March 19, 2024
Keep Healthy
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022. It was easy for me to get a cold or flu and feel tired last year.
That's when I realized the importance of keeping healthy, so I started to change my daily routine and hiking.
My New Year resolved to upgrade my daily habits and exercise habits.
It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practice.
保持健康
自从2022年底第一次感染新冠之后，我变得有些虚弱了。去年，我很容易感冒或得流感，还总觉得累。
那也是我意识到保持健康的重要性的时候，于是我开始改变我的日常，也开始了徒步。
我今年的新年计划之一，是继续优化我的日常习惯和锻炼习惯。
有点难，但我在尽力去做。
ALSO POSSIBLE: Keeping Healthy
NOTE: There is a nuance between "Keep Healthy" and "Keeping Healthy." (I could explain it in Japanese or Chinese, but do not know what your native language. I wish that information was displayed on this website's format.)
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022.
It was easy for me to get a cold or fluALSO POSSIBLE: I got a lot of colds and feelt tired last year.
That's when I realized the importance of keeping healthy, so I started to change my daily routine and hiking.
My New Year resolved to upgradution to improve my daily habits and exercise habitsmore.
MORE SUCCINCTLY: It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practice.
Feedback
Hope you feel better! Many people around became tired after catching COVID-19.
March 20, 2024
Thank you! I feel better recently.
My native language is Chinese, and you can discuss Chinese language and literature with me if you want to.
Keeping Healthy
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022.
ILast year it was easy for me to get a cold or flu and feel tired last year.
That's when I realized the importance of keeping healthy, so I started to change my daily routine and started hiking.
My New Year's resolved to upgradution is to streamline my daily habits and exercise habitsroutine.
It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practice.
March 19, 2024
Thank you so much!
Keep Healthy
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022.
It was easy for me to get a cold or flu andor feel tired lasthat year.
That's when I realized the importance of keeping myself healthy, so I started to change my daily routine and I started hiking.
My New Year resolvedution was to upgrade my daily habits and exercise habits.
It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practice.
Feedback
I hope you succeed !
March 19, 2024
Thank you!
I’m working on it right now.
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022.
It was easy for me to getcatch a cold or the flu and feel tired last year.
fixed expressions "catch a cold" and "the flu"
That's when I realized the importance of keepstaying healthy, so I started to change my daily routine and got into hiking.
"staying healthy" is better
"got into hiking" = became interested in hiking and started doing it as a habit
My New Year's resolvedution was to upgrade my daily habits and exercise habitsmore.
saying "habits" twice feels strange when they're related, so i changed this so you only say it once
It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practice.
March 19, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections and feedback!
I learned a lot from them.
I became a little weak after my first COVID-19 infection at the end of 2022.
This is grammatically OK, but I would personally say:
I became a little weak after ___ getting infected with COVID-19 for the first time ___ at the end of 2022
It was easy for me to get aAll of last year, I easily caught colds or the flu and often feelt tired last year.
Since you talked about time at the end of sentence 1, it emphasizes the contrast / makes it a bit easier to read if you also talk about time in the beginning of sentence 2.
With "cold" we normally say "catch" not "get"
That's when I realized the importance of keeping healthy, so. I started to change my daily routine and go hiking.
My New Year resolved to upgrad's Resolution was to improve my daily habits and exercise habits.
"upgrade" normally means "get rid of something tangible and replace it with something better" — it's normally use with physical objects (I upgraded my computer's GPU)
"improve" just means "make better" and it's much more flexible / you can "improve" pretty much anything
It's a little difficult, but I am trying my best to practicstay consistent / get it done.
Your original sentence was OK, but I changed the verb so it is closer to "尽力去做"
Feedback
Almost perfect : ) nice job, and good luck with improving your habits! Health is indeed important
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and feedback based on my Chinese version! I really learned a lot from them.
Wish you all good health!
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It was easy for me to get a cold or flu and feel tired last year.
Since you talked about time at the end of sentence 1, it emphasizes the contrast / makes it a bit easier to read if you also talk about time in the beginning of sentence 2. With "cold" we normally say "catch" not "get" It was easy for me to fixed expressions "catch a cold" and "the flu" It was easy for me to get a cold or flu
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