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Jack

April 1, 2021

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Ma Tao

This year is the first year of rural revitalization. As a professional farmer, Ma Tao hopes that he can use more of his ingenuity and contribute to the development of his hometown. In Ma Tao's office building, a classroom that can accommodate 300 people is named"Qingchuang Xiaozhan". Ma Tao is looking forward to this "Qingchuang Xiaozhan", which can attract more friends who love "agriculture, rural areas and farmers" to join. Exchange learning ideas, stimulate entrepreneurial passion, cultivate more talents for rural revitalization, and help rural development together.

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Ma Tao

This year is the first year of rural revitalization.

As a professional farmer, Ma Tao hopes that he can use more of his ingenuity and contribute to the development of his hometown.

In Ma Tao's office building, a classroom that can accommodate 300 people iswill be named "Qingchuang Xiaozhan".

Based on the next sentence, it seems the classroom is not yet set up since Ma Tao is "looking forward" to it. This means you should use future tense of "will be named" in this sentence.

(Or, if it is already set up, you can change the next sentence to say "Ma Tao is looking forward to using")

Ma Tao is looking forward to this "Qingchuang Xiaozhan", which can attract more friends who love "agriculture, rural areas, and farmers" to join.

ETogether they can exchange learning ideas, stimulate entrepreneurial passion, cultivate more talents for rural revitalization, and help rural development together.

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Jack

April 5, 2021

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Thank you very much.

This year is the first year of rural revitalization.


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Ma Tao


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a professional farmer, Ma Tao hopes that he can use more of his ingenuity and contribute to the development of his hometown.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In Ma Tao's office building, a classroom that can accommodate 300 people is named"Qingchuang Xiaozhan".


In Ma Tao's office building, a classroom that can accommodate 300 people iswill be named "Qingchuang Xiaozhan".

Based on the next sentence, it seems the classroom is not yet set up since Ma Tao is "looking forward" to it. This means you should use future tense of "will be named" in this sentence. (Or, if it is already set up, you can change the next sentence to say "Ma Tao is looking forward to using")

Ma Tao is looking forward to this "Qingchuang Xiaozhan", which can attract more friends who love "agriculture, rural areas and farmers" to join.


Ma Tao is looking forward to this "Qingchuang Xiaozhan", which can attract more friends who love "agriculture, rural areas, and farmers" to join.

Exchange learning ideas, stimulate entrepreneurial passion, cultivate more talents for rural revitalization, and help rural development together.


ETogether they can exchange learning ideas, stimulate entrepreneurial passion, cultivate more talents for rural revitalization, and help rural development together.

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