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April 1, 2021

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Ma Tao

Understand the market, circulate land to grow vegetables.
At the end of 2016, Ma Tao, who completed the primitive accumulation of capital, thought about how to take the next step in life. "At that time, land transfer was popular, and all kinds of industrial and commercial capital rushed into the game. Ma Tao seriously considered becoming a professional farmer for the first time:"Why don't we transfer land to grow vegetables by ourselves? We have our own familiar sales channels."
In April 2017, Ma Tao built the first vegetable growing shed in Sanhe Town, Yingzhou District and began to grow leafy vegetables.

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Ma Tao

Understanding the market, circulateand cultivating land to grow vegetables.

Context tells me that I think this may be a more descriptive word to use here, for what you're writing about.

At the end of 2016, Ma Tao, who had completed the priminitiveal accumulation of capital, thoughtwas thinking about how to take the next step in life.

"At that time, land transferacquisition was popular, and all kinds of industrial and commercial capitalventures rushed into the game.

Ma Tao seriously considered becoming a professional farmer for the first time:. "Why don't we transferacquire land to grow vegetables by ourselves?

We already have our own familiar sales channels."

"Sales channels" is a very uncommon term, outside economics and business specialization. Maybe consider using "distributors" instead?

"

In April 2017, Ma Tao built the first vegetable growing shed in Sanhe Town, Yingzhou District, and began to grow leafy vegetables.

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Jack

April 2, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Ma Tao


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Understand the market, circulate land to grow vegetables.


Understanding the market, circulateand cultivating land to grow vegetables.

Context tells me that I think this may be a more descriptive word to use here, for what you're writing about.

At the end of 2016, Ma Tao, who completed the primitive accumulation of capital, thought about how to take the next step in life.


At the end of 2016, Ma Tao, who had completed the priminitiveal accumulation of capital, thoughtwas thinking about how to take the next step in life.

"At that time, land transfer was popular, and all kinds of industrial and commercial capital rushed into the game.


"At that time, land transferacquisition was popular, and all kinds of industrial and commercial capitalventures rushed into the game.

Ma Tao seriously considered becoming a professional farmer for the first time:"Why don't we transfer land to grow vegetables by ourselves?


Ma Tao seriously considered becoming a professional farmer for the first time:. "Why don't we transferacquire land to grow vegetables by ourselves?

We have our own familiar sales channels.


We already have our own familiar sales channels."

"Sales channels" is a very uncommon term, outside economics and business specialization. Maybe consider using "distributors" instead?

"


"

In April 2017, Ma Tao built the first vegetable growing shed in Sanhe Town, Yingzhou District and began to grow leafy vegetables.


In April 2017, Ma Tao built the first vegetable growing shed in Sanhe Town, Yingzhou District, and began to grow leafy vegetables.

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