May 27, 2026
I collected rubbish as my school project.
My classmates said they did the same thing on September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to do.
I thought I would do it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned outside of the school.
We cleaned the road wihch was my way home. I collected a lot of cigarettes along the way.
We were surprised by how much people smoke.
We found many trash, but among of them, cigarettes had wider space in the bag.
I like those kind of things, like focusing on one thing for some reason, so I enjoyed it.
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My classmates said they did the same thing oin September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to do.
My classmates said they did the same thing in September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to do.
With dates:
"in" is used for months, seasons, years, etc.
"On" is used for full dates, holidays, days of the week, etc.
We cleaned the road wihich wais my way home.
We cleaned the road which is my way home.
"which was my way home" - by using the past tense, you're implying that it's no longer your way home (e.g. because the road closed, or you moved house, or found a new shortcut)
We found manya lot of trash, but among of them, cigarettes had widertook more space in the bag.
We found a lot of trash, but among them, cigarettes took more space in the bag.
"many" is used for counts, but "trash" is considered uncountable (e.g. you don't say "two trashes"), so isn't used with many.
"had more space" implies space was set aside for cigarettes, but since the cigarettes caused the extra space to be needed rather than something that was planned ahead of time, it's more natural to say an active verb, like "took more space"
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My classmates said they did the same thing oin September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to dodoing it.
My classmates said they did the same thing in September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time doing it.
We cleaned the road wihich wais my way home.
We cleaned the road which is my way home.
We found many trash, but among of them, cigarettes had widertook up the most space in the bag.
We found many trash, but among of them, cigarettes took up the most space in the bag.
I like those kind of things, like focusing on one thing for some reason, so I enjoyed it.
I like things like focusing on one thing for some reason, so I enjoyed it.
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I collected rubbish asfor my school project.
I collected rubbish for my school project.
My classmates said they did the same thing oin September, but I wasn't there, so ithis was my first time to dodoing it.
My classmates said they did the same thing in September, but I wasn't there, so this was my first time doing it.
I thought I would do it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned the outside of the school. I thought I would do it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned the outside of the school.
We cleaned the road wihch was my wayI take to go home.
We cleaned the road I take to go home.
I collected a lot of cigarettes along the way.
We were surprised by how much people smoke.
We found many pieces of trash, but among of them, cigarettes had widertook up the most space in the bag.
We found many pieces of trash, but among of them, cigarettes took up the most space in the bag.
I like those kind of things,For some reason, I like focusing on one thing for some reasonask at a time, so I enjoyed it.
For some reason, I like focusing on one task at a time, so I enjoyed it.
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It's good that you helped clean your school! Hopefully less people will smoke near the school in the future.
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I collected rubbish asfor my school project.
I collected rubbish for my school project.
My classmates said they did the same thing oin September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to dodoing it.
My classmates said they did the same thing in September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time doing it.
I thought I would do it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned outside of the school.
We cleaned the road wihich was my way home.
We cleaned the road which was my way home.
I collected a lot of cigarettes along the way.
We were surprised by how much people smoke.
We found manya lot of trash, but among of themit, cigarettes had widertook up the most space in the bag.
We found a lot of trash, but among it, cigarettes took up the most space in the bag.
I like those kinds of things, like focusing on one thing for somea particular reason, so I enjoyed it.
I like those kinds of things, like focusing on one thing for a particular reason, so I enjoyed it.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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I collected rubbish asfor my school project.
I collected rubbish for my school project.
My classmates said they didwere doing the same thing on September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to do.
My classmates said they were doing the same thing on September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time.
I thought I would dobe doing it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned outside of the school.
I thought I would be doing it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned outside of the school.
We cleaned the road, wihich was on my way home.
We cleaned the road, which was on my way home.
I collected a lot of cigarettes along the way.
We were surprised by how much people smoke. We were surprised by how much people smoke.
We found manya lot of trash, but among of them, cigarettes had wider space in the bagit was mostly cigarettes.
We found a lot of trash, but it was mostly cigarettes.
I like thoese kinds of thingactivities, like focusing on one thing for some reason, so I enjoyed it.
I like these kinds of activities, like focusing on one thing.
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Good writing!
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I collected rubbish as my school project.
I collected rubbish
I collected rubbish
I collected rubbish |
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My classmates said they did the same thing on September, but I wasn't there, so it was my first time to do.
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My classmates said they did the same thing
My classmates said they did the same thing
My classmates said they did the same thing
My classmates said they did the same thing With dates: "in" is used for months, seasons, years, etc. "On" is used for full dates, holidays, days of the week, etc. |
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I thought I would do it in my school's field, but I actually cleaned outside of the school.
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We cleaned the road wihch was my way home.
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We cleaned the road w "which was my way home" - by using the past tense, you're implying that it's no longer your way home (e.g. because the road closed, or you moved house, or found a new shortcut) |
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We were surprised by how much people smoke. We were surprised by how much people smoke. We were surprised by how much people smoke. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We found many trash, but among of them, cigarettes had wider space in the bag.
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We found
We found many pieces of trash, but among of them, cigarettes
We found many trash, but among of them, cigarettes
We found "many" is used for counts, but "trash" is considered uncountable (e.g. you don't say "two trashes"), so isn't used with many. "had more space" implies space was set aside for cigarettes, but since the cigarettes caused the extra space to be needed rather than something that was planned ahead of time, it's more natural to say an active verb, like "took more space" |
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I like those kind of things, like focusing on one thing for some reason, so I enjoyed it.
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