March 31, 2021
Korossol On The Road 6
Then she knew. She couldn't deny it anymore. She had... something. She WAS something.
She was a witch. (Of all the things.)
She was a witch but there was no Hogwarts in her future. No well-intentioned Headmaster, no competent professors. She had no loving and clever aunts to guide her like Sabrina, no extravagant mother to correct her like Samantha, no mentors like Willow or any others. She was all alone. As much as she knew. No letter came on her eleventh birthday, no strange family member arrived to begin her education, no mysterious book appeared... Nothing. Worse somehow, Jason didn't have the same "something". Why her?
Of course, her nine-years-old self didn't ask herself those questions immediately. She didn't want to KNOW, so she didn't. And then she did. And then she tried some things. And then it was just a part of herself, like her hair or her nose. But she never got a "how" or "why". She just could do things that no one else could.
On her thiteenth birthday she had a prophetic dream, her room changed color and the chocolate cake became a strawberry one. Those were her favorite color, her favorite flavor and her dream told her that the boy she liked would ask her out soon. She burst in tears. It was too much. She didn't ask for that! It has to stop! Later in her (freshly colored) room she cried and cried for the ordinary life that she would never have. For the things she didn't WANT to know. For the things that she didn't want to do, and would do anyway.
Then she knew.
She couldn't deny it anymore.
She had... something.
She was a witch.
(Of all the things. )
She was a witch but there was no Hogwarts in her future.
No well-intentioned Headmaster, no competent professors.
She had no loving and clever aunts to guide her like Sabrina, no extravagant mother to correct her like Samanthalike Sabrina to guide her, no extravagant mother like Samantha to correct her, no mentors like Willow or any others.
She was all alone.
As much as she knew.
I don't understand what was meant by this sentence.
No letter came on her eleventh birthday, no strange family member arrived to begin her education, no mysterious book appeared...
Nothing.
Worse somehow, Jason didn't have the same "something".
Why her?
Of course, her nine-years-old self didn't ask herself thoese questions immediately.
Nine years old v.s. nine-year-old:
https://ell.stackexchange.com/a/90181
She didn't want to KNOW, so she didn't.
And then she did.
And then she tried some things.
And then it was just a part of herself, like her hair or her nose.
But she never got a "how" or "why".
She just could just do things that no one else could.
On her thirteenth birthday, she had a prophetic dream,; her room changed color and the chocolate cake became a strawberry one.
Those were her favorite color,s and her favorite flavor, and her dream told her that the boy she liked would ask her out soon.
She burst into tears.
It was too much.
She didn't ask for that!
It has to stop!
Later in her (freshnewly recolored) room , she cried and cried for the ordinary life that she would never have.
For the things she didn't WANT to know.
For the things that she didn't want to do, and would do anyway.
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Then she knew. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She couldn't deny it anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She had... something. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She WAS something. |
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She was a witch. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Of all the things. ) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She was a witch but there was no Hogwarts in her future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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No well-intentioned Headmaster, no competent professors. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She had no loving and clever aunts to guide her like Sabrina, no extravagant mother to correct her like Samantha, no mentors like Willow or any others. She had no loving and clever aunts |
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She was all alone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As much as she knew. As much as she knew. I don't understand what was meant by this sentence. |
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No letter came on her eleventh birthday, no strange family member arrived to begin her education, no mysterious book appeared... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nothing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Worse somehow, Jason didn't have the same "something". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why her? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, her nine-years-old self didn't ask herself those questions immediately. Of course, her nine-year Nine years old v.s. nine-year-old: https://ell.stackexchange.com/a/90181 |
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She didn't want to KNOW, so she didn't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then she did. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then she tried some things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And then it was just a part of herself, like her hair or her nose. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But she never got a "how" or "why". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She just could do things that no one else could. She |
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On her thiteenth birthday she had a prophetic dream, her room changed color and the chocolate cake became a strawberry one. On her thirteenth birthday, she had a prophetic dream |
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Those were her favorite color, her favorite flavor and her dream told her that the boy she liked would ask her out soon. Those were her favorite color |
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She burst in tears. She burst into tears. |
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It was too much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She didn't ask for that! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has to stop! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later in her (freshly colored) room she cried and cried for the ordinary life that she would never have. Later in her ( |
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For the things she didn't WANT to know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For the things that she didn't want to do, and would do anyway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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