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amahle

April 29, 2025

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Little words motivates

I am unmotivated person with small cycle of positive people around me I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so i don't get disappointed on the outcome of that particular thing i expected but i have noticed that i don't get courage, there were no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking. Today my math teacher said i am doing good so far and that made my day i couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me

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Little wWords mMotivates

I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so iI don't get disappointed onby the outcome of thatany particular thing i expected, but iI have noticed that iI don't getain courage, and there weare no words tohat could motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Today, my math teacher said iI am doing good so far, and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinkingoughts and that, that is healthy for me.

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Your English is very good, just make sure you remember to put full stops (periods) in between sentences, and don't let sentences run on too long.

I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so ithat I don't get disappointed on the outcome of thate particular thing i expected but i. I have noticed that iI don' not get courage, there weare no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Most of the words are correct and make sense. The tenses change are inconsistent though. So for the last sentence; I changed it to the present tense because of the first line 'I don't get courage'. But I also could have changed it to the past tense based on 'there were no words to motivate me'. Nice work overall :)

Today my math teacher said i am doing good so far and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me.

Beautiful :)

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Nice work! Just need to watch your tenses and full stops.

I am unmotivated person with small cycle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so iI don't get disappointed on the outcome of that particular thing iI expected, but iI have noticed that iI don't get courage, there were no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Great, but your main issue is run-on sentences. Try reading what you write out loud. If it is too long to say in one breath, add a full stop. If you pause for a moment while reading the sentence, add a comma :)

Today my math teacher said iI am doing good so far and t. That made my day iand I couldn't stop smiling and n. Now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me

Try not to use "and" more than once in a sentence!

Little words motivatesare bad

U should realise

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Luncas

May 14, 2025

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Ye

I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts, so iI don't get disappointed onby the outcome of that particular thing i. I expected but iI have noticed that iI don't gethave courage, t. There weare no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

A good start! You should know that by learning another language you are already ahead of so many people, that’s something to be positive about!

Today my math teacher said iI am doing good so far and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling, and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me

Excellent.

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AJDP

May 7, 2025

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Good work, don’t forget to use punctuation and to capitalise ‘I’.

Little words motivates


Little words motivatesare bad

U should realise

Little wWords mMotivates

I am unmotivated person with small cycle of positive people around me I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so i don't get disappointed on the outcome of that particular thing i expected but i have noticed that i don't get courage, there were no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.


I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts, so iI don't get disappointed onby the outcome of that particular thing i. I expected but iI have noticed that iI don't gethave courage, t. There weare no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

A good start! You should know that by learning another language you are already ahead of so many people, that’s something to be positive about!

I am unmotivated person with small cycle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so iI don't get disappointed on the outcome of that particular thing iI expected, but iI have noticed that iI don't get courage, there were no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Great, but your main issue is run-on sentences. Try reading what you write out loud. If it is too long to say in one breath, add a full stop. If you pause for a moment while reading the sentence, add a comma :)

I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so ithat I don't get disappointed on the outcome of thate particular thing i expected but i. I have noticed that iI don' not get courage, there weare no words to motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Most of the words are correct and make sense. The tenses change are inconsistent though. So for the last sentence; I changed it to the present tense because of the first line 'I don't get courage'. But I also could have changed it to the past tense based on 'there were no words to motivate me'. Nice work overall :)

I am an unmotivated person with a small cyircle of positive people around me. I have always filled my mind with negative thoughts so iI don't get disappointed onby the outcome of thatany particular thing i expected, but iI have noticed that iI don't getain courage, and there weare no words tohat could motivate me to shifting my mind into positive thinking.

Today my math teacher said i am doing good so far and that made my day i couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me


Today my math teacher said iI am doing good so far and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling, and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me

Excellent.

Today my math teacher said iI am doing good so far and t. That made my day iand I couldn't stop smiling and n. Now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me

Try not to use "and" more than once in a sentence!

Today my math teacher said i am doing good so far and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinking and that, that is healthy for me.

Beautiful :)

Today, my math teacher said iI am doing good so far, and that made my day i. I couldn't stop smiling and now my mind is filled with positive thinkingoughts and that, that is healthy for me.

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