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Dear Mr. Vinod ¶
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Hello!

"Greetings!" is not wrong, but saying "Hello!" is more friendly while also being polite.

I would like to ask for you ar suggestion on what type of course would be useful for a girlsbest for female students in the IT field.

"Useful" was not wrong, but I would say "best" here. This means you are asking for Mr. Vinod's opinion on the best course of action.

One of them completed her studies within Math, Physics, Chemistry and Bio subjects and second one is having onlylogy, and the other has only completed Physics, Chemistry and Biology.

I agree with the other correction that it might be best to write "Bio" as "Biology" instead. I also suggest removing "subjects" because that is already implied by saying "her studies". Removing it makes your sentence sound more natural.

For your kind information, One student is preparing for NEET fromAlso, one student has not been in school for three years, and second one also preparing for NEETthe other one has not been in school form one year.

Do you mean NEET as in Not in Education, Employment, or Training? It is also not clear whether you mean they were NEETs, or will become NEETs. Because you're asking about classes they should take, my guess is that you mean they were NEETs, but now they are not. NEET is not an acronym that is known by every person, so I changed your sentence to be more clear about what you mean. However, if you are certain Mr. Vinod will understand the acronym NEET, then it would be fine to include it in the email. In that case, my suggestion is: "Also, one student has been a NEET for three years, and the other has been a NEET for one year." This sentence gives the impression of being kind of rude to me, though. "For your information", by the way, is not wrong, but it is more often said sarcastically than seriously. In order to sound polite to Mr. Vinod, I suggest you don't use the phrase.

AI will be eagerly awaiting your earlier response in this regards.

This is just a more polite way to say what you wrote.

With best regards,

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Date 21-04-2025 ¶
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Greetings!

I would like to ask for you ar suggestion on what type of course would be useful for a girlsfemale students in the IT field.

One of them completed her studies with Mincluding math, Pphysics, Cchemistry and Bbiology subjects and the second one is havingwith only Pphysics, Cchemistry and Bbiology.

While saying "bio" instead of "biology" is generally fine and understood in academia, with the context of this email I think the more formal/complete spelling of the full word "biology" is more appropriate.

For your kind information, Oone student ishas been preparing for NEET forom three years and second one also preparing for NEET formsince one year.

I don't know what NEET refers to, but I assume the reader is familiar with it.

Awaiting your earlierst response into this regardese subjects.

With best regards,

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