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alexwong2164

April 12, 2021

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Monster Hunter 3/26

If you are not a “game” person, this is a title of a game.

Because you didn’t play game.

So, you won’t know how popular this game.

And you may say it just a game, what is the big deal?

Actually, it is a big deal in the game industrial.

At the latest version release date (3/26) an IT company in Japan.

Because the boss knows many staff will request a day off just to play this game.

So, he makes that day as an official rest day for the staff.

You may say this is a small company with a handful of staff.

Still his decision earns a lot people say “I wish to work in this company”.

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Because if you didn’on't play games, you probably wouldn't know how popular this game is.

And you may say it is just a game, what is the big deal?

You can also say: "why is it (such) a big deal?"

Actually, it is a big deal in the game industrialy.

At the latest version release date (3/26) an IT company in JapanOn March 26th, the release date of the latest version of the game, the boss an IT company in Japan will do something very unusual.

Because tThe boss knows many staff(that) many employees will request a day off just to play this game.

In this case, you can either say "many staff members" or "many employees". After you use the word "many" & "a lot", the following noun should be the plural version of the word.

Ex. many pink flowers ; many happy people ; a lot of dirty shoes

So, he makesde that day as an official rest day for the staff.

You can also say: "an official day-off".

You may say this is a small company with a handful of staff.

Still, his decision earnscaused a lot people to say, “I wish toI could work infor thisat company”.

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Pretty good👍 I plan to buy the newest "Monster Hunter" soon. Have you played it yet?

alexwong2164's avatar
alexwong2164

April 12, 2021

0

i did

Monster Hunter 3/26


If you are not a “game” person, this is a title of a game.


Because you didn’t play game.


Because if you didn’on't play games, you probably wouldn't know how popular this game is.

So, you won’t know how popular this game.


And you may say it just a game, what is the big deal?


And you may say it is just a game, what is the big deal?

You can also say: "why is it (such) a big deal?"

Actually, it is a big deal in the game industrial.


Actually, it is a big deal in the game industrialy.

At the latest version release date (3/26) an IT company in Japan.


At the latest version release date (3/26) an IT company in JapanOn March 26th, the release date of the latest version of the game, the boss an IT company in Japan will do something very unusual.

Because the boss knows many staff will request a day off just to play this game.


Because tThe boss knows many staff(that) many employees will request a day off just to play this game.

In this case, you can either say "many staff members" or "many employees". After you use the word "many" & "a lot", the following noun should be the plural version of the word. Ex. many pink flowers ; many happy people ; a lot of dirty shoes

So, he makes that day as an official rest day for the staff.


So, he makesde that day as an official rest day for the staff.

You can also say: "an official day-off".

You may say this is a small company with a handful of staff.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Still his decision earns a lot people say “I wish to work in this company”.


Still, his decision earnscaused a lot people to say, “I wish toI could work infor thisat company”.

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