May 15, 2021
Listening to Old Music
I am now copying my music files to a data storage in my new Mac Mini PC.
I already organized some files from my phone, but a lot of files were not organized.
The new PC has huge space for my music files that I can handle them more easily.
During copying files to the PC, I am listening music as well.
I liked the music in high school and in university.
When listening the music, I reminisce about my past.
I can remind my old good days.
I will listen to the music again and again
Listening to Old Music
I am nowcurrently copying my music files to a data storage inover to my new Mac Mini PC.
Your sentence has no actual errors, but I feel like it's awkward. I get the impression you're doing this *as you write*, so "currently" would be a good word. You don't need to specify that you're copying to a data storage component on your computer, you can just say you're copying it over/to/onto your computer. And, as a computer nerd, Macs and PCs are different things :) but even normal people would usually say "my Mac" rather than "my Mac PC" - you just assume your listener knows what a Mac is, usually.
I already organized some files from my phone, but a lot of files were not organized.
The new PC has huge space for my music files that, so I can handlstore them more easily.
"store" seems more natural than "handle" here, handling something is more like picking it up and manipulating it.
DuringWhile copying files to the PC, I am listening to music as well.
The rule is apparently that you use "during" with a noun. During dinner, during the movie, during my last year at college. "copying" can *potentially* be noun-like as a gerund, but I think it maybe only works if you use an article with it - "During the copying, I listen to music". But that's awkward and "while" sounds much better.
I liked the musict's music that I liked in high school and inat university.
"in university" sounds a bit awkward to me.
I change the sentence structure here because, really, the music is the subject, the music is what you're talking about. "I liked the music" sounds very... general? At first I thought you were just saying "I liked music" and you'd got "the" in there as an error. Like you were speaking about your own habits, not talking about this particular music. So it's better with emphasis this way around.
When listening to the music, I reminisce about my past.
I can remind my old gooember my good old days.
Or "I am reminded of my good old days". The subject of "remind" is the thing that provokes a recollection from the memory of the object, so we'd use passive voice here. Or "The music reminds me".
"old good days" sounds very wrong - quality/opinion (good) always comes before age (old) in the adjective order!
I will listen to the music again and again.
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Listening to fondly remembered music is the best thing :)
May 17, 2021
Thanks you!
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I am now copying my music files to a data storage in my new Mac Mini PC. I am Your sentence has no actual errors, but I feel like it's awkward. I get the impression you're doing this *as you write*, so "currently" would be a good word. You don't need to specify that you're copying to a data storage component on your computer, you can just say you're copying it over/to/onto your computer. And, as a computer nerd, Macs and PCs are different things :) but even normal people would usually say "my Mac" rather than "my Mac PC" - you just assume your listener knows what a Mac is, usually. |
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I already organized some files from my phone but a lot of files were not organized. |
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The new PC has huge space for my music files that I can handle them more easily. The new PC has huge space for my music files "store" seems more natural than "handle" here, handling something is more like picking it up and manipulating it. |
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During copying files to the PC, I am listening music as well.
The rule is apparently that you use "during" with a noun. During dinner, during the movie, during my last year at college. "copying" can *potentially* be noun-like as a gerund, but I think it maybe only works if you use an article with it - "During the copying, I listen to music". But that's awkward and "while" sounds much better. |
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I liked the music in high school and in university. I "in university" sounds a bit awkward to me. I change the sentence structure here because, really, the music is the subject, the music is what you're talking about. "I liked the music" sounds very... general? At first I thought you were just saying "I liked music" and you'd got "the" in there as an error. Like you were speaking about your own habits, not talking about this particular music. So it's better with emphasis this way around. |
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When listening the music, I reminisce about my past. When listening to the music, I reminisce about my past. |
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I can remind my old good days. I can rem Or "I am reminded of my good old days". The subject of "remind" is the thing that provokes a recollection from the memory of the object, so we'd use passive voice here. Or "The music reminds me". "old good days" sounds very wrong - quality/opinion (good) always comes before age (old) in the adjective order! |
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I will listen to the music again and again I will listen to the music again and again. |
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I already organized some files from my phone, but a lot of files were not organized. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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