This year I will finish my bachelor's degree in the field of Rrobotics and Mmechatronics, and I want to continue my study in Europe onies by pursuing a master's degree in Europe.

"bachelor's degree" without capitalization is the standard designation unless you are referring to a full formal title (e.g. "Bachelor of Science in Robotics")

To do this, I need to pass the TOEFL exam.

I have just explorrealized that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I can see thangible result ofs from my preparation.

I suggest the word "tangible" here to make it clearer that you are looking for a way to measure your concrete progress toward a goal. The dictionary definition of "tangible" is something that can be experienced with the senses, specifically touch. However in casual English (and especially business English) we use "tangible" to refer to actual measurable outcomes like improved test scores or company performance. I think it fits well here.

I hope that langcorrect will help to examinme to see my progress in writing tasks.

This year I will finish my bachelor's degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my study in Europe onfor a master's degree.

I have just explodiscovered that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.

I think this is what you meant.

It sounds like you are saying "I've found that that I'm more motivated to learn english when I can see the results of my preparation"

This year I will finish my bBachelor's degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics, and want to continue my studyies in Europe on mfor a Master's degree.

To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.

I have just explodiscovered that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.

I put "discovered" because it's more similar to "explored," but I think the most natural way to say this is "I have just realized"
It's kind of hard to explain why "explored" is wrong, but "explore" focuses more on the process (thinking about or searching for information) than the result (finding the information, coming to a realization). So "explore" is often used with question clauses, ie. "We explored how we could lower production costs." It's also a little corporate/formal sounding.

I hope that lLangcorrect will help to examinme evaluate my progress in writing tasks.

"evaluate" is a more precise word choice, "examine" is much broader and to me, it feels a little odd when used for "progress"

This year I will finish my bachelor degree in field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my studyies in Europe on master degree..¶
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want to pursue my masters in Europe

To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.

I have just explorrealised that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.

Not sure what you are trying to say here

I hope that langcorrect will help to examineme to track my progress in writing tasks.

This year I will finish my bBachelors degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my studyies in Europe on mwith a Masters degree.

To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.

I have just explorrealized that it will be easier for me to continue learning English, if I see the results of my preparation.

I hope that langcorrect will help to examine my progress in writing tasks.