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likeachild08

June 1, 2025

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Learning new things

Hello everybody.
It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinks.
I going to explain it. I was planned all quite a routine for improve my English skills but some days after that my dad´s die, my friend who had surgery, he not have nobody who can look after him. So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but on friday I carry him to the hospital again and I passed all night with him because he was filled bad again.
Among all of that, I thougth about the weird circunstances that it motived me to do this, because I never had looked after a sick person and ended to I came to the conclution that the live is teaching to look after somebody close to me or myself.
finally, it has been an interesting experience, take charge this responsability and I was surprised myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent for those tasks.
Is for that reason, I just today cought come to visit the page, thanks everybody that correct my last text, I hope from this monday I will be able to star my study and work routine.
Bye bye.


Aprendiendo cosas nuevas.
hola a todos, es extraño ver como, a veces tus planes no se desarrollan de la forma en que lo piensas.
Me explico: Yo tenia planeada toda una rutina de estudio para mejorar mis habilidades de Ingles, pero pocos dias despues de la muerte de mi padre, un amigo mio se sometio a una cirugia delicada y al salir no tenia quien cuidara de El, asi que lo traje a mi casa y con mi esposa lo estuvimos cuidando durante la semana pasada hasta el viernes que tuve que llevarlo nuevamente al hospital y pase toda la noche cuidandolo porque volvio a sentirse mal. En medio de todo esto meditaba sobre las extrañas circunstancias que me motivaron a hacer esto pues yo nunca habia cuidado un enfermo y llegue a la conclusion que quiza la vida me esta preparando para cuidar de alguien muy cercano a mi o quiza yo mismo.
en fin, ha sido interesante hacerme cargo de esta responsabilidad y me sorprendi a mi mismo al encontrar lo paciente y comprometido que puedo ser para estas tareas.
Por esta razon, apenas hoy pude volver a visitar la pagina, gracias a todos los que me corrigieron mi texto anterior y espero que a partir del lunes pueda normalizar mi rutina de estudio y trabajo.
Chao.

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Learning nNew tThings

Hello, everybody.

It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinks how plans don't always pan out.

I am going to explain it.

I was planned all quite an extensive routine forto improve my English skills but some days. Some time after that, my dad´s die,d and my friend who had surgery, heas not have nobodyne who can look after him.

I'm so sorry for your loss. RIP your dad. Hope your friend can have someone take care of him.

So, I brought him with my to my home, and m. My wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but othis week. On fFriday, I carry himied to the hospital again and. I passed all night with him because he was filled badelt sick again.

Among all of thatIn midst of the chaos, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because. I never had looked after a sick person and ended tobefore. Afterwards, I came to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching to look after somebody close to me or myself.

fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, to take charge this responsaibility and. I was surprised at myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitentted for thoese kinds of tasks.

What you did is admirable.

Is fFor that reason, I just today cought comewanted to visit the page, t. Thanks to everybody that corrected my last text,. I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routines.

Good luck!

Bye bye.

It's weird to see, the wayseeing that, sometimes, your plans isdo not develops in the watways that you thinks it might.

I going toLet me explain it.

I was planned all quiteout a routine forto improve my English skills but someskills in English, but a few days after that, my dad´s die,s and my friend, who just had surgery, he not have nobody who canneeds me to help look after him.

I'm not sure what you mean here, but this is how I am understanding it. Sorry about your dad, if this is true.

So I brought him wit my to my home, and m. My wife and I we are lookinged after him for all pof lasst week, but on friday II had to carry him back to the hospital again andon Friday. I pwassed with him all night with him because he was filledeeling bad again.

Among all of thatbove all, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because I've never had looked after a sick person and ended to I came to ttaken care of sick person before. The conclutsion thatI came to was theat livfe is teaching me to look after somebody close to me or myself.others and take care of them.

finally, it haIt's been an interesting experience, take charge. With this responsaibility and, I was surprised in myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent for those tasksted person.

Is fFor that reason, I just today cought come to revisited the page, thanksis website. Thank you to everybodyone that corrected my last text,. I hope from this monday I will be able to starto resume my studyies and my work routine starting Monday.

It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is nodon't develops in the waty that you thinks.

I going toLet me explain it.

I washad planned all quite a routine forto improve my English skills but some days after that my dad´s dieath, my friend who had a surgery, he and did not have nobody who can look after him.

So I brought him with mye to my homuse, and my wife and I we are looking after him for allthis passt week, but on fFriday I carryied him to the hospital again and I passed allspent the whole night with him because he was filledfelt bad again.

Among all of that, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because I had never had looked after a sick person and ended tobefore and I came to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

finally, it has been an interesting experience, take chargeing this responsaibility and I was surprised with myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent forted to those tasks.

It is for that reason, I just today cthought to come toand visit theis page, t. Thanks everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

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Sorry for your loss, I hope things get better soon

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likeachild08

June 1, 2025

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thanks a lot

Hello everybody.

It's weird to see, the wayat sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinksdon't turn out the way you imagine.

I am going to explain it.

I was planned all quite a routine forto improve my English skills, but somea few days lafter that my dad´s died, and my friend, who had surgery, head not have nobody who can one to look after him.

So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking aftertook care him for allthe passt week, but o. On fFriday I carry himtook him back to the hospital again and I passednd I spent all night with him, because he was filledeeling bad again.

Amongfter all of that, I thougth about the weird circunmstances that it motivedmade me to do this, because I had never had looked after a sick person, and I ended to I cameup coming to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, takeing charge of this responsaibility, and I was surprised by myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitment for thoese tasks.

Is for that reason, I just today cought coThat is why I only came to visit theis page today, thanks to everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

Bye bye.

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Good job! I'm sorry for your loss, keep it up!!

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likeachild08

June 1, 2025

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thank you so much

Learning nNew tThings

Hello everybody.

It's weird to see, the wayat sometimes, your plans isdo not develops in the waty that you thinks they will.

I going to explain it.

I washad planned all quite athe routine for improveing my English skills but. However, some days after that my dad´s died, my friend who had surgery, he not have nobody who can and didn't have anyone to look after him.

So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we arehave been looking after him for all of the passt week, but. However, on fFriday, I carryied him to the hospital again and I passstayed all night with him because he was filledeeling bad again.

● Make sure you keep everything in the past tense!

● Make sure your sentences aren't too long. I put in 'However' as it's best not to start a sentence with 'But'!

● Write days of the week with capital letters (Friday)!

AmongIn the middle of all of that, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motived me to do this, because I've never had looked after a sick person and. I ended to I cameup coming to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

'Among' isn't necessarily wrong - I just feel it's more used to talk about objects.

fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, takeing charge of this responsaibility, and I was surprised at myself because I realizsed that I am very patient and commitent forted to those tasks.

Is fFor that reason, today I just today coughthought I would come to visit the page, t. Thanks to everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

Bye bye.

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Well done! I hope your friend is alright, and that he gets better soon! I'm also really sorry to hear about your dad! Take care!

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likeachild08

June 1, 2025

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thank you for your corrections and your words.

Learning new things


Learning nNew tThings

Learning nNew tThings

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Hello, everybody.

It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinks.


It's weird to see, the wayat sometimes, your plans isdo not develops in the waty that you thinks they will.

It's weird to see, the wayat sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinksdon't turn out the way you imagine.

It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is nodon't develops in the waty that you thinks.

It's weird to see, the wayseeing that, sometimes, your plans isdo not develops in the watways that you thinks it might.

It's weird to see, the way sometimes your plans is not develops in the wat that you thinks how plans don't always pan out.

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I am going to explain it.

I was planned all quite a routine for improve my English skills but some days after that my dad´s die, my friend who had surgery, he not have nobody who can look after him.


I washad planned all quite athe routine for improveing my English skills but. However, some days after that my dad´s died, my friend who had surgery, he not have nobody who can and didn't have anyone to look after him.

I was planned all quite a routine forto improve my English skills, but somea few days lafter that my dad´s died, and my friend, who had surgery, head not have nobody who can one to look after him.

I washad planned all quite a routine forto improve my English skills but some days after that my dad´s dieath, my friend who had a surgery, he and did not have nobody who can look after him.

I was planned all quiteout a routine forto improve my English skills but someskills in English, but a few days after that, my dad´s die,s and my friend, who just had surgery, he not have nobody who canneeds me to help look after him.

I'm not sure what you mean here, but this is how I am understanding it. Sorry about your dad, if this is true.

I was planned all quite an extensive routine forto improve my English skills but some days. Some time after that, my dad´s die,d and my friend who had surgery, heas not have nobodyne who can look after him.

I'm so sorry for your loss. RIP your dad. Hope your friend can have someone take care of him.

Bye bye.


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So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but on friday I carry him to the hospital again and I passed all night with him because he was filled bad again.


So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we arehave been looking after him for all of the passt week, but. However, on fFriday, I carryied him to the hospital again and I passstayed all night with him because he was filledeeling bad again.

● Make sure you keep everything in the past tense! ● Make sure your sentences aren't too long. I put in 'However' as it's best not to start a sentence with 'But'! ● Write days of the week with capital letters (Friday)!

So I brought him wit my to my home, and my wife and I we are looking aftertook care him for allthe passt week, but o. On fFriday I carry himtook him back to the hospital again and I passednd I spent all night with him, because he was filledeeling bad again.

So I brought him with mye to my homuse, and my wife and I we are looking after him for allthis passt week, but on fFriday I carryied him to the hospital again and I passed allspent the whole night with him because he was filledfelt bad again.

So I brought him wit my to my home, and m. My wife and I we are lookinged after him for all pof lasst week, but on friday II had to carry him back to the hospital again andon Friday. I pwassed with him all night with him because he was filledeeling bad again.

So, I brought him with my to my home, and m. My wife and I we are looking after him for all pass week, but othis week. On fFriday, I carry himied to the hospital again and. I passed all night with him because he was filled badelt sick again.

Among all of that, I thougth about the weird circunstances that it motived me to do this, because I never had looked after a sick person and ended to I came to the conclution that the live is teaching to look after somebody close to me or myself.


AmongIn the middle of all of that, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motived me to do this, because I've never had looked after a sick person and. I ended to I cameup coming to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

'Among' isn't necessarily wrong - I just feel it's more used to talk about objects.

Amongfter all of that, I thougth about the weird circunmstances that it motivedmade me to do this, because I had never had looked after a sick person, and I ended to I cameup coming to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

Among all of that, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because I had never had looked after a sick person and ended tobefore and I came to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching me to look after somebodythe people close to me or myself.

Among all of thatbove all, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because I've never had looked after a sick person and ended to I came to ttaken care of sick person before. The conclutsion thatI came to was theat livfe is teaching me to look after somebody close to me or myself.others and take care of them.

Among all of thatIn midst of the chaos, I thougtht about the weird circunmstances that it motivated me to do this, because. I never had looked after a sick person and ended tobefore. Afterwards, I came to the conclutsion that the livfe is teaching to look after somebody close to me or myself.

finally, it has been an interesting experience, take charge this responsability and I was surprised myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent for those tasks.


fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, takeing charge of this responsaibility, and I was surprised at myself because I realizsed that I am very patient and commitent forted to those tasks.

fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, takeing charge of this responsaibility, and I was surprised by myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitment for thoese tasks.

finally, it has been an interesting experience, take chargeing this responsaibility and I was surprised with myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent forted to those tasks.

finally, it haIt's been an interesting experience, take charge. With this responsaibility and, I was surprised in myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitent for those tasksted person.

fFinally, it has been an interesting experience, to take charge this responsaibility and. I was surprised at myself because I realized that I am very patient and commitentted for thoese kinds of tasks.

What you did is admirable.

Is for that reason, I just today cought come to visit the page, thanks everybody that correct my last text, I hope from this monday I will be able to star my study and work routine.


Is fFor that reason, today I just today coughthought I would come to visit the page, t. Thanks to everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

Is for that reason, I just today cought coThat is why I only came to visit theis page today, thanks to everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

It is for that reason, I just today cthought to come toand visit theis page, t. Thanks everybody that corrected my last text, I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routine.

Is fFor that reason, I just today cought come to revisited the page, thanksis website. Thank you to everybodyone that corrected my last text,. I hope from this monday I will be able to starto resume my studyies and my work routine starting Monday.

Is fFor that reason, I just today cought comewanted to visit the page, t. Thanks to everybody that corrected my last text,. I hope from this mMonday I will be able to start my study and work routines.

Good luck!

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