but this sentence doesn't really make sense unless you've already discussed making flowers. I would recommend just deleting it.
Now, I am ready to take the next step — to step into the world and turn my aspirations into reality.
Thank you very much for considering my application.
It would be an honor to study at your university and contribute my dedication, creativity, and passion to its community.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
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DearTo: Responsible/s for the Admissions Committee,
Dreaming to go beyond the place where you were born is not just about leaving a familiar environment; it is about embracing opportunities tofor growth, learn,ing and make a meaningful impact.
For me, this journey began in a small Kyrgyz village, where education became a guiding light.
I grew up inwith a modest but, loving family, where happiness was measured not by wealth, but by smiles, kindness, and the simple joy of seeing my father return home safely each day.
These early experiences taught me gratitude, empathy, and the belief that even from humble beginnings, one can reach the worldieve success through effort and perseverance.
Every small step, every tear, and every night spent studying shaped the person that I am becoming today.
Through these experiences, I have strengthened my skills in cross-cultural communication, negotiation, and teamwork.
Furthermore, managing small business projects, such as selling handmade products and assisting in my family’s confectionery business, have taught me responsibility, organization, and effective interaction with diverse people.
These experiences have prepared me to pursue a career in international relations, where understanding, cooperation, and a global perspective are essential.
I chosehave selected the University of Cassino because it offers a unique and focused environment for academic and personal growth.
Dreaming beyond the place where you were born is not just about leaving a familiar environment; it is about embracing opportunities to grow, learn, and make a meaningful impact.
For me, this journey began in a small Kyrgyz village, where education became a guiding light.
I grew up in a modest but loving family, where happiness was measured not by wealth, but by smiles, kindness, and the simple joy of seeing my father return home safely each day.
These early experiences taught me gratitude, empathy, and the belief that even from humble beginnings, one can reach the world through effort and perseverance.
Even when I faced challenges, I understood that failure is not the end, but a lesson — a lesson in resilience, courage, and hope.
Every small step, every tear, and every night spent studying shaped the person I am becoming today.
My passion for international relations hwas developed through my active participation in projects and volunteer activities that involved collaboration with students from diverse countries, helping organize cultural and educational events.
Through these experiences, I strengthened my skills in cross-cultural communication, negotiation, and teamwork.
Furthermore, managing small business projects, such as selling handmade products and assisting in my family’s confectionery business, taught me responsibility, organization, and effective interaction with diverse people.
These experiences have prepared me to pursue a career in international relations, where understanding, cooperation, and a global perspective are essential.
I chose the University of Cassino because it offers a unique and focused environment for academic and personal growth.
Cassino is a welcoming, peaceful city that allows students to fully dedicate themselves to their studies while experiencing a vibrant, supportive academic community.
The university’s commitment to research, innovation, and cultural exchange inspires me deeply.
I believe that studying in a smaller, community-oriented university will provide me with the opportunity to engage closely with professors, collaborate with peers, and develop a deep understanding of my chosen field.
I am eager to contribute my energy, creativity, and leadership to university life — sharing my culture, participating in volunteer initiatives, and connecting students from diverse backgrounds.
If I could speak to my younger self — the girl who once made paper flowers — I would say: “You were already building your future, one flower at a time.”
This journey has taught me that every effort, every step, and every challenge brings me closer to my dreams.
Now, I am ready to take the next step — to step into the world and turn my aspirations into reality.
Thank you very much for considering my application.
It would be an honor to study at your university and contribute my dedication, creativity, and passion to its community.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
Kyrgyzstan
Feedback
One feedback, perhaps this was not written by AI, but it seems as though it may have been. If this is for a real application I would remove the hyphens as it is a giveaway that something was written by AI.
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