In the 18sth century many Germans migrated to Brazil, more precisely into the southern region of the country. In the 18th century many Germans migrated to Brazil, more precisely to the southern region of the country.

In the 18sth century, many Germans migrated to Brazil, more precisely into the southern region of the country. In the 18th century, many Germans migrated to Brazil, more precisely to the southern region of the country.

The empire back then,government at the time promised them free land, so they could come and work on their onstart a plantations or breed cattle breeding. The government at the time promised them free land, so they could come and start a plantation or breed cattle.

"Come and work on their plantations" implies that they already had plantations at the time of coming to Brazil.

The empire back then,government had promised them free land, so they could come and work on their onstart plantations or breed cattle breeding. The government had promised them free land so they could come and start plantations or breed cattle.

An "empire" is (I think) a collection of states based on military conquest. It has a very historical tone (Roman Empire, Ottoman Empire, etc). But even for an empire, we'd usually say "government" in a case like this.

The empire back then, promised them free land, so they could come and work on their on plantations or cattle breeding. The empire back then promised them free land, so they could come and work on their plantations or cattle breeding.

But much of what wasany promiseds wasn't ere left unfulfilled, leaving them all onpeople to their own fate. But many promises were left unfulfilled, leaving people to their own fate.

But much of what was promised wasn't left unfulfilled, leaving them all on their own fate. But much of what was promised was left unfulfilled, leaving them all on their own.

But much of what was promised wasn't fulfilled, leaving them all ton their own fate. But much of what was promised wasn't fulfilled, leaving them all to their own fate.

Not only they didn't know how todid they not speak the language of thate new country, in which they awere now living in,, but they also had to endure [social economic problems], because when they arrived here, all the land given to them was virgin, basically it was aundeveloped tropical forest. Not only did they not speak the language of the new country in which they were now living, but they also had to endure [social economic problems], because when they arrived, all the land given to them was basically undeveloped tropical forest.

"Social economic problems" sounds like you're talking about economic problems in a country's social welfare system. Maybe you want to say something like this: "...they also experienced financial hardship, because..." or "...they also had to bear large overhead costs before they could start farming, because...".

Not only did they didn'not know how to speak the language of thate new country, which they awere now living in, they also had to endure social oeconomic problems, because when they arrived here, all the land given to them was virgin, b. Basically, it was a tropical forest. Not only did they not know how to speak the language of the new country which they were now living in, they also had to endure socioeconomic problems, because when they arrived here, all the land given to them was virgin. Basically, it was a tropical forest.

"Social" + "economic" = "socioeconomic".

Not only they didn't they not know how to speak the language of that new country, which they awere now living in,; they also had to endure social o-economic problems, because when they arrived here, all the land given to them was virgin, basically (or i.e.) it was a tropical forest. Not only didn't they not know how to speak the language of that new country, which they were now living in; they also had to endure socio-economic problems, because when they arrived here, all the land given to them was virgin, basically (or i.e.) it was a tropical forest.

"i.e." has more of a explanatory feeling which fits here

They had to take it down,deforest and prepare the land first, and only then to seed the ground to be able tocould they plant seeds and grow something on this piece of landeir plot. They had to deforest and prepare the land first, and only then could they plant seeds and grow something on their plot.

They had to take it downclear the trees, prepare the land, and only then would they be able to seed the ground to be able toand grow something on thisat piece of land. They had to clear the trees, prepare the land, and only then would they be able to seed the ground and grow something on that piece of land.

By "take it down", do you mean clearing the trees and foliage?

They had to takechop it down, prepare the land and only then to seed the groundwere they able to plant seeds to be able to grow something on this piece of land. They had to chop it down, prepare the land and only then were they able to plant seeds to be able to grow something on this piece of land.

Imagine so, aAll of this would hypothetically take about 2 years to be all done and be somehowcompleted and would somehow have to be profitable. All of this would hypothetically take about 2 years to be completed and would somehow have to be profitable.

I'm not sure what exactly you meant by "imagine so", but I think you're trying to establish a hypothetical situation?

(Imagine so, all of this would take about 2 years to be all done and be somehow profitable.)? (Imagine so, all of this would take about 2 years to be all done and be somehow profitable.)?

I'm not quite sure what you mean by this sentence. Do you mean something like: "Think about that: this all would probably have taken about two years to be done, and somehow they would've had to turn a profit as well." Or: "This all took about two years to be done, and somehow, it was profitable."

Imagine so, all of this would take about 2 years to be all done and be somehow profitable. Imagine, all of this would take about 2 years to be all done and be somehow profitable.

InAs a result of this [hardship], theses people createdbuilt an even greater sense of community amongst themselves. As a result of this [hardship], these people built an even greater sense of community amongst themselves.

You might also consider the verb "to forge", which is often used figuratively for friendships, relationships etc. and could also be used to talk about how a strong sense of community was established. Figuratively, "to forge [a friendship/relationship/etc]" emphasizes the strength of the bond and possibly even difficult circumstances leading to it (like the flames that are used to heat a piece of metal).

InAs a result of this, theses people created an even greater sense of community among themselves. As a result of this, these people created an even greater sense of community among themselves.

InAs a result of this, theses people created a even greater sense of community amongst themselves. As a result of this, these people created a even greater sense of community amongst themselves.

"these" is already used for plural terms, it doesn't need an s

They created their own schools to teach literacy for the their children, to read and built their own houses and cities with the same style of architecture and type of building from where they came from, which some of thems they had back home, some of which are still standing today. They created their own schools to teach their children to read and built their own houses and cities with the same style of architecture as they had back home, some of which are still standing today.

They created their own school to teach literacy for the their children, and they built their own houses and cities with the same architecture and type of buildings from where they came from, which some of themwhich are still standing today. They created their own school to teach literacy for their children, and they built their own houses and cities with the same architecture as from where they came from, some of which are still standing today.

Just one school?

They created their own school to teach literacy for theto their children, built their own houses and cities with the same architecture and type of building from where they came from, which some of themwhich are still standing today. They created their own school to teach literacy to their children, built their own houses and cities with the same architecture and type of building from where they came from, some of which are still standing today.

And bBecause of all that was saidthis, some of theses cities still teach German language as a second language. Because of this, some of these cities still teach German as a second language.

And because of all that was said, some of theses cities still teach German language as a second language. And because of all that was said, some of these cities still teach German as a second language.

Researchers says that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil beasides an from indigenous native languages, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, speciallymany of whom are in the rural south. Researchers say that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil aside from indigenous languages, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, many of whom are in the rural south.

Are you referring to one specific indigenous language, or several indigenous language that may have greater populations of speakers than German in Brazil? "Especially" doesn't sound right when reporting a precise figure, but they do when reporting an imprecise estimate or non-quantitative feature. For example: "2% of Brazilians speak German, especially in the rural south." --> wrong "Many Brazilians speak German, especially in the rural south." --> correct "Brazil is a very multilingual country, especially in the rural south." --> correct

Researchers says that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil besides an indigenous native language, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, especially in the rural south. Researchers say that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil besides an indigenous native language, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, especially in the rural south.

"Specially" is its own word, as in "a specially crafted delicacy" (adverb form of "special"). Although, you might hear people shorten "especially" to " 'specially " in informal speech anyway.

Researchers says that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil besides an indigenous native language, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, especially in the rural south. Researchers say that German could be the second most spoken language in Brazil besides an indigenous native language, reporting that approximately 2% of Brazilians speak it, especially in the rural south.