April 1, 2021
Ma Tao
Grow vegetables needs good management. The reporter has visited Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company for many interviews. They often see Ma Tao and Liu Ning go into the greenhouse to guide workers in picking vegetables. They have strict requirements for the appearance and quality of vegetables. It's very different from the attitude of their parents who look at the same thing. They regard growing and picking vegetables as a career and spending a lot of energy. "grow and pick vegetables like embroidery to ensure the quality of the vegetables."
Ma Tao
Grow vegetables needs good managementThe cultivation of vegetables requires a well-planned routine and careful nurturing.
"Management" is a good word to describe something that requires organisation, to be honest I can't think of a better individual word to describe this, which is why I was forced to split it up into two different ones - "nurturing" meaning to encourage someone or something to grow and develop in a certain way, I think this is more appropriate to describe the growing of vegetables.
There's a reporter haswho's been visiteding Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company for manyseveral interviews.
Since you are introducing the reporter in this sentence, you should avoid using the definite article "the" at the start of this sentence, it sounds better to introduce the existence of the reporter, I think.
They often see Ma Tao and Liu Ning go into the greenhouse to guideassist workers in picking vegetables.
Absolutely correct usage of the pronoun "in", however in such sentences describing "in" (some activity) the verb used by almost all english speakers is "to assist" or you can also say "to aid" these sound much more natural.
They have strict requirements for the appearance and quality of vegetables.
It's very different from the attitude of their parents who look atengage in the same thingactivity.
Your sentence is clearly understandable, I just tried to make it sound more eloquent, so you would sound more like a well-educated speaker of english.
They regard growing and picking vegetables as a career and spending a lot of energytime and energy on it.
The addition of "on it" is used to refer back to the activity of growing and picking vegetables.
"grow and pick vegetables like embroideryThe cultivation of vegetables should be treated as an art form to ensure the quality of the vegetables."
While I think it would be unfair to say your use of "embroidery" is wrong, since I like this, moreover a native speaker might use this as a poetic analogy, I guess perhaps you just meant a more general art form. Also, we can use "cultivation" as a single word to replace "growing and picking".
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April 2, 2021
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Grow vegetables needs good management.
"Management" is a good word to describe something that requires organisation, to be honest I can't think of a better individual word to describe this, which is why I was forced to split it up into two different ones - "nurturing" meaning to encourage someone or something to grow and develop in a certain way, I think this is more appropriate to describe the growing of vegetables. |
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The reporter has visited Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company for many interviews. There's a reporter Since you are introducing the reporter in this sentence, you should avoid using the definite article "the" at the start of this sentence, it sounds better to introduce the existence of the reporter, I think. |
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They often see Ma Tao and Liu Ning go into the greenhouse to guide workers in picking vegetables. They often see Ma Tao and Liu Ning go into the greenhouse to Absolutely correct usage of the pronoun "in", however in such sentences describing "in" (some activity) the verb used by almost all english speakers is "to assist" or you can also say "to aid" these sound much more natural. |
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They have strict requirements for the appearance and quality of vegetables. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's very different from the attitude of their parents who look at the same thing. It's very different from the attitude of their parents who Your sentence is clearly understandable, I just tried to make it sound more eloquent, so you would sound more like a well-educated speaker of english. |
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They regard growing and picking vegetables as a career and spending a lot of energy. They regard growing and picking vegetables as a career and spend The addition of "on it" is used to refer back to the activity of growing and picking vegetables. |
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"grow and pick vegetables like embroidery to ensure the quality of the vegetables."
While I think it would be unfair to say your use of "embroidery" is wrong, since I like this, moreover a native speaker might use this as a poetic analogy, I guess perhaps you just meant a more general art form. Also, we can use "cultivation" as a single word to replace "growing and picking". |
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