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Korossol

April 21, 2021

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Korossol Into The Ring 21

I have so many things to do today! I'm very late for some, my week hasn't been easy. But I'm pretty sure I won't be able to complete my list. First, I have the flu. Nothing bad, but I had the headache from Hell for days. My eyes still burn and steadily staring at my screen certainly doesn't help. No, it's not Covid. Yes, I'm sure. But it's not pleasant and I'm getting tired of being sick. As would everyone .
As I am an independent worker, I work at home, which helps. As you probably guessed, I work mostly on my computer, which doesn't.
Today, I was supposed to write 1500 words on any of the three stories I am trying to finish. I had no idea how, though, so I began another one.
I wrote 300 words on a short story I have to send to a contest on may 15. The theme is "uchronies" which means "How would the world be if an important event in History was changed?" Lots of uchronies in the past have been about World War 2 and what would have happened if the Germans had won. A comment I made on this site gave me an idea and I'm writing about the "Back to Africa" movement and its consequences in time.
I should have washed the attic's stairs which are getting disgusting. I haven't. I probably won't today.
I wrote 250 words for Langcorrect. Twice because I couldn't write yesterday.
I washed my bedroom's and the terrace's floor.
I'm supposed to exercise every day. I'm not sure about today. I'll try.
I'm supposed to correct for other people and I want to, I really want to but this challenge is kicking my ass and I can't find the time to do everything I should...
It's only 12:40. I'll see what I can do later...

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Korossol Into The Ring 21

I have so many things to do today!

I'm very late for some,; my week hasn't been easy.

I would use a semicolon, or split into two separate sentences.

But I'm pretty sure I won't be able to complete my list.

First, I have the flu.

Nothing bad, but I had the headache from Hhell for days.

As would everanyone in this situation.

The "everyone" gives me a sense that something is missing. You've not introduced "everyone" yet in this document, so isn't clear to me who you are referring to.

As I am an independent worker, I and am able to work at home, which helps.

As you probably guessed, I work mostly on my computer, which doesn't.

Today, I was supposed to write 1500 words on any of the three stories I am trying to finish.

I wrote 300 words on a short story I have to send to a contest on mMay 15.

I washed the floors of my bedroom's and the terrace's floor.

Korossol Into The Ring 21


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I have so many things to do today!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm very late for some, my week hasn't been easy.


I'm very late for some,; my week hasn't been easy.

I would use a semicolon, or split into two separate sentences.

But I'm pretty sure I won't be able to complete my list.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First, I have the flu.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nothing bad, but I had the headache from Hell for days.


Nothing bad, but I had the headache from Hhell for days.

My eyes still burn and steadily staring at my screen certainly doesn't help.


No, it's not Covid.


Yes, I'm sure.


But it's not pleasant and I'm getting tired of being sick.


As would everyone .


As would everanyone in this situation.

The "everyone" gives me a sense that something is missing. You've not introduced "everyone" yet in this document, so isn't clear to me who you are referring to.

As I am an independent worker, I work at home, which helps.


As I am an independent worker, I and am able to work at home, which helps.

As you probably guessed, I work mostly on my computer, which doesn't.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I was supposed to write 1500 words on any of the three stories I am trying to finish.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had no idea how, though, so I began another one.


I wrote 300 words on a short story I have to send to a contest on may 15.


I wrote 300 words on a short story I have to send to a contest on mMay 15.

The theme is "uchronies" which means "How would the world be if an important event in History was changed?"


Lots of uchronies in the past have been about World War 2 and what would have happened if the Germans had won.


A comment I made on this site gave me an idea and I'm writing about the "Back to Africa" movement and its consequences in time.


I should have washed the attic's stairs which are getting disgusting.


I haven't.


I probably won't today.


I wrote 250 words for Langcorrect.


Twice because I couldn't write yesterday.


I washed my bedroom's and the terrace's floor.


I washed the floors of my bedroom's and the terrace's floor.

I'm supposed to exercise every day.


I'm not sure about today.


I'll try.


I'm supposed to correct for other people and I want to, I really want to but this challenge is kicking my ass and I can't find the time to do everything I should...


It's only 12:40.


I'll see what I can do later...


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