May 13, 2025
Hello everybody! Today was so busy, but an amazing day! I had a lot of tasks from my job. Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it today, so at first I had a long way from my office to the necessary courts. Secondly, I was in a hurry with all documents. Plus it has been rained all day (and even now). So I had a lot of communication and it was really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explain something steps in, you know, stages of the statement of claim. I really like to be in a life conversation with people.
And it is funny, but at the another side I had a lot of troubles! Rain, again. Then one woman on the cafe, who works there, said me that sup is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s important value to me). But when I taken this, I saw… I saw skin of chicken. It was terrible. But I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left this place without thoughts about repeat visit. Then one car got dirty my jeans. After, when I set at the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I finished), my coworker remembered me about one things… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact they taken my request for the court! I needed to return back. So I got the office to the end of work day.
And! The story didn’t end. I was going to the my friends party! And we ate so tasty food, it was awesome. We talked a lot, we spent nice time. Now I’m going to home by subway. I am tired a little bit, but I am very happy.
I’m sure that all situations, all tasks what life gives to us is useful, is good for us. They teach us something new, something important. The whole world has a plan to us, and it is very personal plan. I feel like I’m on right path and I’m on the safe.
I think, the key of my life is people surrounding me. You can’t imagine, but I have struggles with communication, I need to make an efforts, but it worths it. Sometime I feel like no one need to me. But I still go in the life connection with people, and there is my treatment. Move forward, take the first step and open heart to this world and opportunities.
So be happy in relationships! Have a great time. See you soon!
Hello, everybody!
Today was so busy, but an amazing day!
I had a lot of tasks fromor/at my job.
Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it today, so a. At first I had a long way (to travel) from my office to the necessary courts.
Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents.
Plus it has been raineding all day (and even now).
So, I had a lot of communication and i. It was really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explained something of the steps in, you know, the stages of the statement of claim.
I think this is better as two sentences.
The "you know" is pretty conversational.
I wasn't sure if "statement of claim" was a technical term so left it alone, but there might be a better way of phrasing this.
I really like to be in a have real-life conversation with people.
I wasn't sure what you meant by this, face-to-face?
And it is funny, but aton the another sidehand I had a lot of troubles!
I wasn't sure what you meant here, did you mean after the conversation you had difficulties?
Then one woman on the cafe, who works there, saicafe worker told me that the soup iwas vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to/for me).
This flows a little better
But when I taken thisook the soup, I saw… I saw skin of(some) chicken skin.
But I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left this place without thoughts about repeat visit.
or "I just ate the mashed potatoes I had ordered"
or "left this place, deciding not to visit again".
Then one car got dirty my jeans dirty.
After, when I set atwas in the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was/had finished), my coworker rememberinded me about one things… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact theyat they had taken my request for the court!
or "I forgot to take a receipt for my court request".
I needed to return back.
So I got to the office ato the end of the work day.
I was going to theent to my friend's party!
And we ate so much/such tasty food, it was awesome.
We talked a lot, we spenthad a nice time.
Now, I’m going to home by subway.
I am tired a little bit tired, but I am very happy.
I’m sure that all situations, all the tasks wthat life gives to us isare useful, is and good for us.
They teach us something new, something important.
The whole world has a plan tofor us, and it is a very personal plan.
I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe route / I'm safe.
You can’might not imagine it, but I have struggles with communication, - I need to make an efforts, but it is worths it.
Sometimes, I feel like no one need tos me.
But I still go in the lifeforward in life building connections with people, and there is my treatment - this is my solution/approach/attitude.
I didn't understand this sentence - this is what I thought you might mean.
Move forward, take the first step, and open your heart to this world and opportunities.
or "have an open heart"
Feedback
I enjoyed your text. Nicely written, sounds like a busy day! Your mistakes were small, and rarely got in the way of understanding.
Your style is very conversational: lots of your sentences are structured as if you are speaking. If you want to write more formally, you'd need to rely less on brackets, have less exclamation points, and use less "so"s. But there's nothing wrong with writing conversationally if that's your style :)
May 13, A Busy Day
Hello everybody!
Today was so busy, but an amazing day!
I had a lot of tasks fromto do for my job.
What you wrote isn't wrong - this is just better!
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Make sure you specify what 'it' refers to!
Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents.
Plus it has been raineding all day (and even now).
So I had a lot of communicnversations, and it wasthey were really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explain something in steps in, you know, stages of the statement of claim.
I think conversations is the correct word to use here. Let me know if not!
I really like to be in a lifve conversation with people.
And it is funny, but aton the another side ? I had a lot of troubles!
Make sure you specify what you are on the other side of!
Rain, again.
Then one woman oin the cafe, who works there, said to me that sthe soup is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to me).
I think you mean to say 'soup' but let me know if not!
But when I taken thisbegan to eat it/drink it, I saw… I saw skin of chicken skin.
For any food item, use the verbs 'to eat' or 'to drink'. For soup, you can use both!
It was terrible.
But I justI also ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left thise place without thoughts about repeat visitinking I would come back.
You can help your story by adding in why you didn't like the mashed potatoes!
Then onea car got dirty my jeans dirty.
What you wrote isn't wrong, 'a' is just better than 'one' here!
After, when I set agot the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was finished), my coworker rememberinded me about one things… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact they takenat they took my request for the court!
I needed to return back.
You can either say 'return' or 'go back'!
So I got to the office ato the end of the work day.
And!...
The story didn’oesn't end.
Since you are telling the story NOW, it's best to use the present tense!
I was going to the my friend's party!
And we ate souch tasty food, it was awesome.
We talked a lot, we spenthad a nice time.
Now, I’m going to home by subway.
I am tired a little bit tired, but I am very happy.
I’'m sure that all situations, all tasks what life gives to us is useful, isare good for us.
A great idiom/phrase is 'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger'!
They teach us something new, something important.
The whole world has a plan tofor us, and it is a very personal plan.
I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe one/I'm safe.
I think, the key of my life is the people that surrounding me.
You can’t imagine, but I have struggles with communication, I need to make an efforts, but it's worths it.
Sometimes, I feel like no one need tos me.
But I still go ion thein life c. Connection with people, and there is my treatment.
Move forward, take the first step and open your heart to this world and opportunities.
So be happy in relationships!
Have a great time.
See you soon!
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Well done! I really enjoyed your story! Very good work! :)
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So I had a lot of communication and it was really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explain something steps in, you know, stages of the statement of claim.
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And it is funny, but at the another side I had a lot of troubles!
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