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Korossol Into The Ring 5

I used to like "Quantum Leap" a lot. I didn't know it a this time but most of the TV shows I have liked since are very similar. Like "Sliders" or "Stargate SG1" every episode has its own plot. There's a new situation, a new planet, a new universe and new problems to fix. I think I'm easily bored; it helps if everything changes so I don't lose interest.
Sam Beckett from Quantum Leap actually time travels from a point of history to another. Not only in his life like he thought he would, but in strangers lives too. Then, he had to resolve their problems. Fortunately, he's accompanied by Al, an hologram of his best friend who help him to identify the problem by searching in future databases. Unfortunately, Sam is amnesiac and doesn't remember why he travels nor more importantly, how to stop.
I was hooked for about one hundred episodes; I never was bored. I laughed a lot too. Some of the characters Sam became had some very unique challenge: the actor just about to play, the pregnant wife, the pilot (Sam doesn't know how to pilot a jet) and one memorable time, himself. I loved this show.
I keep being easily bored, which in this era of Netflix means that I do click on many shows... but I rarely finish them. I liked "Mother" and "The Bird Cage" though. (Beware, both are HARD to watch.)

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Korossol Into The Ring 5

I used to like "Quantum Leap" a lot.

I didn't know it at thise time but most of the TV shows I have liked since are very similar.

LikeIn "Sliders" or "Stargate SG1" every episode has its own plot.

In writing it is bad form to begin a sentence with "Like". That is used in conversation and even there it is not really correct.

There's a new situation, a new planet, a new universe and new problems to fix.

I think I'm easily bored; it helps if everything changes so I don't lose interest.

Sam Beckett from Quantum Leap actually time travels from aone point of history to another.

Not only in his life like he thought he would, but in stranger's lives too.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but it doesn't make sense. I understand what it is trying to say because I have seen the TV show, but someone who had never seen "Quantum Leap" would likely not understand what you are trying to say. I would write this as: "His consciousness travels not only as he thought it would, but it occupies the lives of strangers as well."

Then, he had tomust resolve their problems.

Try to keep your verb tenses consistent within a paragraph.

Fortunately, he's accompanied by Al, an hologram of his best friend who helps him to identify the problems by searching in future databases.

Unfortunately, Sam is amnesiac and doesn't remember why he travels, nor more importantly, how to stop.

I was hooked for about one hundred episodes; I never was bored.

I laughed a lot too.

Some of the characters Sam became had some very unique challenges: the actor just about to play, the pregnant wife, the pilot (Sam doesn't know how to pilot a jet) and one memorable time, himself.

I loved this show.

I keep beingstill bore easily bored, which in this era of Netflix means that I do click on many shows... but I rarely finish them.

I liked "Mother" and "The Bird Cage" though.

(Beware, both are HARD to watch.)

Korossol Into The Ring 5


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I used to like "Quantum Leap" a lot.


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I didn't know it a this time but most of the TV shows I have liked since are very similar.


I didn't know it at thise time but most of the TV shows I have liked since are very similar.

Like "Sliders" or "Stargate SG1" every episode has its own plot.


LikeIn "Sliders" or "Stargate SG1" every episode has its own plot.

In writing it is bad form to begin a sentence with "Like". That is used in conversation and even there it is not really correct.

There's a new situation, a new planet, a new universe and new problems to fix.


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I think I'm easily bored; it helps if everything changes so I don't lose interest.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sam Beckett from Quantum Leap actually time travels from a point of history to another.


Sam Beckett from Quantum Leap actually time travels from aone point of history to another.

Not only in his life like he thought he would, but in strangers lives too.


Not only in his life like he thought he would, but in stranger's lives too.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but it doesn't make sense. I understand what it is trying to say because I have seen the TV show, but someone who had never seen "Quantum Leap" would likely not understand what you are trying to say. I would write this as: "His consciousness travels not only as he thought it would, but it occupies the lives of strangers as well."

Then, he had to resolve their problems.


Then, he had tomust resolve their problems.

Try to keep your verb tenses consistent within a paragraph.

Fortunately, he's accompanied by Al, an hologram of his best friend who help him to identify the problem by searching in future databases.


Fortunately, he's accompanied by Al, an hologram of his best friend who helps him to identify the problems by searching in future databases.

Unfortunately, Sam is amnesiac and doesn't remember why he travels nor more importantly, how to stop.


Unfortunately, Sam is amnesiac and doesn't remember why he travels, nor more importantly, how to stop.

I was hooked for about one hundred episodes; I never was bored.


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I laughed a lot too.


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Some of the characters Sam became had some very unique challenge: the actor just about to play, the pregnant wife, the pilot (Sam doesn't know how to pilot a jet) and one memorable time, himself.


Some of the characters Sam became had some very unique challenges: the actor just about to play, the pregnant wife, the pilot (Sam doesn't know how to pilot a jet) and one memorable time, himself.

I loved this show.


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I keep being easily bored, which in this era of Netflix means that I do click on many shows... but I rarely finish them.


I keep beingstill bore easily bored, which in this era of Netflix means that I do click on many shows... but I rarely finish them.

I liked "Mother" and "The Bird Cage" though.


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(Beware, both are HARD to watch.)


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