April 1, 2021
Learning History
It has been fifteen years since I started studying English at an junior high school. When I became interested in writing and speaking English is just one year ago. Sometimes I regret that I hadn't pay any attention on improving such skills even though I had a lot of opportunities to talk with English native speakers. However, a bunch of vocabulary and some grammatical knowledge I have accumulated help me learn English more efficiently.
Nowadays, children are supposed to start learning English from elementary schools. In addition, current curriculum focus on conversation skills. I need to keep studying hard not to be left behind by teenagers.
Learning History
It has been fifteen years since I started studying English at an junior high school.
When I became interested in writing and speaking English is just one year ago.
If you start a sentence with "when" like this, you'll need a second clause. e.g. When I became interesting in writign and speaking English, I decided to X".
Otherwise, just use a simpler structure.
Sometimes I regret that I hadn't payid any attention ton improving such skills even though I had a lot of opportunities to talk with English native speakers.
"I didn't pay" or "I hadn't paid", but not "I hadn't pay"
However, I have accumulated a bunch of vocabulary and some grammatical knowledge I have accumulatedto help me learn English more efficiently.
English mostly uses SVO (subject-object-verb) structure, so it sounds kind of like Yoda to use OSV instead.
Nowadays, children are supposed to start learning English from elementary schools.
Use either "from elementary school" (the general insitution of school) or "in elementary schools" (the actual buildings).
In addition, the current curriculum focuses on conversation skills.
Use either "the current curriculum focuses on" (if you mean singular) or "current curricula focus on" (if you mean plural, but without "the").
I need to keep studying hard not to be left behind by teenagers.
Feedback
Great work and some very good attempts at complex phrases. Well done!
April 1, 2021
Thank you! I spend much time on this article because I couldn't go back home soon due to the train delay.
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Learning History This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has been fifteen years since I started studying English at an junior high school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I became interested in writing and speaking English is just one year ago.
If you start a sentence with "when" like this, you'll need a second clause. e.g. When I became interesting in writign and speaking English, I decided to X". Otherwise, just use a simpler structure. |
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Sometimes I regret that I hadn't pay any attention on improving such skills even though I had a lot of opportunities to talk with English native speakers. Sometimes I regret that I hadn't pa "I didn't pay" or "I hadn't paid", but not "I hadn't pay" |
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However, a bunch of vocabulary and some grammatical knowledge I have accumulated help me learn English more efficiently. However, I have accumulated a bunch of vocabulary and some grammatical knowledge English mostly uses SVO (subject-object-verb) structure, so it sounds kind of like Yoda to use OSV instead. |
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Nowadays, children are supposed to start learning English from elementary schools. Nowadays, children are supposed to start learning English from elementary school Use either "from elementary school" (the general insitution of school) or "in elementary schools" (the actual buildings). |
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In addition, current curriculum focus on conversation skills. In addition, the current curriculum focuses on conversation skills. Use either "the current curriculum focuses on" (if you mean singular) or "current curricula focus on" (if you mean plural, but without "the"). |
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I need to keep studying hard not to be left behind by teenagers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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