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Oct. 27, 2025

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I think who i am is not limited by body of me its beyond that my body is just or connector of visual world , so no matter how worse i am looks , feels, tastes likes all the sences is worthless . That weak person is like weak soul that limited by thier organic body they just cant think beyond it uf they stay like this they will never improve from now . But it has other side even mentally strong is mainly but real situations and circumstances is can shape weak ones mentall other wise strong one can saw the circumstances in many sides . Anylizing in many sides posibble it can make you smarter stronger better .


Би хэн бэ гэдэг нь бие махбодоор хязгаарлагдахгүй, харин бие махбодь маань зөвхөн харааны ертөнцийн холбогч гэдгээс гадна хязгаарлагдмал гэж би боддог. Тиймээс би хичнээн муу харагдаж, мэдэрч, амталж байсан ч хамаагүй бүх мэдрэхүй үнэ цэнэгүй. Тэр сул дорой хүн бол органик бие махбодоороо хязгаарлагдсан сул дорой сүнс шиг юм. Тэд үүнээс цааш сэтгэж чадахгүй, хэрэв тэд ийм хэвээр байвал цаашид хэзээ ч сайжрахгүй. Гэхдээ энэ нь нөгөө талтай, тэр ч байтугай оюун санааны хувьд хүчтэй ч гэсэн голчлон бодит нөхцөл байдал, нөхцөл байдал нь сул дорой хүмүүсийг сэтгэцийн хувьд бүрдүүлж чаддаг, харин хүн нөхцөл байдлыг олон талаас нь харж чаддаг. Олон талаас нь харах нь таныг илүү ухаалаг, илүү хүчтэй болгож чадна.

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I think who iI am is not limited by my body of me it, it goes beyond that m. My body is just ora connector of visuion to the physical world , so noit doesn't matter how worse i ambad I looks , or feels, tastes likes; all the sencses isare worthless .

It's strange to say "no matter how I taste" because this means you are the thing being tasted

That weak person is like a weak soul that limited by thierits organic body.

tThey just can't think beyond it.

uIf they stay like this

they will never improve from now .

"From now" doesn't add anything here

But it has other side eventhere is another side, mainly for the mentally -strong is mainly but r. Real situations and circumstances is can shape weak ones mentall other wise the mentally-weak, but mentally-strong onpeople can saw thee circumstances infrom many sides .

This was difficult for me to parse, so hopefully I edited according to the point you wanted to make

Anylialyzing infrom many sides possibble itsides can make you smarter, stronger, better .

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theramshorn

Nov. 19, 2025

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This edit is great. I wouldn't add to or change anything about it.

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I think who i am is not limited by body of me its beyond that my body is just or connector of visual world , so no matter how worse i am looks , feels, tastes likes all the sences is worthless .


I think who iI am is not limited by my body of me it, it goes beyond that m. My body is just ora connector of visuion to the physical world , so noit doesn't matter how worse i ambad I looks , or feels, tastes likes; all the sencses isare worthless .

It's strange to say "no matter how I taste" because this means you are the thing being tasted

That weak person is like weak soul that limited by thier organic body


That weak person is like a weak soul that limited by thierits organic body.

they just cant think beyond it


tThey just can't think beyond it.

uf they stay like this


uIf they stay like this

they will never improve from now .


they will never improve from now .

"From now" doesn't add anything here

But it has other side even mentally strong is mainly but real situations and circumstances is can shape weak ones mentall other wise strong one can saw the circumstances in many sides .


But it has other side eventhere is another side, mainly for the mentally -strong is mainly but r. Real situations and circumstances is can shape weak ones mentall other wise the mentally-weak, but mentally-strong onpeople can saw thee circumstances infrom many sides .

This was difficult for me to parse, so hopefully I edited according to the point you wanted to make

Anylizing in many sides posibble it can make you smarter stronger better .


Anylialyzing infrom many sides possibble itsides can make you smarter, stronger, better .

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