April 3, 2021
Mi familia
Estoy soltero y no tengo hijos o mascotas. No quiero estar casado porque disfruto mi vida. Tengo un hermano mayor que tiene 31 años. Él es alto y gordo. También, es inteligente pero un poco vago. ¡A veces no quiero comer con mi hermano, porque él come mucho carne sin verduras pero yo no!
Mi familia
Estoy soltero y no tengo hijos o mascotas.
No quiero estar casado porque disfruto mi vida como está ahora.
I would add "como está ahora" (how it's now) to make it more natural and soft, if you just say "disfruto mi vida" it could sound a bit offensive, as "married people doesn't enjoy their lives".
Please don't misunderstood me, I understand that be married isn't neccesary, that's perfectly understandable for me. But If you meet someone that's married it can sound bad.
Tengo un hermano mayor que tiene 31 años.
Él es alto y gordo.
También, es inteligente pero un poco vago.
¡A veces no quiero comer con mi hermano, porque él come muchoa carne sin verduras, pero yo no!
Carne is a female word, so you must to use "mucha".
"Mucha" is for female words and "Mucho" for masculine words
And remember that in Spanish we use two signs to exclamate (¡!) or interrogate (¿?)
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You did it really great, a bit short but nothing more to say. Sorry If I wrote something wrong, I'm learning English and I'm trying to practice with this.
April 4, 2021
¡Muchas gracias!
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Mi familia This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Estoy soltero y no tengo hijos o mascotas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No quiero estar casado porque disfruto mi vida. No quiero estar casado porque disfruto mi vida como está ahora. I would add "como está ahora" (how it's now) to make it more natural and soft, if you just say "disfruto mi vida" it could sound a bit offensive, as "married people doesn't enjoy their lives". Please don't misunderstood me, I understand that be married isn't neccesary, that's perfectly understandable for me. But If you meet someone that's married it can sound bad. |
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Tengo un hermano mayor que tiene 31 años. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Él es alto y gordo. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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También, es inteligente pero un poco vago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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¡A veces no quiero comer con mi hermano, porque él come mucho carne sin verduras pero yo no! ¡A veces no quiero comer con mi hermano, porque él come much Carne is a female word, so you must to use "mucha". "Mucha" is for female words and "Mucho" for masculine words And remember that in Spanish we use two signs to exclamate (¡!) or interrogate (¿?) |
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