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May 31, 2021

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Keeping making efforts

Recently, I have to catch up on things which is my work, studying English. On top of that, I want to study the stock market, do my hobbies, and hang out with my friends. However, it is difficult for me to do all things I want. After I finish my work, I'm always tired. So, I only do a few things I want to do. I understand that I can't do all things I want in a day, but I want to do as much as possible. Because of that, I have to make schedules closely.

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Keeping making efforts

Recently, I've haved to catch up on things which is my work, studying English.

On top of that, I want to study the stock market, do my hobbies, and hang out with my friends.

However, it is difficult for me to do all the things I want.

AfterEvery time I finish my work, I'm always tired.

So, I only do a few of the things I want to do.

I understand that I can't do all everythings I want in a day, but I want to do as much as possible.

Because of that, I have to make thorough schedules closely.

Because of that, I have to make schedules closearefully.

Keeping making efforts


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Recently, I have to catch up on things which is my work, studying English.


Recently, I've haved to catch up on things which is my work, studying English.

On top of that, I want to study the stock market, do my hobbies, and hang out with my friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, it is difficult for me to do all things I want.


However, it is difficult for me to do all the things I want.

After I finish my work, I'm always tired.


AfterEvery time I finish my work, I'm always tired.

So, I only do a few things I want to do.


So, I only do a few of the things I want to do.

I understand that I can't do all things I want in a day, but I want to do as much as possible.


I understand that I can't do all everythings I want in a day, but I want to do as much as possible.

Because of that, I have to make schedules closely.


Because of that, I have to make schedules closearefully.

Because of that, I have to make thorough schedules closely.

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