May 9, 2026
On Loneliness
Today has been a strange day. I started my morning feeling happy, with a big smile on my face and great weather outside my window. But as the day went on, I felt lonely. My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy. My emotions turned gray. It's a weird emotion. You feel in your chest kind of an emptiness; it is an overwhelming sensation. After your body felt weak and without energy, your thoughts started to push harder. When it gets very strong, like today, you run out of energy and can't do anything. I have noticed that it happens when I have lived very isolated. When it has passed at least two weeks without hanging out with my boyfriend or other people outside my parents. That is when I feel very lonely.
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On Loneliness
Today has been a strange day.
I started my morning feeling happy, with a big smile on my face and great weather outside my window.
But as the day went on, I felt lonely.
My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing hour, I felt heavyier and heavier.
My parents left the house very early, and with every passing hour, I felt heavier and heavier.
My emotions turned gray.
It's a weird emotionfeeling.
It's a weird feeling.
You feel in your chest a kind of an emptiness; it is an overwhelming sensation.
You feel in your chest a kind of emptiness; it is an overwhelming sensation.
AfterOnce your body feltbegins to feel weak and without energy, your thoughts started to push hardrace faster.
Once your body begins to feel weak and without energy, your thoughts start to race faster.
When it gets very strong, like today, you run out of energy and can't do anything.
I have noticed that it happens when I have livedbeen very isolated.
I have noticed that it happens when I have been very isolated.
When it has passed at least two weeks have passed without hanging out with my boyfriend or other people outside of my parents.
When at least two weeks have passed without hanging out with my boyfriend or other people outside of my parents.
That is when I feel very lonely.
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Isolation is hard and when everyone's always busy, it's very easy to fall into.
On Loneliness
Today has been a strange day.
I started my morning feeling happy, with a big smile on my face and great weather outside my window.
But as the day went on, I felt lonely (or: I began to feel lonely). But as the day went on, I felt lonely (or: I began to feel lonely).
My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy. My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy.
“Heavy” is ok, but “heavier” would be more natural.
My emotions turned gray.
It's a weird emotion.
You feel in your chest kind of an emptiness in your chest; it is an overwhelming sensation.
You feel kind of an emptiness in your chest; it is an overwhelming sensation.
After your body feltels weak and without energy, your thoughts started to push harder.
After your body feels weak and without energy, your thoughts start to push harder.
When it gets very strong, like today, you run out of energy and can't do anything.
I have noticed that it happens when I have lived very isolated., when…
I have noticed that it happens when I have lived very isolated, when…
Merge this with the next sentence.
W…when it has passed at least two weeks have passed without hanging out with my boyfriend or other people {outside my family | aside from my parents}.
…when at least two weeks have passed without hanging out with my boyfriend or other people {outside my family | aside from my parents}.
That is when I feel very lonely.
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Well written! I hope you’re able to spend time with someone soon.
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Today has been a strange day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy. My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy. My parents left the house very early, and with every hour passing, I felt heavy. “Heavy” is ok, but “heavier” would be more natural.
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You feel in your chest kind of an emptiness; it is an overwhelming sensation.
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After your body felt weak and without energy, your thoughts started to push harder.
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When it gets very strong, like today, you run out of energy and can't do anything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have noticed that it happens when I have lived very isolated.
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