May 19, 2026
我们为什么学习英语?在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。
why do we learn english? In DOUYIN application I scan a vedio that it say one people to learn english suddenly when he worked after some years, he maybe somethings that it can change his eckonowlage. Ofcouse, it enough to issue his moving of tried his best struge due to he recive information. Besides, I learn english for going abroad and playing eye.
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Why do we learn English?
我们为什么学习英语? 我们为什么学习英语?
why do we learn english?
Correction: Why do we learn English?
Capitalise the first letter of a sentence and the first letter in 'English'
在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。 在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。
In DOUYIN application I scan a vedio that it say one people to learn english suddenly when he worked after some years, he maybe somethings that it can change his eckonowlage.
Correction: In the Douyin app, I saw a video saying that when someone suddenly begins learning English after working for some years, it may be because something challenged his existing knowledge.
This sentence is difficult to understand. At your level, it may help to attempt to use shorter sentences at first.
Note spelling errors on video and knowledge
当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。 当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。
Ofcouse, it enough to issue his moving of tried his best struge due to he recive information. Besides, I learn english for going abroad and playing eye.
Correction: Of course, it is enough to assume his main motivation is due to receiving information. Beyond this reason, I learn English for going abroad and broadening my horizons.
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This is a great start, but I would advise you to attempt shorter sentences at this early stage so you can work on basic grammar and vocabulary.
Note that in Lang Correct you should put your work in English in the first box and in your native language in the second box to make it easier to give feedback!
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I think you have your Chinese text and your English text in the wrong boxes! I am not able to correct your text at the moment due to this, but if you switch them I will be able to :)
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我们为什么学习英语? 我们为什么学习英语? 我们为什么学习英语? why do we learn english? Correction: Why do we learn English? Capitalise the first letter of a sentence and the first letter in 'English' |
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在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。 在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。 在抖音APP上,我看到了这样一段话,说是当一个人工作很多年,突然开始学英语,他一定接触到了某种突破他认知的信息,这种信息带来的冲击观足以影响他的行为,并为此付出。 In DOUYIN application I scan a vedio that it say one people to learn english suddenly when he worked after some years, he maybe somethings that it can change his eckonowlage. Correction: In the Douyin app, I saw a video saying that when someone suddenly begins learning English after working for some years, it may be because something challenged his existing knowledge. This sentence is difficult to understand. At your level, it may help to attempt to use shorter sentences at first. Note spelling errors on video and knowledge |
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当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。 当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。 当然,除了这个原因,更多的是学英语希望能够出国,开拓视野。 Ofcouse, it enough to issue his moving of tried his best struge due to he recive information. Besides, I learn english for going abroad and playing eye. Correction: Of course, it is enough to assume his main motivation is due to receiving information. Beyond this reason, I learn English for going abroad and broadening my horizons. |
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