Sept. 30, 2025
Lions
I like lions. They look so gorgeous and majestic. Their fur is sun-colored. I wonder how it feels to touch. It's rough, isn't it?
They are incredibly graceful and dangerous. I would be frightened if I saw one of them in real life, not in a zoo.
I like male lions more than female ones although from my point of view, females are more intimidating. The female often roars at the male, so I think she is the head of the family.
I was given a toy-lion when I was 7. Whenever I moved, I took it with me. Honestly, I'm proud of myself because he's still in great condition. Besides, my cat also looks like a lion. He's ginger and has quite a mane.
I'm not sure why I'm into lions, so unfortunately I can't answer the second part of the question. Perhaps the reason is that lions remind me of warm summer sunsets...
I wonder how it feels to touch(the) touch (it).
Use one of these, but NOT both. "how it feels to the touch" OR "how it feels to touch it".
It's (probably) rough, isn't it?
Maybe add "probably", so it seems like you are wondering / speculating about something.
Whenever I moved (houses / residences), I took it with me.
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Very good. Try and connect the sentences a bit more, so it flows better. It's 99% grammatically correct and has good vocabulary, but sometimes it feels like you're just listing things without much connection between each sentence.
Otherwise, very good!
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you! I really have some problems with connection, you are right
Oct. 1, 2025
No problem. The more you use the language, the easier it will become and you'll start to feel how to connect each sentence to the next. So don't worry about it too much!
Lions
I like lions.
They look so gorgeous and majestic.
I wonder how it feels to touch.
It's rough, isn't it?
They are incredibly graceful and dangerous.
I would be frightened if I saw one of them in real life, not in a zoo.
I like male lions more than female ones although from my point of view,but I think females are more intimidating.
The females often roars at the males, so I think she is the head of the family.
I was given a toy-lion when I was 7.
Whenever I moved, I took it with me.
Honestly, I'm proud of myself because he's still in great condition.
Besides, my cat also looks like a lion.
He's ginger and has quite a mane.
I'm not sure why I'm into lions, so unfortunately I can't answer the second part of the question.
Perhaps the reason is that lions remind me of warm summer sunsets...
huh
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you
Lions
I like lions.
They look so gorgeous and majestic.
Their fur is sun-colored.
I wonder how it feels to touch.
It's rough, isn't it?
They are incredibly graceful and dangerous.
I would be frightened if I saw one of them in real life, but not in a zoo.
I like male lions more than female ones, although from my point of view, females are more intimidating.
The female often roars at the male, so I think she is the head of the family.
I was given a toy-lion when I was 7.
Whenever I moved, I took it with me.
Honestly, I'm proud of myself because he's still in great condition.
Besides, my cat also looks like a lion.
He's ginger and has quite a mane.
I'm not sure why I'm into lions, so unfortunately I can't answer the second part of the question.
Perhaps the reason is that lions remind me of warm summer sunsets...
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Lions are very cool! Nice work 👍
Oct. 1, 2025
Thank you for your help😁
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I would be frightened if I saw one of them in real life, not in a zoo. I would be frightened if I saw one of them in real life, but not in a zoo. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like male lions more than female ones although from my point of view, females are more intimidating. I like male lions more than female ones, although from my point of view, females are more intimidating. I like male lions more than female ones |
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Whenever I moved, I took it with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Whenever I moved (houses / residences), I took it with me. |
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