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nah13

Feb. 21, 2026

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First time being an adult, kinda nervous

Hello again, my friends. Now, I have a new routine. Now I am a full time worker and a college student. I wake up 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work. I start my work 8am and have lunch break 12am. I go back to my house 5pm and have a shower. I study and then go to sleep. These days, in my free time, I play Ts4. I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?). And now I have a desktop! I'm so happy of that.Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too.

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Now I am now a full time worker and a college student.

Putting "Now" at the start of the sentence can come off as pretty forceful or attention grabbing. It's fine in the first sentence, but doing it multiple sentences in a row comes across a bit strong.

I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I start my work at 8am and have lunch break at 12apm.

12am is midnight, 12pm is noon.

I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

These days, in my free time, I play Ts4 (The Sims 4?).

I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?)/run it.

"play" is fine, it can sound a little casual when you're talking about the computer doing it rather than the person, "run" is a little more general purpose.

I'm so happy ofabout that.

Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read tooeither.

"either" is used more often than "too" in a negative context.

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nah13

Feb. 25, 2026

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Thank you sm! I always forget to put 'at' in my sentences T-T. And now I finally learned that is 12pm, not 12 am. Thx

First time being an adult,; kinda nervous

Hello again, my friends.

Now, I have a new routine.

Now I am a full time worker and a college student.

I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12apm.

I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

I study, and then go to sleep.

These days, in my free time, I play The Sims 4 (Ts4).

I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (? it (or run it).

And now I have a desktop!

I'm so happy ofabout that.

Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too(in addition to everything else).

I'm not sure what "sm" is

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nah13

Feb. 25, 2026

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Thank you! 'sm' was an abbreviation of 'so much'

I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12am.

I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

I've always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?).

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Sorry, I don't really know anything about tech or gaming.

I'm so happy of that.

Here are two possible sentences that are more natural:
That makes me so happy.
I'm so happy about that.

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nah13

Feb. 25, 2026

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Thank you!!

First time being an adult, kinda nervous


First time being an adult,; kinda nervous

Hello again, my friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now, I have a new routine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I am a full time worker and a college student.


Now I am a full time worker and a college student.

Now I am now a full time worker and a college student.

Putting "Now" at the start of the sentence can come off as pretty forceful or attention grabbing. It's fine in the first sentence, but doing it multiple sentences in a row comes across a bit strong.

I wake up 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.


I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.

I start my work 8am and have lunch break 12am.


I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12am.

I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12apm.

I start my work at 8am and have lunch break at 12apm.

12am is midnight, 12pm is noon.

I go back to my house 5pm and have a shower.


I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.

I study and then go to sleep.


I study, and then go to sleep.

These days, in my free time, I play Ts4.


These days, in my free time, I play The Sims 4 (Ts4).

These days, in my free time, I play Ts4 (The Sims 4?).

I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?).


I've always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?).

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Sorry, I don't really know anything about tech or gaming.

I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (? it (or run it).

I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?)/run it.

"play" is fine, it can sound a little casual when you're talking about the computer doing it rather than the person, "run" is a little more general purpose.

And now I have a desktop!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm so happy of that.


I'm so happy of that.

Here are two possible sentences that are more natural: That makes me so happy. I'm so happy about that.

I'm so happy ofabout that.

I'm so happy ofabout that.

Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too.


Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too(in addition to everything else).

I'm not sure what "sm" is

Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read tooeither.

"either" is used more often than "too" in a negative context.

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