May 13, 2021
Meeting people while traveling
I always liked to travel. Visiting foreign countries, I met different people that I knew I would never see again. Some of them are part of my memories, even if they didn't interact with me. For example, I have a photography from a young boy in Vietnam, standing in front of his humble home. He looks serious, lost in his thoughts as any other teenager. In the same tryp I saw two children doing the laundry in the floor with their hands. They were smiling, as if this was a game.
In other cases, I went further and shared conversations with locals. In Thailand I shared my seat and breakfast in a bus with a teacher. She was very kind and I enjoyed chatting with her. I learnt about living in this country. I wonder how is she doing nowadays.
I always liked to travel.
Visiting foreign countries, I met different people that I knew I would never see again.
Some of them are part of my memoriesI still remember some of them, even if they didn't interact with me.
For example, I have a photography froms of a young boy in Vietnam, standing in front of his humble home.
He looksed serious, lost in his thoughts as any other teenager.
Since the photo was already taken, you have to use the past tense here.
In the same trypphoto, I saw two children doing the laundry ion the floor with their hands.
I'm not sure what you mean by "tryp", so I changed the sentence a bit. I hope it still has the same meaning you wanted it to have :)
They were smiling, as if ithis was a game.
In other cases, I went further and shared conversations with locals.
IFor example, in Thailand, I shared my seat and breakfast ion a bus with a teacher.
She was very kind and I enjoyed chatting with her.
I learnt about living in thisat country.
I wonder how is she doing nowadays.
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Meeting people while traveling |
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I always liked to travel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Visiting foreign countries, I met different people that I knew I would never see again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some of them are part of my memories, even if they didn't interact with me.
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For example, I have a photography from a young boy in Vietnam, standing in front of his humble home. For example, I have |
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He looks serious, lost in his thoughts as any other teenager. He look Since the photo was already taken, you have to use the past tense here. |
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In the same tryp I saw two children doing the laundry in the floor with their hands. In the same I'm not sure what you mean by "tryp", so I changed the sentence a bit. I hope it still has the same meaning you wanted it to have :) |
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They were smiling, as if this was a game. They were smiling, as if it |
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In other cases, I went further and shared conversations with locals. In other cases, I went further and |
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In Thailand I shared my seat and breakfast in a bus with a teacher.
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She was very kind and I enjoyed chatting with her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I learnt about living in this country. I learnt about living in th |
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I wonder how is she doing nowadays. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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