May 1, 2021
Language Challenge | Day 03
Tell us about your family. Are you single or married? Do you have kids or pets? Brothers and sisters? Continue on to describe someone in your family, could be what they look like or their personality. Maybe things you have in common with them or differences you have had.
Officially, I'm single. At least, thats what I answer in those serious documents. I have been living with my boyfriend since the beginning of quarantine and we have plans to marry soon (probably next year). When we move to our own house, we are going to adopt a cat. And a dog, maybe. I have a younger brother, but he lives with my parents and we haven't talked much. He is really quiet, which I can relate, but I love him a lot and I've been trying to call him for more fun activities together.
Officially, I'm single.
At least, that's what I answer in those seriousofficial documents.
I have been living with my boyfriend since the beginning of quarantine, and we have plans to get marryied soon (probably next year).
"We have plans to marry soon" is correct, but it sounds a little bit too formal
When we move in to our own house, we a're going to adopt a cat.
And a dog, maybemaybe even a dog.
"And maybe even a dog" or "And maybe a dog" sound a little more natural
I have a younger brother, but he lives with my parents and we havedon't talked much.
He i's really quiet, which I can relate to, but I love him a lot, and I've been trying to call him forand do more fun activities together.
Feedback
Good job! Just a few small changes you could make that would make your writing sound more natural. For example, using contractions (e.g. "He's" instead of "He is") more.
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Language Challenge | Day 03 |
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Tell us about your family. |
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Are you single or married? |
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Do you have kids or pets? |
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Brothers and sisters? |
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Continue on to describe someone in your family, could be what they look like or their personality. |
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Maybe things you have in common with them or differences you have had. |
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Officially, I'm single. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At least, thats what I answer in those serious documents. At least, that's what I answer in |
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I have been living with my boyfriend since the beginning of quarantine and we have plans to marry soon (probably next year). I have been living with my boyfriend since the beginning of quarantine, and we have plans to get marr "We have plans to marry soon" is correct, but it sounds a little bit too formal |
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When we move to our own house, we are going to adopt a cat. When we move in to our own house, we |
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And a dog, maybe. And "And maybe even a dog" or "And maybe a dog" sound a little more natural |
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I have a younger brother, but he lives with my parents and we haven't talked much. I have a younger brother, but he lives with my parents and we |
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He is really quiet, which I can relate, but I love him a lot and I've been trying to call him for more fun activities together. He |
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