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jammanbo

April 25, 2021

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Moj posao

Ja sam ispitivač softvera ali testiram video igre. Obično radim od 9 do 6, ali kada ja sam zauzeta, moram raditi dugo i vikendom. Moj posao je zabavan, ali težak. Ljudi misle da ja igram igre, ali ne ih igram cijeli dan; ja pronalazim probleme.


I am a software tester but I test video games. I usually work from 9 to 6 but I sometimes am busy and must work long hours. My work is fun but difficult. People think I play games for work but I don't play all day; I find problems.

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Moj posao

Ja sam ispitivač softvera ali testiram video igre.

Obično radim od 9 do 6, ali kada jaako sam zauzeta, moram raditi dugo ze i raditi vikendom.

Here I'm not entirely sure whether you normally work on weekend or just when your busy and the connecting word I would use here is "but" and not "when" because this scenario happens only when the upper condition is met.

Moj posao je zabavan, ali težak.

Ljudi misle da ja igram igre, ali ne ihih ne igram cijeli dan; ja pronalazim probleme.

Sentence structure after comma: connecting word - subject - action - adverb.

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Your Croatian is very good! Hopefully your job is not too stressful!

Moj posao


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Ja sam ispitivač softvera ali testiram video igre.


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Obično radim od 9 do 6, ali kada ja sam zauzeta, moram raditi dugo i vikendom.


Obično radim od 9 do 6, ali kada jaako sam zauzeta, moram raditi dugo ze i raditi vikendom.

Here I'm not entirely sure whether you normally work on weekend or just when your busy and the connecting word I would use here is "but" and not "when" because this scenario happens only when the upper condition is met.

Moj posao je zabavan, ali težak.


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Ljudi misle da ja igram igre, ali ne ih igram cijeli dan; ja pronalazim probleme.


Ljudi misle da ja igram igre, ali ne ihih ne igram cijeli dan; ja pronalazim probleme.

Sentence structure after comma: connecting word - subject - action - adverb.

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