yesterday
Looking at the sky
When I look at the sky, especially at night, I like to think about how many similar places there are to our planet, also I wonder if everything is part of one living being. Its beautiful and mysterious at the same time because the universe is infinity and, we still don't know him well sometimes we are arrogant and we believe the best in technology and we fight amongst ourselves, believing ourselves to be superior, instead of uniting to protect our planet and discover the universe. But I believe that there are dark forces preventing us moving forward.
When I look at the sky, especially at night, I like to think about how many similar places there are to our planet, . I also I wonder if everything is part of one living being.
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It's = It is
Universe is not male (no gender/object = it)
sSometimes we are arrogant and w. We believe the best in technology and we fight amongst ourselves, believing ourselves to bwe are superior, instead of uniting to protect our planet and discover the universe.
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Looking at the sky |
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When I look at the sky, especially at night, I like to think about how many similar places there are to our planet, also I wonder if everything is part of one living being. When I look at the sky, especially at night, I like to think about how many similar places there are to our planet These are 2 independent clauses added together using a comma (comma splice). You would need either FANBOYS or a semicolon |
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Its beautiful and mysterious at the same time because the universe is infinity and, we still don't know him well It's beautiful and mysterious at the same time because the universe is infinit Its= possessive It's = It is Universe is not male (no gender/object = it) |
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sometimes we are arrogant and we believe the best in technology and we fight amongst ourselves, believing ourselves to be superior, instead of uniting to protect our planet and discover the universe.
This is a very long list so you should break it up into multiple sentences. |
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But I believe that there are dark forces preventing us moving forward. |
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