March 31, 2021
Ma Tao
Armed with knowledge, Ma Tao knows how to look at the ginger market from a market perspective. "In the process of continuous trading and observation, I have mastered the law of ginger price changes, and I know when to buy and sell ginger to get more profits". According to Ma Tao's method, they earned 500,000 yuan that year. Then he and his younger brother went to Puyang, Henan province to buy loofah and took it to Fuyang for selling, and every time the loofah was in short supply.
Ma Tao
Armed with the knowledge, Ma Tao knows how to look at the ginger market from a marketn expert's perspective.
"Armed with knowledge" is not wrong, but "the" here makes it specifically mean "she knows how to shop for ginger."
market -> expert's. I'm assuming this is what was meant, though I'm not completely sure.
"In the process of continuous trading and observation, I have mastered the law of ginger price changes, and I know when to buy and sell ginger to get more profits".
According to Ma Tao's method, they earned 500,000 yuan that year.
Then he and his younger brother went to Puyang, in the Henan province, to buy loofahs and took ithem to Fuyang forto selling, and, every time the loofahs wasere in short supply.
Selling usually refers to the plural. Ex. "We sell tomatoes", so changed "loofah" to "loofahs". Also keep in mind that English requires commas after "exposition". Ex. "On Tuesday, I went to Denver, in the state of Colorado, to ski."
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Great job! I think you're in good shape, but would suggest reviewing plurals.
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Ma Tao This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Armed with knowledge, Ma Tao knows how to look at the ginger market from a market perspective. Armed with the knowledge, Ma Tao knows how to look at the ginger market from a "Armed with knowledge" is not wrong, but "the" here makes it specifically mean "she knows how to shop for ginger." market -> expert's. I'm assuming this is what was meant, though I'm not completely sure. |
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"In the process of continuous trading and observation, I have mastered the law of ginger price changes, and I know when to buy and sell ginger to get more profits". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to Ma Tao's method, they earned 500,000 yuan that year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then he and his younger brother went to Puyang, Henan province to buy loofah and took it to Fuyang for selling, and every time the loofah was in short supply. Then he and his younger brother went to Puyang, in the Henan province, to buy loofahs and took Selling usually refers to the plural. Ex. "We sell tomatoes", so changed "loofah" to "loofahs". Also keep in mind that English requires commas after "exposition". Ex. "On Tuesday, I went to Denver, in the state of Colorado, to ski." |
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