July 1, 2026
1.Your heart hold the path that i will go,your eyes hold the end where i gonna be.
2.After the most hardest time, the peace will always come.
3.They wanted to order me to follow the world, but i will step into the darkness,and win the game as i want.
4.I have let go of voice,because i just trust my own way.
To write some sentences to practice my English.Sentence Writing Practice
Sentence Writing Practice
1. Your heart holds the path that iI will go,follow, your eyes hold the end where i gonnaI will be.
1. Your heart holds the path that I will follow, your eyes hold the end where I will be.
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After the most hardest time, the peace will always coPeace always comes after difficult times.
Peace always comes after difficult times.
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They wanted to forderce me to follow the world, but iI will step into the darkness, and win the game as ihow I want.
They wanted to force me to follow the world, but I will step into the darkness, and win the game how I want.
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I have let go of voice,criticism, because i justI trust my own waypath.
I have let go of criticism, because I trust my own path.
Feedback
The meaning of these sentences are unclear on their own - is this poetry?
To writeWriting some sentences to practice my English.
Writing some sentences to practice my English
1. Your heart holds the path that iI will go,take, and your eyes hold the end where iI’m gonna be.
1. Your heart holds the path that I will take, and your eyes hold the end where I’m gonna be.
Insert a space after each period and comma.
Feedback
Be careful of the spacing around punctuation. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.
Wrong: I like ice cream,cake and pie.They are sweet.
+Right: I like ice cream, cake and pie. They are sweet.
To writeWriting some sentences to practice my English.
Writing some sentences to practice my English
technically this is a fragment but it is totally OK as a journal entry title
1.Your heart holds the path that iwhere I will go, your eyes hold the end where iI am gonna be.
1.Your heart holds the path where I will go, your eyes hold the end where I am gonna be.
"heart" is singular, so the verb is "holds"
if it were "hearts" then it would be "hold"
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After the most hardest time, the peace will always come.
After the hardest time, the peace will always come.
"most hardest" is repetitive. we only need to say "most" if the superlative form of the word doesn't end with "est"
fun, more fun, most fun (because funner and funnest aren't words)
difficult, more difficult, most difficult
funny, funnier, funniest
just some examples
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They wanted to order me to follow the world, but iI will step into the darkness, and win the game as iI want.
They wanted to order me to follow the world, but I will step into the darkness and win the game as I want.
This sentence sounds a bit weird. Maybe try
"They ordered me to follow their worldy rules, but I will step into the darkness and win the game my own way."
4.
I have let go of my voice, because iI just trust my own way.
I have let go of my voice, because I just trust my own way.
I don't understand what the original version of this sentence means.
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overall nice job writing English sentences
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1.Your heart hold the path that i will go,your eyes hold the end where i gonna be.
1.Your heart holds the path "heart" is singular, so the verb is "holds" if it were "hearts" then it would be "hold"
1. Your heart holds the path that Insert a space after each period and comma.
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After the most hardest time, the peace will always come.
After the "most hardest" is repetitive. we only need to say "most" if the superlative form of the word doesn't end with "est" fun, more fun, most fun (because funner and funnest aren't words) difficult, more difficult, most difficult funny, funnier, funniest just some examples
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3. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They wanted to order me to follow the world, but i will step into the darkness,and win the game as i want.
They wanted to order me to follow the world, but This sentence sounds a bit weird. Maybe try "They ordered me to follow their worldy rules, but I will step into the darkness and win the game my own way."
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4. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have let go of voice,because i just trust my own way.
I have let go of my voice, because I don't understand what the original version of this sentence means.
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To write some sentences to practice my English.
technically this is a fragment but it is totally OK as a journal entry title
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