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SummerTeaWater

April 17, 2021

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Morning Routine

I try to do my morning routines after I wake up at 5 am everyday.

At first, I practice Chinese classes using English on Duolingo app.

Next, I write my nine mottos in English, Chinese and Japanese.
One of my goals is to learn these three language fluently.

After that, I read a book that is one of Mr. Men series.

At last, I practice English writing with a text book that is called Easy Writing.

As of today, I will try to add one more routine, to speak my journals loudly.

I hope I am able to speak English like a native speaker by these routines.

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Morning Routine

I try to do myfollow this morning routines after I wake up at 5 am everyday.

At fFirst, I practice Chinese classes using English on the Duolingo app.

At first sounds like something which only happens once.

Next, I write my nine mottosentences in English, Chinese and Japanese.

A motto is a saying which captures a person’s or an organisation’s core value. For example the UK’s motto is ‘Dieu et mon droit’ - God and my right in French. I don’t think that’s what you mean here.

One of my goals is to learn these three languages fluently.

After that, I read a book that is one of the Mr. Men series of books.

At lastFinally, I practice English writing withusing a text book that is called Easy Writing.

‘At last’ implies you’ve been waiting for something to happen.
‘With’ sounds as though you actually use the book in some way, for example physically writing in the book. Since you’re only using it as a reference (I think) ‘using’ is better.

As ofFrom today, I will try to add one more routine,: to spreakd my journals out loudly.

‘As of today’ includes today, so you’d need to use past tense.

‘Read out loud’ is the correct phrase.

I hope I am able to speak English like a native speaker byby following these routines.

‘I am’ describes your current state, not future.

You don’t need to repeat ‘speak’. Repetition should generally be avoided if possible, just for stylistic reasons.

You can say ‘by following’ or ‘through’ these routines.

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You wake up early! Great work on this entry and on your diligent studies!

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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2021

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Next, I write my nine mottosentences in English, Chinese and Japanese.

You are right. I want to explain my sentences like "The Pope Francis List".
In Korea, it is about "좌우명" which sentences are encouraging me.
But I can't find a right word about it.
Is it ok to use "sentences" or other?

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alextward

April 18, 2021

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I looked up the ‘Pope Francis List’ and all I found was a list of New Year’s resolutions. It seems that 좌우명 is similar to a motto. Sorry I’m not entirely sure what kind of writing you’re doing every morning so it’s hard to find the right word in English!

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SummerTeaWater

April 18, 2021

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That’s ok :)
Because of your help, I am always able to get proper words and sentences.

Morning Routine


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I try to do my morning routines after I wake up at 5 am everyday.


I try to do myfollow this morning routines after I wake up at 5 am everyday.

At first, I practice Chinese classes using English on Duolingo app.


At fFirst, I practice Chinese classes using English on the Duolingo app.

At first sounds like something which only happens once.

Next, I write my nine mottos in English, Chinese and Japanese.


Next, I write my nine mottosentences in English, Chinese and Japanese.

A motto is a saying which captures a person’s or an organisation’s core value. For example the UK’s motto is ‘Dieu et mon droit’ - God and my right in French. I don’t think that’s what you mean here.

One of my goals is to learn these three language fluently.


One of my goals is to learn these three languages fluently.

After that, I read a book that is one of Mr. Men series.


After that, I read a book that is one of the Mr. Men series of books.

At last, I practice English writing with a text book that is called Easy Writing.


At lastFinally, I practice English writing withusing a text book that is called Easy Writing.

‘At last’ implies you’ve been waiting for something to happen. ‘With’ sounds as though you actually use the book in some way, for example physically writing in the book. Since you’re only using it as a reference (I think) ‘using’ is better.

As of today, I will try to add one more routine, to speak my journals loudly.


As ofFrom today, I will try to add one more routine,: to spreakd my journals out loudly.

‘As of today’ includes today, so you’d need to use past tense. ‘Read out loud’ is the correct phrase.

I hope I am able to speak English like a native speaker by these routines.


I hope I am able to speak English like a native speaker byby following these routines.

‘I am’ describes your current state, not future. You don’t need to repeat ‘speak’. Repetition should generally be avoided if possible, just for stylistic reasons. You can say ‘by following’ or ‘through’ these routines.

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