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April 2, 2021

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Tell us about your hobbies. What do you like and dislike? Intermediate and advanced learners: Tell us exactly why you like or dislike those hobbies and how your hobbies have changed over the years.
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I don't have many hobbies. I'm lazy and easily distracted, which doesn't help to maintain an activity. I read a lot, online and on paper. I write a lot too, both fanfictions and original works. I am a youtube addict, I watch mostly cinema critics, stupid lists and vlogs. What interest me is always changing so I'm rarely bored. I'm really not good with my hands so no art, I'm an introvert (also containment) so no group activities. I'm very boring, actually! And I don't really know what to say.
I engage in short stories competitions because it motivate me to continue working on texts (I write easily but don't always persist.) I write fanfiction to destress and also because it's fun to write what you want how you want it. I'm getting better. But it has been years. I used to tell myself long, interesting stories to get myself to sleep. But now that I want to write them I get lazy and endings are always a problem. Which is annoying, because as a reader, I despite authors who never finish anything! Oh ! When I write, I often hear the voice of my inner-reader. She's my hardest critic. "We already saw that million times." "Can you get more boring?" "Wait, didn't we read that in Hannah?" She's my first beta-reader, truthfully. So I feel obligated to make an effort, to push a little more. I can't go easy with my writing: I read too many excellent books, the gap saddens me.
In the end, I would say that I read a ot of really good books along the years. I also wrote some excellent things, or so I think. I publish fanfiction on some sites.
I also am present on Goodreads and Habitica.
Wow, that was harder than I thought.

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I don't have many hobbies.

I'm lazy and easily distracted, which doesn't help to maintaistay focused on an activity.

I read a lot, online and on paper.

I write a lot too, both fanfictions and original works.

I am a youtube addict, I watch mostly cinema critics, stupid lists, and vlogs.

What interests me is always changing, so I'm rarely bored.

I'm really not good with my hands, so nI don't do art,. I'm an introvert (also containment), so noI don't like group activities.

I'm very boring, actually!

And I don't really know what to say.

I engage in short storiesy competitions because it motivate me to continue working on texts, (I write easily but I don't always persist.) I write fanfiction to destress and also because it's fun to write what you want and how you want it.

I'm getting better.

But it has been years.

I used to tell myself long, interesting stories to get myself to sleep.

But now that I want to write them, I get lazy, and the endings are always a problem.

WThichs is annoying, because, as a reader, I despitse authors who never finish anything!

'which' is a bit weird at the start of a sentence, you could connect this to the last sentence with a , and use which

Oh !

When I write, I often hear the voice of my inner-readerself.

She's my hardest critic.

"We already saw that a million times."

"Can you get more boring?"

"Wait, didn't we read that in Hannah?"

STruthfully, she's my first beta-reader, truthfully.

So, I feel obligated to make an effort, and to push a little more.

I can't go easy with my writing:; I read too many excellent books, that the gap saddens me.

; for joining related sentences together
: for listing things

In the end, I would say that I have read a lot of really good books along the years.

I also wrote some excellent things, or so I think.

I publish my fanfictions on some sites.

I am also am present on Goodreads and Habitica.

Wow, that was harder than I thought.

She's my hardest critic.

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"We already saw that million times."

"We already saw that a million times."

When I write, I often hear the voice of my inner-reader.

When I write, I often hear the voice of my inner-readerself.

Korossol Into The Ring 2

I don't have many hobbies.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm lazy and easily distracted, which doesn't help to maintain an activity.

I'm lazy and easily distracted, which doesn't help to maintaistay focused on an activity.

I read a lot, online and on paper.

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I write a lot too, both fanfictions and original works.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am a youtube addict, I watch mostly cinema critics, stupid lists and vlogs.

I am a youtube addict, I watch mostly cinema critics, stupid lists, and vlogs.

What interest me is always changing so I'm rarely bored.

What interests me is always changing, so I'm rarely bored.

I'm really not good with my hands so no art, I'm an introvert (also containment) so no group activities.

I'm really not good with my hands, so nI don't do art,. I'm an introvert (also containment), so noI don't like group activities.

I'm very boring, actually!

I'm very boring, actually!

And I don't really know what to say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I engage in short stories competitions because it motivate me to continue working on texts (I write easily but don't always persist.) I write fanfiction to destress and also because it's fun to write what you want how you want it.

I engage in short storiesy competitions because it motivate me to continue working on texts, (I write easily but I don't always persist.) I write fanfiction to destress and also because it's fun to write what you want and how you want it.

I'm getting better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it has been years.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to tell myself long, interesting stories to get myself to sleep.

I used to tell myself long, interesting stories to get myself to sleep.

But now that I want to write them I get lazy and endings are always a problem.

But now that I want to write them, I get lazy, and the endings are always a problem.

Which is annoying, because as a reader, I despite authors who never finish anything!

WThichs is annoying, because, as a reader, I despitse authors who never finish anything!

'which' is a bit weird at the start of a sentence, you could connect this to the last sentence with a , and use which

Oh !

Oh !

"Can you get more boring?"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Wait, didn't we read that in Hannah?"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She's my first beta-reader, truthfully.

STruthfully, she's my first beta-reader, truthfully.

So I feel obligated to make an effort, to push a little more.

So, I feel obligated to make an effort, and to push a little more.

I can't go easy with my writing: I read too many excellent books, the gap saddens me.

I can't go easy with my writing:; I read too many excellent books, that the gap saddens me.

; for joining related sentences together : for listing things

In the end, I would say that I read a ot of really good books along the years.

In the end, I would say that I have read a lot of really good books along the years.

I also wrote some excellent things, or so I think.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I publish fanfiction on some sites.

I publish my fanfictions on some sites.

I also am present on Goodreads and Habitica.

I am also am present on Goodreads and Habitica.

Wow, that was harder than I thought.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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