I have used many times "there are" many times, and it seems really cumbersome.

Strange sentence, guessing what you mean.

I'll try to suggest alternatives!

What other good ways can I replace itsay this?

I think you've confused two sentence structures here. You could say what I suggest, or you could say "What are some good ways to replace it?" "replace" and "other" don't seem to work very well together - if you're asking for "other ways to replace it", that means you *already* have a way to replace it, and you want more, different ways.

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Seems most natural. "of the MUJI" is wrong, you would say "by MUJI" or "from MUJI". But here we don't actually need to say either of these, we can just use the possessive.

There are two mainI have two reasons to suggest things.

The original sentence was fine, but you wanted an alternative.

First and foremost, there are many sellers in the production ball - -point pen market has many sellers.

I'm not clear on why you had "production" in this sentence, it seems unnecessary. Apart from that, fine, but again you wanted an alternative.

I should mention that this thing you're doing where you write "ball - point" is wrong, definitely don't do that. Where we use a hyphen to form one word by joining two, we do not use spaces.

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The final alternative!

Corrected, the original sentence should be "There are other pen production firms besides MUJI". "except" doesn't fit.

Because the barriers tof production ball - -point pen production are few, and there is a lack of technical requirements.

Grammatically, I guess what's going on here is that "production" is the noun and "ball-point pen" is the adjective. So it should be in front. "Production ball-point pen" makes it seem like "production" is an adjective - like you are talking about pens that are used for production, or something.

Unlike "Oligopoly" and "Monopoly", theywhich have high barriers and few sellers.

You need the determiner "which" here. "Unlike ..., they have" makes it seem like you are saying that some previously mentioned thing has high barriers and few sellers, unlike oligopolies or monopolies.

You could say, alternatively: "This is unlike 'oligopoly' or 'monopoly'. They have high barriers and few sellers."

The firms can not do whatever they want in this market.

I would prefer "The firms in this market cannot do whatever they want", but I think what you have is okay, just feels a little loose.

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I think "each" generally wants a singular noun, or for a member to be sort of picked out of a plural like this: "each of the firms". Hard to explain. Easier to explain why all these pens are plural: you're not talking about one pen, you're talking about all of them.

"differentiate" is weird here, though I haven't corrected it because I'm not sure it's wrong. Usually it's used like this: "A is differentiated from B by C", which means that you can tell that A is different from B by inspecting the feature C. Here I would just say "slightly different".

Maybe sSome of them have many patterns, some of them have no patterns, some of them are writtene in blue, and others are writtene in black.

You've used passive voice "are written" here, I don't know why you did this but you definitely shouldn't have :)

"Maybe" doesn't quite fit here. It makes it sound like you don't actually know that these are differences; you're just suggesting that they might be. You're leaving open the possibility that, for example, all pens write in black.

If you were comparing two *specific* pens, or two specific collections of pens, you might use "maybe". "Maybe one of them has many patterns and another has no patterns. Or maybe one of them writes in blue and others write in black." Here these are just suggestions. It's possible that both of the pens have no pattern and write in black, but one of these features *may* be the difference.