April 4, 2021
Lemon pie and roast
I'll start with my least favorite food: roast. Around 2 years ago I felt a bad taste, that disgust gradually advanced. I don't know why but It happened.
It was like my body said "Nope". Now even if I try to eat meat (turkey, chicken, pig or bovine) I get a terrible headache and nauseas. I can only eat them with a sandwich or another things (in a sauce for example).
My favorite food is lemon pie, I really love this dessert. So sweet and acid at the same time. Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie or it's terrible. Many times I ate lemon pies so nasty and old. But I paid for it and I don't want to waste food or money, so I ate them anyways.
But if it's a lunch, lasagna is wonderful for me. It can have vegetals, two types of sauce, cheese, literally whatever you want to eat. It's like a tower of tasty things.
Talking about sauces, I really love white sauce. Spaguettis with white sauce, mushrooms and chives. It's so simple and nice.
I don't want to write so much today because I must to study. It's 13:56, lunch will be ready soon.
Honestly, I feel so clumsy when I read what I wrote.
I say to myself "come on, you can read pretty well. Where's your vocabulary?"
This is so poor, redundant and simple. I feel a bit pity.
Lemon pie and roast
I'll start with my least favorite food: roast meat.
We do sometimes talk about simply "roast". "I'm going to have a roast for dinner". But it's strange here. Unless you really mean the entire roast, vegetables and all.
Around 2 years ago I felt a bad taste, and that disgust gradually advanced.
This is fine grammatically once the "and" is there, but quite unnatural and slightly unclear. Something like "Around 2 years ago I started to feel that it tasted bad, and my sense of disgust with it has grown worse."?
I don't know why but Iit happened.
It was like my body said "Nope".
Now, even if I just try to eat meat (turkey, chicken, pig or bovine) I get a terrible headache and nauseas.
Or "and feel nauseous".
"even if" is used with things that are "minor", "slight", "inconsequential", things you would not expect to have the effect that they do. "Even if I do the smallest thing, I get a headache". "try" on its own doesn't really feel right with it, you'd want something to emphasise that trying is a small thing. "just try" works, or "try to eat a little", or "even if I try to eat meat that isn't roasted".
I can only eat them within a sandwich or another things (in a sauce for example).
My favorite food is lemon pie, I really love this dessert.
So sweet and acid at the same time.
Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie, or it's terrible.
Many times I 've eaten lemon pies that were so nasty and old.
Probably slightly ungrammatical to use "so" like this but very common :)
But I paid for it and I don't want to waste food or money, so I ate them anyways.
I'm not sure if "anyways" is an Americanism or just colloquial, but I would always say "anyway".
But if it's a lunch, lasagna is wonderful for me.
It can have vegetalbles, two types of sauce, cheese, literally whatever you want to eat.
It's like a tower of tasty things.
Talking about sauces, I really love white sauce.
Spaguhettis with white sauce, mushrooms and chives.
Spaghetti is almost always uncountable, I can't think of any time we'd use a plural form unless we were trying to be funny.
It's so simple and nice.
I don't want to write so much today because I must to study.
It's 13:56, lunch will be ready soon.
Honestly, I feel so clumsy when I read what I wrote.
I say to myself "come on, you can read pretty well.
Where's your vocabulary?
This is so poor, redundant and simple.
I feel a bit pityiful.
Probably what you mean?
This is a weird English thing that I can't explain. You can "feel pity", "feel happiness", "feel sadness", whatever. Feeling a noun is fine. But if you "feel a bit" of something, then it's always "feel a bit pitiful/piteous", "feel a bit happy", "feel a bit sad". Adjectives.
I think in general "a bit" will be used with adjectives. With a noun it's "a bit of".
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Writing is so much harder than reading, don't be so harsh on yourself :) Your vocabulary's in there, you just need to practice tunnelling down to it.
April 7, 2021
I'll start with my least favorite food: roast meat.
I wasn't sure if only roast is okay, thanks for explain it.
April 7, 2021
Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie, or it's terrible.
Wow, that's a minor but important detail. Thanks for it.
April 7, 2021
It can have vegetalbles, two types of sauce, cheese, literally whatever you want to eat.
I remember that I said to me "is vegetables, not vegetals" but I forgot to correct it.
April 7, 2021
I feel a bit pityiful.
I understand, thank you very much for your time.
It's true that writing is really hard compared with other actions. I can read or hear and understand, but if I try to express something I'm empty.
At least I'm doing an advance with langcorrect. The corrections are really useful, sometimes I'm down with my thoughts, but it's necessary to learn.
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I'll start with my least favorite food: roast. I'll start with my least favorite food: roast meat. We do sometimes talk about simply "roast". "I'm going to have a roast for dinner". But it's strange here. Unless you really mean the entire roast, vegetables and all. |
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Around 2 years ago I felt a bad taste, that disgust gradually advanced. Around 2 years ago I felt a bad taste, and that disgust gradually advanced. This is fine grammatically once the "and" is there, but quite unnatural and slightly unclear. Something like "Around 2 years ago I started to feel that it tasted bad, and my sense of disgust with it has grown worse."? |
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I don't know why but It happened. I don't know why but |
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It was like my body said "Nope". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now even if I try to eat meat (turkey, chicken, pig or bovine) I get a terrible headache and nauseas. Now, even if I just try to eat meat (turkey, chicken, pig or bovine) I get a terrible headache and nausea Or "and feel nauseous". "even if" is used with things that are "minor", "slight", "inconsequential", things you would not expect to have the effect that they do. "Even if I do the smallest thing, I get a headache". "try" on its own doesn't really feel right with it, you'd want something to emphasise that trying is a small thing. "just try" works, or "try to eat a little", or "even if I try to eat meat that isn't roasted". |
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I can only eat them with a sandwich or another things (in a sauce for example). I can only eat them |
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My favorite food is lemon pie, I really love this dessert. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So sweet and acid at the same time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie or it's terrible. Every time I go to a cafe I ask for it, unfortunately they usually don't have lemon pie, or it's terrible. |
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Many times I ate lemon pies so nasty and old. Many times I Probably slightly ungrammatical to use "so" like this but very common :) |
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But I paid for it and I don't want to waste food or money, so I ate them anyways. But I paid for it and I don't want to waste food or money, so I ate them anyways. I'm not sure if "anyways" is an Americanism or just colloquial, but I would always say "anyway". |
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But if it's a lunch, lasagna is wonderful for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It can have vegetals, two types of sauce, cheese, literally whatever you want to eat. It can have vegeta |
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It's like a tower of tasty things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Talking about sauces, I really love white sauce. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Spaguettis with white sauce, mushrooms and chives. Spag Spaghetti is almost always uncountable, I can't think of any time we'd use a plural form unless we were trying to be funny. |
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It's so simple and nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't want to write so much today because I must to study. I don't want to write so much today because I must |
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It's 13:56, lunch will be ready soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Honestly, I feel so clumsy when I read what I wrote. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I say to myself "come on, you can read pretty well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Where's your vocabulary? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is so poor, redundant and simple. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel a bit pity. I feel a bit pit Probably what you mean? This is a weird English thing that I can't explain. You can "feel pity", "feel happiness", "feel sadness", whatever. Feeling a noun is fine. But if you "feel a bit" of something, then it's always "feel a bit pitiful/piteous", "feel a bit happy", "feel a bit sad". Adjectives. I think in general "a bit" will be used with adjectives. With a noun it's "a bit of". |
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