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Tammy

April 30, 2025

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May Day Holiday is Coming!

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th. It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxation after today's lunchtime.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. It's lovely to hike in this season. The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them. But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd. I will rest at home that day.

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.


从明天到5月5日,在中国的我们将有个五天的假期。这周有点忙,但今天午餐后我能感觉到大家开始放松了。

我明天和后天要去徒步。在这个季节徒步可真是太棒了。山上开满了花,长满了野果,我真的超级喜欢它们。但也得小心,因为毒蛇也开始活跃起来了。

如果你想和我一起练习汉语,请在5月3日联系我。那天我要在家休息的。

我现在也很期待这个假期了。

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We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th.

🥲

ItThis week has been a little busy this week, but I can feel theit busy for me, but I felt relaxationed after today's lunchtime.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.

It's lovely to hike in this season.

The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.

But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.

I will rest at home that day.

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

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No wonder it is said China has a lot of holidays. We had only one holiday and that was on May 1st 😪.

一会儿见,希望我不会睡过🥲。

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Tammy

May 4, 2025

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谢谢!

啊,我以为这周你也没时间呢。等你醒来,有空的时候告诉我呗。我今天会去逛公园,不过离家很近,半小时左右就可以赶回家了。

The May Day Holiday is Coming!

We usually add “the” with “holiday.”
For example:
Christmas is coming.
The Christmas holiday is coming.

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to (suggestion: through) May 5th.

“To” is ambiguous as we can’t tell whether the 5th is the last day of the holiday or the first day back at work. “Through” makes it clear that the holiday includes the 5th.

It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxation after today'smood in the office has relaxed since lunchtime.

Present tense seems fine to me if you’re writing this in the afternoon, after lunch.

“Today’s lunchtime” doesn’t sound idiomatic to me. “Today” is implied in my correction.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after (tomorrow).

The second “tomorrow” is unnecessary.

Alternative: I will go hiking tomorrow and the next day.

It's lovely to hike in this season.

The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.

But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes {have also begun to become active | are also becoming active}.

“Begun to become” is grammatically correct but sounds a bit awkward.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.

I will rest at home that day.

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

This sentence sounds unnatural, as if you weren’t looking forward to the holiday before this moment (which clearly isn’t true). “Looking forward” doesn’t convey the eager anticipation of “期待” in this context. I would suggest: I can’t wait for this holiday to start!

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Tammy

May 3, 2025

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Thanks again!

Have a nice day!

I will go hiking tomorrow and also the day after tomorrow.

what you have is correct but you should have an 'also' or 'too' in the second part

I will rest atstay home that day.

what you have is correct but 'stay home' is more idiomatic to say 'do nothing.' 'Resting' could make it sound like you're sick or injured or something.

I'm alsoBut now, I'm looking forward to thise holiday now.

unclear exactly what you mean. Nothing grammatically incorrect but this sentence's job is unclear. I reworded it to sound more natural

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Tammy

May 3, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

May Day Holiday is Coming!

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th.

It has been a little busy this week, but I canould feel tha more relaxationing mood after today's lunchtime.

I changed can to could to maintain the past tense. You can't really "feel" relaxation so I changed the sentence a little.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.

It's lovely to hike in this season.

The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.

But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.

I will rest at home that day.

This is not incorrect, but it would sound more natural to say "I will be resting at home that day."

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

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Enjoy your holiday!

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Tammy

April 30, 2025

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Thanks again!

Have a nice day!

May Day Holiday is Coming!

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th.

It has been a little busy this week, but I canould feel the relaxationeveryone starting to relax after today's lunchtime.

You can essentially perform a direct translation from the native text.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.

It's lovely to hike in this season.

Alternatively, if you want to emphasise just how lovely hiking is, you can write "Hiking in this season is just the best." "lovely" does come across as milder, and loses some of the emotion.

The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.

But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.

I will rest at home that day.

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

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Enjoy your holiday!

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Tammy

April 30, 2025

2

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxationed after today's lunchtime.

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.

It's lovely to hike in this season.

The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.

But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.

If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.

I will rest at home that day.

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

Feedback

Have a nice holiday!

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Tammy

April 30, 2025

2

Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxation after today's lunchtime.


It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxationed after today's lunchtime.

It has been a little busy this week, but I canould feel the relaxationeveryone starting to relax after today's lunchtime.

You can essentially perform a direct translation from the native text.

It has been a little busy this week, but I canould feel tha more relaxationing mood after today's lunchtime.

I changed can to could to maintain the past tense. You can't really "feel" relaxation so I changed the sentence a little.

It has been a little busy this week, but I can feel the relaxation after today'smood in the office has relaxed since lunchtime.

Present tense seems fine to me if you’re writing this in the afternoon, after lunch. “Today’s lunchtime” doesn’t sound idiomatic to me. “Today” is implied in my correction.

ItThis week has been a little busy this week, but I can feel theit busy for me, but I felt relaxationed after today's lunchtime.

May Day Holiday is Coming!


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The May Day Holiday is Coming!

We usually add “the” with “holiday.” For example: Christmas is coming. The Christmas holiday is coming.

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th.


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We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to (suggestion: through) May 5th.

“To” is ambiguous as we can’t tell whether the 5th is the last day of the holiday or the first day back at work. “Through” makes it clear that the holiday includes the 5th.

We'll have a five-day holiday in China, from tomorrow to May 5th.

🥲

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.


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I will go hiking tomorrow and also the day after tomorrow.

what you have is correct but you should have an 'also' or 'too' in the second part

I will go hiking tomorrow and the day after (tomorrow).

The second “tomorrow” is unnecessary. Alternative: I will go hiking tomorrow and the next day.

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It's lovely to hike in this season.


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It's lovely to hike in this season.

Alternatively, if you want to emphasise just how lovely hiking is, you can write "Hiking in this season is just the best." "lovely" does come across as milder, and loses some of the emotion.

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The mountains are full of flowers and wild fruits, and I really love them.


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But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes have also begun to become active.


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But we also need to be careful because venomous snakes {have also begun to become active | are also becoming active}.

“Begun to become” is grammatically correct but sounds a bit awkward.

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If you want to practice Chinese with me, feel free to contact me on May 3rd.


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I will rest at home that day.


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I will rest at home that day.

This is not incorrect, but it would sound more natural to say "I will be resting at home that day."

I will rest atstay home that day.

what you have is correct but 'stay home' is more idiomatic to say 'do nothing.' 'Resting' could make it sound like you're sick or injured or something.

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I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.


I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

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I'm alsoBut now, I'm looking forward to thise holiday now.

unclear exactly what you mean. Nothing grammatically incorrect but this sentence's job is unclear. I reworded it to sound more natural

I'm also looking forward to this holiday now.

This sentence sounds unnatural, as if you weren’t looking forward to the holiday before this moment (which clearly isn’t true). “Looking forward” doesn’t convey the eager anticipation of “期待” in this context. I would suggest: I can’t wait for this holiday to start!

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