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Korossol Into The Ring 3

This is harder with prompts... Hello again ! I will try to make this longer than before... I have a brother who is ten years younger than me. He's living in continental France and I'm in the Carribeans. He's married and has three daughters. I'm happy for him. He has the work that he likes. My mother miss them all fiercely though. I have five aunts and three uncles, some I rarely see. I have a mother which I'm very close to, a father and a stepfather. My parents are divorced. My father has older twin sisters. My stepfather has two brothers and a sister. My mother has two sisters and a brother. My maternal grandmother was a teacher, as her father before her. All that side of my family reads a lot, writes very well and cares for culture and intellectual enrichment. My stepfather was very poor when he was young. He fought all his life to have comfort and luxuries. He worked hard and gaves us a lot to enjoy. Because of him we grew up happy and carefree. He was a hard man and hard to live with but we're grateful. His family is similar. My father did a lot of jobs in his life and never established himself anywhere. He never married again and has no other children. His sisters had three sons, one was married, one was not.
I used to have only older cousins by my paternal family. Now, I have some younger cousins. My mother's sister has a daughter who is eleven years younger than me. My maternal uncle has to children : a son who was born fifteen years later than me and a still younger daughter. Another maternal aunt has two sons I can't even remember when they birthed.
My cousin on my mother's side has a son. He's very cute!
I'm single.

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Korossol Into The Ring 3

This is harder with prompts... Hello again !

I will try to make this longer than before...

I have a brother who is ten years younger than me.

He's living in continental France and I'm in the Carribbeans.

He's married and has three daughters.

I'm happy for him.

He has the worka job that he likes.

I think this would be a better way to say it

My mother misses them all fiercely though.

I have five aunts and three uncles, some of whom I rarely see.

I have a mother which I'm very close to, a father and a stepfather.

My parents are divorced.

My father has older twin sisters.

My stepfather has two brothers and a sister.

My mother has two sisters and a brother.

My maternal grandmother was a teacher, as was her father before her.

All that side of my family reads a lot, writes very well and cares for cultureal and intellectual enrichment.

Not sure if you mean to say "culture" and "intellectual enrichment" or "cultural and intellectual enrichment"

My stepfather was very poor when he was young.

He fought all his life to have comfort and luxuries.

He worked hard and gaves us a lot to enjoy.

Because of him we grew up happy and carefree.

He was a hard man and hard to live with but we're grateful.

His family is similar.

My father did a lot of jobs in his life and never established himself anywhere.

He never married again and has no other children.

His sisters had three sons, one was married, one was not.

I used to have only older cousins by my paternal family.

Now, I have some younger cousins.

My mother's sister has a daughter who is eleven years younger than me.

My maternal uncle has two children : a son who was born fifteen years later than me and a still younger daughter.

Another maternal aunt has two sons but I can't even remember when they birthedwere born.

My cousin on my mother's side has a son.

He's very cute!

I'm single.

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Korossol Into The Ring 3


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This is harder with prompts... Hello again !


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I will try to make this longer than before...


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I have a brother who is ten years younger than me.


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He's living in continental France and I'm in the Carribeans.


He's living in continental France and I'm in the Carribbeans.

He's married and has three daughters.


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I'm happy for him.


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He has the work that he likes.


He has the worka job that he likes.

I think this would be a better way to say it

My mother miss them all fiercely though.


My mother misses them all fiercely though.

I have five aunts and three uncles, some I rarely see.


I have five aunts and three uncles, some of whom I rarely see.

I have a mother which I'm very close to, a father and a stepfather.


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My parents are divorced.


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My father has older twin sisters.


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My stepfather has two brothers and a sister.


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My mother has two sisters and a brother.


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My maternal grandmother was a teacher, as her father before her.


My maternal grandmother was a teacher, as was her father before her.

All that side of my family reads a lot, writes very well and cares for culture and intellectual enrichment.


All that side of my family reads a lot, writes very well and cares for cultureal and intellectual enrichment.

Not sure if you mean to say "culture" and "intellectual enrichment" or "cultural and intellectual enrichment"

My stepfather was very poor when he was young.


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He fought all his life to have comfort and luxuries.


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He worked hard and gaves us a lot to enjoy.


He worked hard and gaves us a lot to enjoy.

Because of him we grew up happy and carefree.


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He was a hard man and hard to live with but we're grateful.


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His family is similar.


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My father did a lot of jobs in his life and never established himself anywhere.


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He never married again and has no other children.


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His sisters had three sons, one was married, one was not.


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I used to have only older cousins by my paternal family.


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My mother's sister has a daughter who is eleven years younger than me.


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My maternal uncle has to children : a son who was born fifteen years later than me and a still younger daughter.


My maternal uncle has two children : a son who was born fifteen years later than me and a still younger daughter.

Another maternal aunt has two sons I can't even remember when they birthed.


Another maternal aunt has two sons but I can't even remember when they birthedwere born.

My cousin on my mother's side has a son.


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He's very cute!


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I'm single.


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