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Most Popular Foods in Jordan: Part Three!

Writing Challenge: Day 8
Thursday, April 8th. 2021


4. Shawarma: This street food is not only famous in Jordan, but throughout the Middle East and Turkey. Shawarma also led to the famous Mexican dish "tacos al pastor" when it was brought there by Lebanese immigrants. The big shawarma skew is either made of lamb meat or chicken.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shawarma
The experience of having your first shawarma sandwich is going to be unforgettable, and it gets addictive by time. The thin cuts of meat or chicken mixed with pickled vegetables, mostly cucumbers, and sauces especially tahini sauce would make this wrap a choice for any time of the day!
The less famous sandwich in Jordan is called "A'rayes" which literally means "Brides". A'rayes consist of pita bread filled with well-seasoned minced meat with tomatoes and onions. It's either baked in the oven or grilled on the coal.

5. Musakhan:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Musakhan
Musakhan that came to Jordan through Palestinians, is one the most popular foods in the country, and it's considered the national dish of Palestine. The two basic ingredients are the roasted chicken with onions and sumac, and the taboon bread. The chicken is served over the taboon bread, and the meal is eaten with hands. Extra-virgin olive oil and sumac are two main ingredients that give this fine meal its original taste.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sumac

6. Mujaddara:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mujaddara
This vegetarian dish consists of lentils, with either groats or rice, and served with fried onions on top. It's usually eaten with green salad or yoghurt, and some pickled cucumbers and olives on the side.

7. Okra, Green Beans and Navy Beans:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Okra
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Green_bean
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Navy_bean
Okra, green beans and navy beans, these vegetables are either cooked fresh in their seasons, or kept frozen to be available all year long for Jordanians to enjoy. Each vegetable is cooked with a basic tomato sauce and meat, and some prefer them with chicken to create a fine meal of each of these delicious vegetables. They are either served with rice prepared with noodles or just rice.
Another version of these vegetables is preparing any of them with tomato and olive oil in a pan. This vegetarian version known as "mhalwas", especially if made with okra, is usually eaten with pita or taboon bread.

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Most Popular Foods in Jordan: Part Three!

Writing Challenge: Day 8

Thursday, April 8th.

2021

4. Shawarma: This street food is famous not only famous in Jordan, but also throughout the Middle East and Turkey.

"not only... but also..." is a common pairing!

Shawarma also led to the creation of the famous Mexican dish "tacos al pastor" when it was brought thereo Mexico by Lebanese immigrants.

Even though I know you mean "Mexico" when you say "there", you have not yet mentioned Mexico yet, so "there" has no actual referent.

The big shawarma skewer is either made of either lamb meat or chicken.

The experience of having your first shawarma sandwich is going to be unforgettable, and it getbecomes addictive byover time.

The thin cuts of meat or chicken mixed with pickled vegetables, mostly cucumbers, and sauces especially tahini sauce would make this wrap a choice for any time of the day!

I added in some punctuation to sort of break up the sentence a bit and add emphasis for the particular items you pointed out.

TheA less famous sandwich in Jordan is called "A'rayes," which literally means "Brides".

A'rayes consist of pita bread filled with well-seasoned minced meat with tomatoes and onions.

It's either baked in the oven or grilled on thever coals.

Musakhan that, which came to Jordan through the Palestinians, is one of the most popular foods in the country, and it's considered the national dish of Palestine.

TheIts two basic ingredients are the roasted chicken with onions and sumac, and the taboon bread.

The chicken is served over the taboon bread, and the meal is eaten withusing one's hands.

Extra-virgin olive oil and sumac are the two main ingredients that give this fine meal its original taste.

This vegetarian dish consists of lentils, with either groats or rice, and served with fried onions on top.

7. Okra, Green Beans and Navy Beans:

Okra, green beans and, navy beans, thes are vegetables that are either cooked fresh in their seasons, or kept frozen to be available all year long for Jordanians to enjoy.

Each vegetable is cooked with a basic tomato sauce and meat, and some prefer them with chicken to create a fine meal ofwith each of these delicious vegetables.

I just changed one word; "with" sounds better to me than "of" in this case.

They are either served with rice prepared with noodles or just rice.

Another version ofway to prepare these vegetables is preparing any ofcooking them with tomato and olive oil in a pan.

This vegetarian version, which is known as "mhalwas", especially if made with okra, is usually eaten with pita or taboon bread.

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I want to eat everything!

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Shawarma also led to the creation of the famous Mexican dish "tacos al pastor" when it was brought thereo Mexico by Lebanese immigrants.

You are right :)

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Another version ofway to prepare these vegetables is preparing any ofcooking them with tomato and olive oil in a pan.

May I ask, why the "s" was omitted from "vegetables"? : )

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I have no enough words to thank you, Bees : )
I truly appreciate your time and effort in correcting my mistakes.
I hope they have Middle Eastern restaurants in Korea. You would have a lot of fun trying these foods :D

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Okra


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Green_bean


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Navy_bean


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4. Shawarma: This street food is not only famous in Jordan, but throughout the Middle East and Turkey.


4. Shawarma: This street food is famous not only famous in Jordan, but also throughout the Middle East and Turkey.

"not only... but also..." is a common pairing!

Shawarma also led to the famous Mexican dish "tacos al pastor" when it was brought there by Lebanese immigrants.


Shawarma also led to the creation of the famous Mexican dish "tacos al pastor" when it was brought thereo Mexico by Lebanese immigrants.

Even though I know you mean "Mexico" when you say "there", you have not yet mentioned Mexico yet, so "there" has no actual referent.

The big shawarma skew is either made of lamb meat or chicken.


The big shawarma skewer is either made of either lamb meat or chicken.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shawarma


The experience of having your first shawarma sandwich is going to be unforgettable, and it gets addictive by time.


The experience of having your first shawarma sandwich is going to be unforgettable, and it getbecomes addictive byover time.

The thin cuts of meat or chicken mixed with pickled vegetables, mostly cucumbers, and sauces especially tahini sauce would make this wrap a choice for any time of the day!


The thin cuts of meat or chicken mixed with pickled vegetables, mostly cucumbers, and sauces especially tahini sauce would make this wrap a choice for any time of the day!

I added in some punctuation to sort of break up the sentence a bit and add emphasis for the particular items you pointed out.

The less famous sandwich in Jordan is called "A'rayes" which literally means "Brides".


TheA less famous sandwich in Jordan is called "A'rayes," which literally means "Brides".

A'rayes consist of pita bread filled with well-seasoned minced meat with tomatoes and onions.


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It's either baked in the oven or grilled on the coal.


It's either baked in the oven or grilled on thever coals.

5. Musakhan:


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Musakhan


Musakhan that came to Jordan through Palestinians, is one the most popular foods in the country, and it's considered the national dish of Palestine.


Musakhan that, which came to Jordan through the Palestinians, is one of the most popular foods in the country, and it's considered the national dish of Palestine.

The two basic ingredients are the roasted chicken with onions and sumac, and the taboon bread.


TheIts two basic ingredients are the roasted chicken with onions and sumac, and the taboon bread.

The chicken is served over the taboon bread, and the meal is eaten with hands.


The chicken is served over the taboon bread, and the meal is eaten withusing one's hands.

Extra-virgin olive oil and sumac are two main ingredients that give this fine meal its original taste.


Extra-virgin olive oil and sumac are the two main ingredients that give this fine meal its original taste.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sumac


6. Mujaddara:


https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mujaddara


This vegetarian dish consists of lentils, with either groats or rice, and served with fried onions on top.


This vegetarian dish consists of lentils, with either groats or rice, and served with fried onions on top.

It's usually eaten with green salad or yoghurt, and some pickled cucumbers and olives on the side.


7. Okra, Green Beans and Navy Beans:


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Okra, green beans and navy beans, these vegetables are either cooked fresh in their seasons, or kept frozen to be available all year long for Jordanians to enjoy.


Okra, green beans and, navy beans, thes are vegetables that are either cooked fresh in their seasons, or kept frozen to be available all year long for Jordanians to enjoy.

Each vegetable is cooked with a basic tomato sauce and meat, and some prefer them with chicken to create a fine meal of each of these delicious vegetables.


Each vegetable is cooked with a basic tomato sauce and meat, and some prefer them with chicken to create a fine meal ofwith each of these delicious vegetables.

I just changed one word; "with" sounds better to me than "of" in this case.

They are either served with rice prepared with noodles or just rice.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Another version of these vegetables is preparing any of them with tomato and olive oil in a pan.


Another version ofway to prepare these vegetables is preparing any ofcooking them with tomato and olive oil in a pan.

This vegetarian version known as "mhalwas", especially if made with okra, is usually eaten with pita or taboon bread.


This vegetarian version, which is known as "mhalwas", especially if made with okra, is usually eaten with pita or taboon bread.

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