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My dearest Lotta,
Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk with you again after such a long time. The soup was splendid and I really enjoyed the mousse au chocolat we had for dessert. Picking the "broomsticks" for our lunch date was the perfect choice, I adored the wonderful table decorations. Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic in London is life at that time of the day. We must do this again very soon. Your company is always a pleasure. I must ask you a favour though. Me and Steve are going on holidays next week - the bahamas, can you imagine? I would much appreciate if you could water our plant while we are away. We will be gone for two weeks, but it will be more than enough if you could water them every third day. Please let me know if you have the time to do that, I will lend you my doorkeys then.
Kindest regards,
Rosalie

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Letter for a friend

My dearestDear Lotta,
Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk
withto you again after such a long time.!

The soup was splendid and I really enjoyed the mousse au chocolat we had for dessert.

Picking the "broomsticks" for our lunch date was the perfect choice, I adored the wonderful table decorations.

Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic in London is life at that time of the day.

We mustneed to do this again very soon.!

YI enjoy your company is always a pleasure.!

I must ask youCan you do me a favour though.?

AMERICA MOTHER FUCKER, FAVOR >>>>

Me and SteveSteven and I are going on holidaysvacation next week - the bBahamas, can you imagine?

AMERICA MOTHERFUCKER

I would muchreally appreciate it if you could water our plants while we a're away.

We will be gone for two weeks, but it will be more than enough if you could water them every third day.

Please let me know if you have the time to do thatime! If so, I will lend you my doorkeys then.

Kindest rRegards,
Rosalie

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this is very formal damn

My dDearest Lotta,

Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk with you again after such a long time.

Note that "my dearest" is very strong, whereas "Dear Lotta," would be typical for a friend

The soup was splendid and I really enjoyed the mousse au chocolat we had for dessert.

Picking the "bBroomsticks" for our lunch date was the perfect choice, I adored the wonderful table decorations.

Use the name of the restaurant, no quotes needed

Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic is in London is life at that time of the day.

We must do this again very soon.

Your company is always a pleasure.

I must ask you a favour though.

Me and Steve are going on holidays next week - tThe bBahamas, can you imagine?

I would muchreally appreciate if you could water our plant while we are away.

You'd typically either say "appreciate" or "very much appreciate." Just "much appreciate" is a bit awkward

We will be gone for two weeks, but it willould be more than enough if you could water ithem every third day.

Still in a hypothetical situation, so "would" not "will"

Note you have the singular "plant" in your previous line, but the plural "them" in this line. To make these agree, use "plants" + " them" or "plant" + "it"

Please let me know if you have the time to do that, and I will lend you my doorkeys then.

Kindest regards, Rosalie

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Great job

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studylemon

Sept. 30, 2025

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Thank you!

Your company is always a pleasure.


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YI enjoy your company is always a pleasure.!

I must ask you a favour though.


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I must ask youCan you do me a favour though.?

AMERICA MOTHER FUCKER, FAVOR >>>>

Me and Steve are going on holidays next week - the bahamas, can you imagine?


Me and Steve are going on holidays next week - tThe bBahamas, can you imagine?

Me and SteveSteven and I are going on holidaysvacation next week - the bBahamas, can you imagine?

AMERICA MOTHERFUCKER

I would much appreciate if you could water our plant while we are away.


I would muchreally appreciate if you could water our plant while we are away.

You'd typically either say "appreciate" or "very much appreciate." Just "much appreciate" is a bit awkward

I would muchreally appreciate it if you could water our plants while we a're away.

Kindest regards, Rosalie


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Kindest rRegards,
Rosalie

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Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic in London is life at that time of the day.


Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic is in London is life at that time of the day.

Again, I very much apologize for being late - you can imagine how busy traffic in London is life at that time of the day.

We must do this again very soon.


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We mustneed to do this again very soon.!

We will be gone for two weeks, but it will be more than enough if you could water them every third day.


We will be gone for two weeks, but it willould be more than enough if you could water ithem every third day.

Still in a hypothetical situation, so "would" not "will" Note you have the singular "plant" in your previous line, but the plural "them" in this line. To make these agree, use "plants" + " them" or "plant" + "it"

We will be gone for two weeks, but it will be more than enough if you could water them every third day.

Please let me know if you have the time to do that, I will lend you my doorkeys then.


Please let me know if you have the time to do that, and I will lend you my doorkeys then.

Please let me know if you have the time to do thatime! If so, I will lend you my doorkeys then.

My dearest Lotta, Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk with you again after such a long time.


My dDearest Lotta,

Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk with you again after such a long time.

Note that "my dearest" is very strong, whereas "Dear Lotta," would be typical for a friend

My dearestDear Lotta,
Thank you very much for lunch on Saturday, it was such a pleasure to talk
withto you again after such a long time.!

The soup was splendid and I really enjoyed the mousse au chocolat we had for dessert.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Picking the "broomsticks" for our lunch date was the perfect choice, I adored the wonderful table decorations.


Picking the "bBroomsticks" for our lunch date was the perfect choice, I adored the wonderful table decorations.

Use the name of the restaurant, no quotes needed

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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