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SummerTeaWater

April 2, 2021

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Keep my mind from burnout

This week, I got too many works to do.

I decided to two works originally.
I will join a SW training course that is 6.5 months course from Apr to Oct.
I have a plan to a team leader of a SW project as well.

Now I have double.
I decided to have one more SW project as a team leader because of urgent issues.
My part leader assigned me a Mega project that is difficult for me.
Regarding my experiences, they will be able to make me burnout.

Thankfully, my friend told me a quote.
"Just zoning out when your brain is too complex.
Many thoughts like worrying my future, concerning with other people don't help your condition.
Rather you could be exhausted by the thought."

I always count on his opinions, so I will try to follow his word.

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Keeping my mind from burnout

This week, I gothave too manyuch works to do.

We don't tend to pluralize work when talking about it generally. However, when talking about an artist's works of art, we might.

I decided to do two wortasks originally.

You could also say projects. Again, "works" sounds a bit unnatural.

I will join a SW training course that is 6.5 months course from April to October.

I would write out the full names of months.

I have a plan to be a team leader of an SW project as well.

Now I have double the work.

It's better to specify what has doubled.

I decided to have one more SW project as a team leader because of urgent issues.

My part leader assigned me a Megalarge project that is difficult for me.

This sounds a bit more natural.

Regarding my experiences, they will be ableare enough to make me burnout.

Thankfully, my friend told me a quote.

"Just zoninge out when your brain is too complex.

Many thoughts like worrying myabout your future, or concerning yourself with other people don't help your condition.

Just keeping the subject consistent here :)

Rather you could be exhausted by the thought.

I always count on his opinions, so I will try to follow his word.

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SummerTeaWater

April 5, 2021

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Thanks for your comment :)

Keep my mind from burnout


Keeping my mind from burnout

This week, I got too many works to do by July.


I decided to two works originally, but they are increased double.


I will join a SW training course that starts from Apr to Oct.


And I have a plan to a team leader of a SW project.


During this week, I decided to have one more SW project as a team leader.


My formal part leader assigned me a Mega project.


Regarding my experiences, they will be able to make me burnout.


Regarding my experiences, they will be ableare enough to make me burnout.

Thankfully, my friend told me a quote.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Just zoning out when your brain is too complex.


"Just zoninge out when your brain is too complex.

Many thoughts like worrying my future, concerning with other people don't help your condition.


Many thoughts like worrying myabout your future, or concerning yourself with other people don't help your condition.

Just keeping the subject consistent here :)

Rather you could be exhausted by the thought.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"


I always count on his opinions, so I will try to follow his word.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I decided to two works originally.


I decided to do two wortasks originally.

You could also say projects. Again, "works" sounds a bit unnatural.

But now I have double.


I decided to have one more SW project as a team leader.


My formal part leader assigned me a Mega project that is difficult for me.


I will join a SW training course that is 6.5 months course from Apr to Oct.


I will join a SW training course that is 6.5 months course from April to October.

I would write out the full names of months.

I have a plan to a team leader of a SW project as well.


I have a plan to be a team leader of an SW project as well.

I decided to have one more SW project as a team leader because of urgent issues.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I have double.


Now I have double the work.

It's better to specify what has doubled.

This week, I got too many works to do.


This week, I gothave too manyuch works to do.

We don't tend to pluralize work when talking about it generally. However, when talking about an artist's works of art, we might.

My part leader assigned me a Mega project that is difficult for me.


My part leader assigned me a Megalarge project that is difficult for me.

This sounds a bit more natural.

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