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Capitalize most words in titles

I like watching TV series and reading books. I like watching TV series and reading books.

To me "series" sounds odd without another descriptor TV series, Netflix series, movie series, etc...

Recently, i haveI watched oOff-cCampus aslike everyone else. Recently, I watched Off-Campus like everyone else.

Recently, i haveI watched oOff-cCampus, same as everyone else. Recently, I watched Off-Campus, same as everyone else.

At first, I was biased because everyone on social media was recommending oOff c-Campus and i was thinking abouI thought the series ismight be overrated. At first, I was biased because everyone on social media was recommending Off-Campus and I thought the series might be overrated.

I would use "might be" or "is probably" before "overrated" since you didn't know for sure.

At first, I was biased because everyone on social media was recommending oOff c-Campus and iI was thinking about the series iwas overrated. At first, I was biased because everyone on social media was recommending Off-Campus and I was thinking the series was overrated.

The tense of the thought tends to match the tense of the verb "think" when not using a direct quote

I love the relations in oOff-cCampus. I love the relations in Off-Campus.

I love the relationships in oOff-cCampus. I love the relationships in Off-Campus.

It has a greate messages ofregarding friendships, romantic relationships, and family relations. It has great messages regarding friendships, romantic relationships, and family relations.

I would use "regarding" or "relating to" instead of "of" before listing the different types of relationships. "And" is added before the last item in a list.

It has a greate messages ofabout friendships, romantic relationships, and family relationships. It has great messages about friendship, romantic relationships, and family relationships.

To avoid "relationships" twice you may can put "the bonds between family members", "family ties", "familial bonds" etc. although these mostly have positive connotations

Especially one thingOne thing especially caught my attention. One thing especially caught my attention.

Especially one thingOne thing especially caught my attention. One thing especially caught my attention.

The friendship ofbetween Hannah and Allie. The friendship between Hannah and Allie.

Hannah has a very soft and safe aura. Hannah has a very soft and safe aura.

I would be so happy if I could meet with her. I would be so happy if I could meet her.

I would be so happy if I could meet with her. I would be so happy if I could meet her.

I was thinking about what it would happenbe like if I was Hannah's friend. I was thinking about what it would be like if I was Hannah's friend.

"what would happen" sounds like some specific event will trigger, it's kind of odd sounding

She canwould rise my motivation for life! She would rise my motivation for life!

This is a conditional statement, use "would."

She can riseould boost my motivation for life! She could boost my motivation for life!

Because sShe does not give up after any failure. She does not give up after any failure.

Only begin a sentence with "because" when creating a complex sentence and starting with the dependent clause.

Because she does not give up after anyno matter how hard she failures. Because she does not give up no matter how hard she fails.

It sounds kind of like "she doesn't give up after just any failure" which means that if it's an especially bad failure then she WILL give up... so I reworded it.

She doesid not give up after her traumatic incident. She did not give up after her traumatic incident.

She struggled to heal and, but she did it. She struggled to heal, but she did it.

As everyone says, if you improve yourself, a person worthy of you will find you. As everyone says, if you improve yourself, a person worthy of you will find you.

As everyone says, if you improve yourself, a person worthy of you will find you. As everyone says, if you improve yourself, a person worthy of you will find you.

And tThis series shows that clearly. This series shows that clearly.