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alexwong2164

June 9, 2021

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Mini lunch box

https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/045657576f295be998eed81403d0d268ce18b3d9


In Japan the convince store has new strategy to attack the lunch box market.

This time they mainly focus on female segment.

The volume of current lunch box is kind of “too much” for female customer.

Now they designed a new range mini size lunch box.

Price is cheaper but the quality is better.

I like this idea.

Less price but quality higher.

Well, the down side may get hungry early.

In my case I always over eating and cause weight problem.

If I can I don’t mine eat more meals and keep less the volume.

If I live in Japan, I can be slim too.

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Mini lunch box

https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/045657576f295be998eed81403d0d268ce18b3d9

In Japan the, convienience stores hasve devised a new strategy to attack the lunch box market.

This time they are mainly focusing on female segmentcustomers.

The volume ofsize of the current lunch box is kind of “seems to be too much for the average female customer.

Now they have designed a new range mini size lunch box.

PThe price is cheaper but the quality is better.

I like this idea.

Lessower price but higher quality higher.

Well, the down side may be that I get hungry early.

In my case, I am always over -eating andwhich causes weight problems.

If I can, I don’t mined eat more meals and keep less the volumeing smaller meals more frequently.

If I lived in Japan, I canould be slim too.

Do you live in Japan? If so -> "If I live in Japan, I can be slim too."
Do you live somewhere else? If so -> "If I lived in Japan, I could be slim too."

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Nice! Well done for summarising the news article in English.
This new mini lunch box sounds kind of neat. I think I'd like to go for the regular size though. I like to eat a lot. Or maybe I would just buy two mini lunch boxes xD

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alexwong2164

June 11, 2021

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one stone 2 brids

Well, the down side may get hungry early.


Well, the down side may be that I get hungry early.

Less price but quality higher.


Lessower price but higher quality higher.

Mini lunch box


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https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/045657576f295be998eed81403d0d268ce18b3d9


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In Japan the convince store has new strategy to attack the lunch box market.


In Japan the, convienience stores hasve devised a new strategy to attack the lunch box market.

This time they mainly focus on female segment.


This time they are mainly focusing on female segmentcustomers.

The volume of current lunch box is kind of “too much” for female customer.


The volume ofsize of the current lunch box is kind of “seems to be too much for the average female customer.

Now they designed a new range mini size lunch box.


Now they have designed a new range mini size lunch box.

Price is cheaper but the quality is better.


PThe price is cheaper but the quality is better.

I like this idea.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my case I always over eating and cause weight problem.


In my case, I am always over -eating andwhich causes weight problems.

If I can I don’t mine eat more meals and keep less the volume.


If I can, I don’t mined eat more meals and keep less the volumeing smaller meals more frequently.

If I live in Japan, I can be slim too.


If I lived in Japan, I canould be slim too.

Do you live in Japan? If so -> "If I live in Japan, I can be slim too." Do you live somewhere else? If so -> "If I lived in Japan, I could be slim too."

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