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olivier_chen

June 23, 2021

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Life Is Not An Exam

Life is not an exam. We learn how to live by making mistakes.

Happiness is not a gift, but an ability. We fill our lives with too many things, until we are out of breath, then we stop and think about who we want to be? Where do you want to go? And how we can live a life without regrets.

In this era, we are focusing on running hard and forgetting to taste life. The hand of capital pushes us all the way forward. We value efficiency too much, so we miss many beautiful moments that we need to feel with our hearts.

If you have a cup of coffee, I hope it's not just for your work. You need to get along with yourself and talk to yourself sincerely.

I often take out my ipad and doodle on it in goodnotes. That is my best time-I forgot my troubles and poured all my thoughts into the tip of my apple pencil.

If you are tired, why not try to see how the greatest minds evaluate life? Perhaps, you will find motivation, inspiration or direction in life again from a certain sentence. Please be courageous and continue to live a wonderful life!


生活不是考试。我们通过犯错误来学习如何生活。
幸福,并不是一种恩赐,而是一种能力。我们用太多的东西填充自己的生活,一直到我们闯不过气来,然后我们停下来,思考我们想要成为谁?想要去什么地方?以及我们如何过一个不会后悔的人生。
这个时代,我们在专注于努力奔跑,而忘记了品味生活。资本的手推着我们一路向前,我们太看重效率,因此我们错失了很多需要用心灵感受的美好瞬间。
如果你有一杯咖啡,我希望那不只是用来应付你的工作的。你需要好好地和自己相处,真心地与自己对谈。
我常常拿出自己的ipad,随手在goodnotes里涂鸦,那是最美好的时光——我忘记了烦恼,将所有的思绪倾注apple pencil 的笔尖。
如果你累了,为什么不试着看看最伟大的头脑是如何评价生活的?或许,你会从某一句话中,再次找到动力、灵感或是生活的方向。请鼓起勇气,继续精彩地生活!

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Life Is Not An Exam

Life is not an exam.

We learn how to live by making mistakes.

Happiness is not a gift, but an ability.

We fill our lives with too many things, until we are out of breath, t. Then we stop and think about who we want to be?.

Or "only then do we stop..." if you want to sound a bit more poetic

Where do you want to go?

And how we can live a life without regrets.

This sentence is grammatically correct but incomplete unless it's a question, in which case you should write it like this: "And how can we live a life without regrets?"

In this era, we are focusing on running hard and forgetting to taste life.

This just clarifies the meaning a little–in the original sentence, it makes it sound like you're saying "we are focusing on running" AND "we are focusing on forgetting."

You could also write: "In this era, we focus on running hard, and/but we forget to taste life."

The hand of capital pushes us all the way forward.

We value efficiency too much, so we miss many beautiful moments that we need to feel with our hearts.

If you have a cup of coffee, I hope it's not just for your work.

You need to get along with yourself and talk to yourself sincerely.

I often take out my ipPad and doodle on it ion gGoodnotes.

Capitalize "Goodnotes" if it's an app name (proper noun).

Usually "on" an app, not "in" an app. "I spent 15 minutes on Facebook." "I watched the show on Netflix." "I shared it on Google docs."

That is my best time-I forgot my troubles and poured all my thoughts into the tip of my aApple pencil.

Apple is capitalized because it's a proper noun.

If you are tired, why not try to see how the greatest minds evaluate life?

Perhaps, you will find motivation, inspiration, or direction in life again from a certain sentence.

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olivier_chen

Sept. 8, 2021

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Thank you so much Aviva! : -))

Life Is Not An Exam


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Life is not an exam.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We learn how to live by making mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Happiness is not a gift, but an ability.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We fill our lives with too many things, until we are out of breath, then we stop and think about who we want to be?


We fill our lives with too many things, until we are out of breath, t. Then we stop and think about who we want to be?.

Or "only then do we stop..." if you want to sound a bit more poetic

Where do you want to go?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And how we can live a life without regrets.


And how we can live a life without regrets.

This sentence is grammatically correct but incomplete unless it's a question, in which case you should write it like this: "And how can we live a life without regrets?"

In this era, we are focusing on running hard and forgetting to taste life.


In this era, we are focusing on running hard and forgetting to taste life.

This just clarifies the meaning a little–in the original sentence, it makes it sound like you're saying "we are focusing on running" AND "we are focusing on forgetting." You could also write: "In this era, we focus on running hard, and/but we forget to taste life."

The hand of capital pushes us all the way forward.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We value efficiency too much, so we miss many beautiful moments that we need to feel with our hearts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have a cup of coffee, I hope it's not just for your work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need to get along with yourself and talk to yourself sincerely.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I often take out my ipad and doodle on it in goodnotes.


I often take out my ipPad and doodle on it ion gGoodnotes.

Capitalize "Goodnotes" if it's an app name (proper noun). Usually "on" an app, not "in" an app. "I spent 15 minutes on Facebook." "I watched the show on Netflix." "I shared it on Google docs."

That is my best time-I forgot my troubles and poured all my thoughts into the tip of my apple pencil.


That is my best time-I forgot my troubles and poured all my thoughts into the tip of my aApple pencil.

Apple is capitalized because it's a proper noun.

If you are tired, why not try to see how the greatest minds evaluate life?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Perhaps, you will find motivation, inspiration or direction in life again from a certain sentence.


Perhaps, you will find motivation, inspiration, or direction in life again from a certain sentence.

Please be courageous and continue to live a wonderful life!


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