Sept. 25, 2025
To be honest, I don't remember which one I watched 2 days ago (and I also forgot to write a review here, sorry:()
The movie started in the Nebuchadnezzar, it is the ship of our characters. Neo is definitely another person, he's stronger, more intelligent and obviously looks different, like more wise or something like that. We also can watch to Trinity, she's flexing a black outfit and it's so hot! :) but the first scene that we can see her, she dies because she's fighting against an agent (the agents are like machines and they're the strongest thing in the Matrix). After that, they arrived to Zion, it is the only human city in 2999. They have a problem, the sentinels (they're big machines that could destroy Zion without problem) are going to Zion, and isn't just one or two, are 250,000 Sentinels going to Zion.
After all these action scenes, an Oracle speech, etc etc... We arrive to the last scene, Neo, Trinity and Morpheus are into a big build looking for 'the door' (it is a white door where the Matrix creator is hidden), a lot of action scenes has passed until they found the door, only Neo 'the chosen one' can through the door, so Morpheus literally dissapear of our view. Neo has a talk with the creator of the Matrix, and he literally put two options in the table. Trinity dies and nothing else happens OR Zion is destroyed and nothing else happens (I have memorie issues, so probably these weren't the exact options lmao). Neo leaves the room and flies seeking to Trinity, when he finally found her, she already has a bullet in her body, after that she dies... but a couple of minutes later, Neo literally converts himself in a Machine and extract the bullet of Trinity's body, but she still being die, but another time, he tries to revive her with an electro shock and she come back to life.
After that we have an scene out of the Matrix where we can see the destroy of the Nebuchadnezzar, and our characters running for their lives. After that Neo destroys three Sentinels using his powers and the movie finished with a big cartel saying: 'To be continued'
Probably today I'll watch the next movie.
The Matrix Reloaded
"The" is also part of the movie title.
To be honest, I don't remember which one I watched 2 days ago (and I also forgot to write a review here, sorry :()
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The movie starteds in the Nebuchadnezzar, it is the ship of our (main) characters.
Generally, when describing story plots, we will use the present tense ("starts").
Neo is definitely another person,something else: he's stronger, more intelligent and obviously looks different, like morehe's wiser or something like that.
"Something else" can be used to describe someone or something that is exceptional in some way.
We also can watch tolook at Trinity, she's flexwearing a black outfit and it's so hot!
(1) "Watch to" is not a collocation we use here.
(2) I'm not too sure what "flexing" is supposed to mean in this context. I just replaced it with "wearing".
:) bBut in the first scene that we can seewhere we are introduced to her, she dies because she's fighting against an agent. (tThe agents are like machines and they're the strongest things in the Matrix).)
(1) The first word of the sentence should be capitalised.
(2) I rephrased your sentence slightly to make it sound more natural.
(3) I decided to make everything in the parentheses their own sentence, because there's no need to fit everything in one sentence.
(4) "The agents" is plural, so you should "things" and not "thing".
After that, they arrived to at Zion, it is the only human city in (the year) 2999.
(1) The phrase is "arrive at (a destination)".
(2) You can consider clarifying that "2999" refers to the year.
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(1) Keep the capitalisation of "sentinel" consistent. You should either capitalise every instance of the word, or not at all.
(2) I replaced the last part of the sentence with "of them" to avoid excessive repetition of "sentinel" and "going to Zion".
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(1) "We" shouldn't be capitalised because it's not the start of a new sentence.
(2) This original sentence is very lengthy and hard to read, so I've broken it into a few smaller ones.
(3) I've rephrased some parts of your writing so that it sounds more natural and fluent.
(4) The phrase is "disappear from (someone's) view". (You don't need the "our" here" though.)
(5) Again, note that when describing the plot of a story, we generally use the present tense.
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(1) It is not clear who "he" refers to here. I have rephrased the sentence to clarify this.
(2) I would merge this sentence with the one below. I have replaced the period with a colon to allow for this.
Trinity dies and nothing else happens OR Zion is destroyed and nothing else happens (I have memoriey issues, so these probably these weren't the exact options lmao).
The placement of "probably" is awkward.
Neo leaves the room and flies seeking tooff to find Trinity, but when he finally fouinds her, she already has a bullet in her body, after thatnd she dies... but a A couple of minutes later, Neo literally converts himself into a Machine and extracts the bullet ofut from Trinity's body, but she's still being die, butdead. But in another timeattempt, he tries to revive her with an electroic shock and she comes back to life.
(1) Again, this is a very lengthy sentence. It would be good to split it into smaller ones.
(2) I have again rephrased some parts of your writing so it sounds more fluent and natural.
(3) The phrase is "convert into (something)".
(4) The phrase is "extract (out) from".
After that, we have an scene outset outside of the Matrix where we can see the destroyuction of the Nebuchadnezzar, and our characters running for their lives.
(1) "Scene" does not begin with a vowel sound, so "an" is not used.
(2) "Destroy" is a verb. The noun would be "destruction".
After thatThen Neo destroys three Ssentinels using his powers and the movie finished with a big cartelption saying: 'To be continued'
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I'll probably watch the next movie today.
(1) I replaced "after that" with "then", because you've already used "after that" in the previous sentence.
(2) Again, you can capitalised "sentinel" if you wish, but you must do this for all instances of the word. The first time you used "sentinel", it wasn't capitalised.
(3) It's been a while since I last watched the movie, but I don't remember there being a cartel... perhaps you meant "caption".
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The first and second Matrix movies are fantastic! I've not yet watched the third one though.
Matrix Reloaded The Matrix Reloaded "The" is also part of the movie title. |
To be honest, I don't remember which one I watched 2 days ago (and I also forgot to write a review here, sorry:() The movie started in the Nebuchadnezzar, it is the ship of our characters. To be honest, I don't remember which one I watched 2 days ago (and I also forgot to write a review here, sorry :( Generally, when describing story plots, we will use the present tense ("starts"). |
Neo is definitely another person, he's stronger, more intelligent and obviously looks different, like more wise or something like that. Neo is definitely "Something else" can be used to describe someone or something that is exceptional in some way. |
We also can watch to Trinity, she's flexing a black outfit and it's so hot! We also can (1) "Watch to" is not a collocation we use here. (2) I'm not too sure what "flexing" is supposed to mean in this context. I just replaced it with "wearing". |
:) but the first scene that we can see her, she dies because she's fighting against an agent (the agents are like machines and they're the strongest thing in the Matrix). :) (1) The first word of the sentence should be capitalised. (2) I rephrased your sentence slightly to make it sound more natural. (3) I decided to make everything in the parentheses their own sentence, because there's no need to fit everything in one sentence. (4) "The agents" is plural, so you should "things" and not "thing". |
After that, they arrived to Zion, it is the only human city in 2999. After that, they arrive (1) The phrase is "arrive at (a destination)". (2) You can consider clarifying that "2999" refers to the year. |
They have a problem, the sentinels (they're big machines that could destroy Zion without problem) are going to Zion, and isn't just one or two, are 250,000 Sentinels going to Zion. They have a problem (1) Keep the capitalisation of "sentinel" consistent. You should either capitalise every instance of the word, or not at all. (2) I replaced the last part of the sentence with "of them" to avoid excessive repetition of "sentinel" and "going to Zion". |
After all these action scenes, an Oracle speech, etc etc... We arrive to the last scene, Neo, Trinity and Morpheus are into a big build looking for 'the door' (it is a white door where the Matrix creator is hidden), a lot of action scenes has passed until they found the door, only Neo 'the chosen one' can through the door, so Morpheus literally dissapear of our view. After all these action scenes, an Oracle speech, etc etc... (1) "We" shouldn't be capitalised because it's not the start of a new sentence. (2) This original sentence is very lengthy and hard to read, so I've broken it into a few smaller ones. (3) I've rephrased some parts of your writing so that it sounds more natural and fluent. (4) The phrase is "disappear from (someone's) view". (You don't need the "our" here" though.) (5) Again, note that when describing the plot of a story, we generally use the present tense. |
Neo has a talk with the creator of the Matrix, and he literally put two options in the table. Neo has a talk with the creator of the Matrix, (1) It is not clear who "he" refers to here. I have rephrased the sentence to clarify this. (2) I would merge this sentence with the one below. I have replaced the period with a colon to allow for this. |
Trinity dies and nothing else happens OR Zion is destroyed and nothing else happens (I have memorie issues, so probably these weren't the exact options lmao). Trinity dies and nothing else happens OR Zion is destroyed and nothing else happens (I have memor The placement of "probably" is awkward. |
Neo leaves the room and flies seeking to Trinity, when he finally found her, she already has a bullet in her body, after that she dies... but a couple of minutes later, Neo literally converts himself in a Machine and extract the bullet of Trinity's body, but she still being die, but another time, he tries to revive her with an electro shock and she come back to life. Neo leaves the room and flies (1) Again, this is a very lengthy sentence. It would be good to split it into smaller ones. (2) I have again rephrased some parts of your writing so it sounds more fluent and natural. (3) The phrase is "convert into (something)". (4) The phrase is "extract (out) from". |
After that we have an scene out of the Matrix where we can see the destroy of the Nebuchadnezzar, and our characters running for their lives. After that, we have a (1) "Scene" does not begin with a vowel sound, so "an" is not used. (2) "Destroy" is a verb. The noun would be "destruction". |
After that Neo destroys three Sentinels using his powers and the movie finished with a big cartel saying: 'To be continued' Probably today I'll watch the next movie.
(1) I replaced "after that" with "then", because you've already used "after that" in the previous sentence. (2) Again, you can capitalised "sentinel" if you wish, but you must do this for all instances of the word. The first time you used "sentinel", it wasn't capitalised. (3) It's been a while since I last watched the movie, but I don't remember there being a cartel... perhaps you meant "caption". |
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